Talk:Bakermat

Needs Improvement
This article is not written well. There are long passages of non-cited verbose prose that don't seem to be written by a native English speaker and don't have the right case and tense. It is hard to read, inconsistent and incorrectly paced. Most of the text comes across as biased promotional marketing narrative.

An example: "Both São Paulo and Rio de Janeiro turned into a proper Bakermat-event where an actual Circustent was built to host the nights." (no quotes or citations)

The article could use rewriting to be far more succinct and non-biased.

Also, the article is missing more relevant information about his life. The introduction should say "...Dutch music producer...", etc. 104.37.63.76 (talk) 13:58, 31 May 2023 (UTC)