Talk:Bajar dengan Djiwa/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Zanimum (talk · contribs) 01:17, 23 July 2014 (UTC)

Passing infobox, lead, "Plot".

Production
 * I added in a he and a semicolon, but feel free to change that. Just a minor break that can be solved multiple ways, whatever you find most natural will work for me.
 * That's fine. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:23, 23 July 2014 (UTC)

Passing "Release and reception"; if there was a standardized rating system in Indonesia back then, you might consider adding that historic perspective to Motion picture rating system some time.

Passing "Release and reception".

Legacy Passing "Explanatory notes", "References", "Works cited", "External links".
 * It sounds like Adnan is in Bajar and Asmara? It would be good to mention him earlier, if so.
 * No. AKG only acted in one film. Reworked. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:23, 23 July 2014 (UTC)

Passing the image, but given the praise for the poster, it's unfortunate a slightly clearer version wasn't available. This one seems to be scanned from a slide, and such has lost some of the definition on the 3D lettering. Wait... now that I write that, I see the would-be poster captioned as if it were an ad. Is it actually an ad from a publication? -- Zanimum (talk) 01:17, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
 * I suspect (but I don't have any proof here) that a lot of what has been recorded as posters were actually full paged ads. Those used in Djantoeng Hati and Mega Mendoeng were reproduced, in full, in Pertjatoeran Doenia dan Film, and the one used in Njai Dasima was in Doenia Film. That being said, I've changed to "poster" as that's the wording used. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:23, 23 July 2014 (UTC)

Pass! -- Zanimum (talk) 01:41, 23 July 2014 (UTC)