Talk:Balkan Romani Language

I really like the set up of your page and the categories and order in which you have them in. However, I feel as though the lead section sounds like one separate section of its own, regarding only one topic. Instead you should try to incorporate a couple sentences that sum up the entire purpose of the page. Include a couple brief sentences introducing the topic of its history, geographical distribution, basically all the categories you will be talking about later on. This will help to get an overall feel of what the page will discuss before even reading the page. I also do not see any of your sources being used and sentences cited, I am pretty sure this information came from an outside source. Make sure you cite your information because the point of this is to find outside information and put them all together. Also, make sure your references are in alphabetical order. Be sure to collect a number of viewpoints and include them throughout the page. Overall, good categories and information! Mkay96 (talk) 16:12, 6 April 2017 (UTC)

Promising Start
There is a lot of promise here. I would advise simultaneously "pruning" the article down a bit to remove the least relevant bits, while developing more relevant information (including, most importantly, with proper citations). You have the skeleton of the article, now it is time to properly flesh it out and smooth out the rough edges. Chuck Haberl (talk) 02:42, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

I really want to thank the both of you so much for your feedback, it really helped me progress my article in to something way better. I hope with your help I can bring more attention to the Balkan Romani language so that it does not go extinct because that would really be a big hit on the culture of the whole Balkan region in Europe.Jibrahim23 —Preceding undated comment added 16:08, 4 May 2017 (UTC)