Talk:Bad for Me (Meghan Trainor song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:17, 15 December 2022 (UTC)

I will execute this review now --K. Peake 09:17, 15 December 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * Mention in the first sentence that it was from the former's fifth major-label studio album
 * Swap the release and writing/production sentences
 * "as the lead single from" → "as the lead single from the album" with the wikilink
 * "and Vindver produced it." → "and Vindver handled the production." but these credits need to be fully written out in prose
 * ""Bad for Me" has lyrics about" → "it has lyrics about"
 * Add a sentence about critical reception at the start of the second para
 * "performed it on television shows including" → "performed it on television shows in 2022, including"

Background

 * "studio albums in 2020," → "studio albums in 2020:"
 * "as an attempt to "adapt" → "since she was "adapting" per the source
 * "fifth one, in May the following year," → "fifth one in May 2022,"
 * "the lead single from it." → "the lead single from the album."
 * "along with its lyrics" → "along with the lyrics"
 * Mention that it was released as a single and where is the guest vocals part sourced?

Composition

 * Retitle to Composition and lyrics
 * Mention the songwriters here since you have mentioned the producer
 * Pipe keyboards to Keyboard instrument
 * "it at Sterling Sound in" → "the song at Sterling Sound in" with the pipe per MOS:LINK2SECT
 * ""Bad for Me" is a" → "Musically, "Bad for Me" is a"
 * "incorporates the piano" → "incorporates a piano"
 * Pipe acoustic to Acoustic guitar
 * Remove or replace Forbes per WP:FORBES
 * Remove or replace The Breeze per WP:RSSM
 * "to name the subject but dispelled the idea that it" → "to name the subject, but dispelled the idea it"

Reception

 * ""[The song] is a" → ""[The song] ... is a" per the source's full quote
 * "a pop masterpiece", and complimented" → "a pop masterpiece." He also complimented" per MOS:QUOTE
 * Mention that the Adult Contemporary chart is a Billboard one
 * Merge the Adult Top 40 and Canadian Digital Song Sales chart sentences per the overly short length

Music video

 * Merge with the below section and retitle to Promotion per the overly short sizes
 * "In it, Trainor and Swims" → "In the video, Trainor and Swims"

Live performances

 * Make this the second para of the above section
 * "On August 24, 2022 they" → "On August 24, 2022, they"

Charts

 * Good

Release history

 * None of these should be sortable
 * Format → Format(s)

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 10:44, 15 December 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks for completing this review so quickly, K. Peake! Everything should be addressed.--NØ 12:43, 15 December 2022 (UTC)
 * Your welcome, however where are the guest vocals sourced on the mention in the body and why is Meghan Trainor not linked to on the Twitter ref? --K. Peake 08:54, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
 * The sentence "features American singer-songwriter Teddy Swims" is included in the Background section and sourced to this. Her recording it as a duet with Swims is also reliably sourced and included in the Composition and lyrics section, and a comment about them sharing vocal chemistry on it from a reliable critic is also present in the Reception section. Introducing a wikilink in the user field of the cite tweet template produces errors so I won't be able to do that one. Regards.--NØ 09:35, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, this looks fine! --K. Peake 10:05, 16 December 2022 (UTC)