Talk:Bandini 1100 siluro

Article needs serious help
I'm probably breaking a policy by being negative, but the truth cannot be expressed in any other way - the grammar sucks. It was obviously written by someone with a shaky grasp of English (or even worse, an auto-translator). Cleaning up the gammar & spelling of this page is the major task remaining before anyone who cares to bother, and once that is done the article's content will be entirely sufficient for its importance level. Anyone care to help out? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 216.137.195.68 (talk) 22:49, 19 May 2010 (UTC)

Did a bit. More to be done.
Agreed, (4 years later), the article is (still) a bit of a mess. I've done some copy editing and hopefully improved some of the stranger phrasing, but I couldn't readily find much in the way of external references. If anyone has some ...? Confident that my English will pass basic requirements, I've deleted the 'needs better english' tag.I might do some more work on the article later, or do the same sort of thing on the related Bandini articles.

Wayne 15:38, 31 May 2014 (UTC)