Talk:Bagor, Rajasthan

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I love the photo added and links to other wiki articles it seems very integrated. In order to improve I would try to add more links when the word is not commonly known. for example, "Maharana" is not a super common word and there is already a wiki article about it. The writing level is that which an archeologist or someone with background knowledge, would understand but not dumbed down enough in my opinion. All in all, good work! -Dani — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dani.xcv (talk • contribs) 20:07, 22 March 2018 (UTC)

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Really great article with great information! I would definitely say use more links like for the Kothari River, Panchyati Raaj Act, Panjab National Bank, etc. There are also a couple spots you could add a comma and the first paragraph sounds somewhat jumbled so maybe some proofreading could be done. Lastly, I might add what the three cultural phases of Bagor are? It feels kind of cut off when brought up but not spoken more about. Other than that it was really well put together! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Minnetonka180 (talk • contribs) 22:25, 22 March 2018 (UTC)