Talk:Bad Blood (2004)/GA1

GA Review
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 * Two featured bouts were featured on hmm. very very similar to Bad Blood 2003. Featured is repetitive.
 * WWE's brand, a storyline expansion of the promotion where employees are assigned to wrestling brands "{WWE's brand)" isn't a storyline expansion. Raw, SD, and ECW are but "WWE's brand" is not
 * I think I got it.
 * The main rivalry rivalry repetitive.
 * World Heavyweight championship capitalize the "c" in championship
 * On the May 24 episode of Raw, Triple H pleaded with Bischoff to lift Michaels suspension and reinstate him back in the roster, when did Michaels get suspended?
 * the roster were in unsuccessful in doing so. ---> the roster was unsuccessful in doing so.
 * The result of the fight gave Bischoff the authority to schedule how did the result of a fight give him authority?
 * He had enough with HBK and Triple H attacking each other, that he scheduled the HIAC match.
 * Explain that in the article  iMa tth ew (talk) 20:23, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
 * So, your saying that this ---> "The result of the brawl between Michaels and Triple H gave Bischoff the authority to schedule Triple H and Michaels in a Hell in a Cell match at Bad Blood", isn't explained enough? --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 21:27, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
 * I'm just saying that it should be explained how he got the authority, but I guess it's fine.  iMa tth ew (talk) 23:32, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
 * I know what your trying to say, but Bischoff was the GM and had the authority to do whatever he wanted. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 00:02, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
 * World Heavyweight championship again with the lowercase "c"
 * keep consistency with "championship" and "title" pick either "World Heavyweight Championship" or "the title"
 * [performed a chokeslam] lifted Eugene by the throat and slammed him down to the mat remove [performed a chokeslam] and end the link at "slammed"
 * Intercontinental champion the lowercase "c" again (twice more)
 * Intercontinental title keep consistency again (twice more)
 * remove ["killed off"]
 * explain a legend vs. legend killer match
 * This is what I wrote: "a match in which a veteran wrestler is scheduled in a match against a younger wrestler."
 * Fine.  iMa tth ew (talk) 20:23, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
 * make it two on one could use better wording
 * "to Orton's aid."
 * Better.  iMa tth ew (talk) 20:21, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Jargon for removal: spinning heel kick
 * Jargon for removal: Arm trap crossface
 * security wall --> security barricade
 * Remove this sentence "Back and forth action took place between Orton and Benjamin."
 * Intercontinental title again
 * Remove this sentence "The match was controlled by Victoria, Stratus, Lita, and Kim in several spots in the match."
 * Lita then drove Kim's head into the mat, as Lita went for the pin, Stratus rolled Lita up for the pinfall victory, thus Stratus' becoming Women's champion for a fifth time. run-on. split into two sentences.
 * Jargon for removal: feint leg drop
 * How should the sentence read?
 * Not sure, try to come up with a way to re-word it.  iMa tth ew (talk) 20:23, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
 * World Heavyweight title, again
 * The Divas match and the Eugene/Coachman match are preliminary matches. Only the last two are main event matches, so change the first sentence of the WHC paragraph to the first main event match.
 * Triple H got the advantage, as he was able to counter a drop Michaels on his head  do you meant "to counter AND drop Michaels on his head"
 * No, Triple H blocked a piledriver attempt from HBK.
 * Then fix it, as it reads poorly. "counter a drop Michaels"  iMa tth ew (talk) 20:23, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Fixed. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 21:27, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Triple H bring the steel steps and hit Michaels with it change to "with them"
 * and performed a dove with his elbow cocked onto Triple H's chest --> ''and performed a dive with his elbow cocked onto Triple H's chest
 * other on-screen talent should be in the event section
 * There's no room.
 * You have to make room them, move pictures. Because it needs to be in there.  iMa tth ew (talk) 20:21, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Done. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 21:27, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
 * write at the start, that Lita being pregnant was scripted
 * I think I got it.
 * It's fine, could be better, but it's fine.  iMa tth ew (talk) 20:21, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
 * World Heavyweight championship, twice again
 * World Heavyweight title, thrice again
 * This scenario led to Edge to sneak behind Orton and speared him. tense issues
 * Intercontinental championship, again
 * Canadian Online Explorer should be in italics.
 * Actually, it isn't suppose to be in italics.
 * It is that way in SummerSlam (2003), an FA.  iMa tth ew (talk) 20:21, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Well, its not listed here per any sort. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 21:27, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
 * refs are not needed in the results table, and link everything in the table as it is an exception to WP:OVERLINK
 * Online World of Wrestling, PWWEW.net, ProWrestlingHistory, have not been proven reliable, so they all need to be replaced
 * This is for GA, not FA.
 * Nothing is ever "just for GA and not for FA." That doesn't exist. They need to be replaced.  iMa tth ew (talk) 20:21, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Have been replaced. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 21:27, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
 * the publisher needs to be changed from WWE to World Wrestling Entertainment.

Long list, but you have a week to complete it. Best of luck,  iMa tth ew (talk) 17:47, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Got everything, but left some comments. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 20:17, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

GA pass.  iMa tth ew (talk) 23:32, 7 September 2008 (UTC)