Talk:Backlash (2006)/to do


 * Expand the lead a bit more to better summarize the article. An article of that size should have two full paragraphs, which means more than a sentence or two.
 * Merge the shorter paragraphs in the Event and Aftermath sections. Another choice is to expand them with a few more sentences, but IMO merging takes a lot less effort and works just as well.
 * All the paragraphs in the Aftermath section begin with "In (date)". Diversify for more interesting reading.
 * The Kane "May 19" thing confused me. Can that be better explained? What was its purpose or significance?
 * Copyediting in the article is needed.