Talk:Baldwin V of Jerusalem/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Robertus Pius (talk · contribs) 16:52, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

Hi there, here’s some things I noticed.


 * "because he was the tallest of the great lords present" needs a source.


 * Western princes refused to come to aid, likely because they could not be offered the crown but, at most, the prospect of a temporary rule on behalf of a minor. - What exactly were they refusing to come to aid for? What aid did Baldwin need?

Besides that I didn’t see anything else needing changes. Very interesting read. Good job!


 * Outcome

On hold.  ✠ Robertus Pius ✠ (Talk • Contribs) 16:52, 15 October 2023 (UTC)
 * My! Robertus Pius, this is the fastest review I have ever got. Thank you for your interest and kind comments. I doubled the citation for the "tallest of the great lords"; it is a quote after all, so it does not hurt to overcite. The quest for aid is explained in the first sentence of the second paragraph. Surtsicna (talk) 19:57, 15 October 2023 (UTC)
 * Ah ok, I see that. I read it through it a few times and for some reason I thought it didn’t sound related to the first sentence, to me it was worded as if the aid was about something else. Or maybe I was just having a brain fart, which is more then likely. Alrighty then, I’m going to read through it one more time just to recheck everything then I think we’re good to go. Definitely deserving of good article status! Kind regards,  ✠ Robertus Pius ✠ (Talk • Contribs) 20:13, 15 October 2023 (UTC)