Talk:Bachelor herd

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Hello! My name is Amelia and I'll be editing this article for a class assignment. I'm planning to add citations to the material that is already on the page, as well as adding subsections for particular animals for which research has been completed on bachelor herds, particularly red deer and muskoxen. Please let me know if you have any questions or suggestions for me! Acrabtree38 (talk) 14:12, 22 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Hi everyone! I've actually added sections about bachelor herds in impala, seals, and Cape mountain zebras. Please let me know if you have any suggestions/improvements. I've also added citations for some of the material in the introductory paragraph and will be adding a few more species-subsections as I find reputable information! Acrabtree38 (talk) 18:35, 17 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Hello everyone! I added one more section about red deer. I feel like these four sections describe some of the different types of bachelor herds. This about concludes my work for my class assignment. Thank you and please let me know if there is anything you would like to suggest or improve! Acrabtree38 (talk) 23:25, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Acrabtree38. Peer reviewers: Abm213, Agoc.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 15:11, 16 January 2022 (UTC)

Amelia's Peer Review
I think that the original article is very sparse in terms of facts, which leaves a wide opening for the addition of new content. It's a great idea to focus on some different organisms that form bachelor herds as the original is very broad and could benefit from some species specific examples and possibly how they differ from each other. Another addition that could be made (if the sources are available) would be the possible evolutionary benefits to forming these herds and the costs that may come with it.

Abm213 (talk) 16:06, 23 October 2017 (UTC)