Talk:Baelor/GA1

GA Reassessment
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As User:He to Hecuba, who performed the initial Good Article review of this article, has been blocked as the sock of a banned user, I'm going to perform an individual reassessment of this article per this thread at WT:GAN. Comments to follow soon. Mark Arsten (talk) 21:47, 24 February 2012 (UTC)
 * All I ask is that if you identify fixes needed, that I be given at least a week to make them. I am traveling at the moment, and currently am working on improving Fire and Blood (Game of Thrones) per the GA reviewer's suggestions.  Thanks, Jclemens (talk) 03:26, 25 February 2012 (UTC)
 * That's fine, I doubt I'll find anything serious. Mark Arsten (talk) 16:15, 25 February 2012 (UTC)


 * Comments:
 * I made some copyediting changes, feel free to revert if I accidentally introduced errors to the article. (I do that sometimes.)
 * They look fine, thanks. Jclemens (talk) 02:19, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
 * "After some hard bargaining, Frey agrees to allow the Stark army to cross through The Twins and join them against the Lannisters,..." I'm a bit confused, who does "them" refer to here?
 * clarified. Jclemens (talk) 02:19, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Why is the IGN reviewer given his own paragraph? Is there a good way to work him into one of the earlier paragraphs? Mark Arsten (talk) 16:41, 25 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Yeah, moved it up to the end of the first reception paragraph. Jclemens (talk) 02:19, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
 * I'm on the fence about the third paragraph of the lead, I'm not sure if the detail about the previous king is merited. Mark Arsten (talk) 16:45, 25 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Fair enough, moved it into the writing section. Jclemens (talk) 02:19, 26 February 2012 (UTC)


 * Alright, I'm certainly satisfied that this meets the GA critera and am closing the GAR as "Kept". Thanks to everyone who helped. Mark Arsten (talk) 23:37, 26 February 2012 (UTC)