Talk:Baking in ancient Rome

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Is it just me, or does this article need a major writing style overhaul? Sentence structure is very basic; the average words per sentence (WpS) is 13.3, the longest sentence is 33 words long. For comparison, the article on the First Punic War has an average WpS of 19.42, with some sentences reaching 50 words. This article reads like a See Spot Run book. I'd do it myself, but English is not my first language, and the article has been selected for the DYK list, so I'll welcome other opinions on this. Rizzardi (talk) 13:32, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

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 * Tomb of Eurysaces the Baker - details.jpg