Talk:Bandslam/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Zanimum (talk · contribs) 11:38, 10 June 2014 (UTC)

I've watched the film, so I'll review. -- Zanimum (talk) 11:38, 10 June 2014 (UTC)

Home media
 * "In the rest of the world, specified in the countries where the film was released, a DVD was also released between December 2009 and January 2010." Clumsy, slightly repeatitive, and confusing.


 * extra's --> extras (you have two cows, not two cow's)
 * "I Can't Go On, I'll Go on" needs quotation marks, and On needs a capital.
 * "Internationally, a trailer in the language of the country the DVD is released in is also featured." --> "International releases included a trailer in the local language"
 * Fixed. DepressedPer (talk) 02:51, 19 June 2014 (UTC)

Soundtrack
 * Is there an association with Disney beyond the Hollywood Records release? It's strange that the WDP soundtracks exec would be talking; even though this is a soundtrack, and it was released by a Disney company, it's not a WDP soundtrack.
 * Removed it. DepressedPer (talk) 02:52, 19 June 2014 (UTC)

There's a start. -- Zanimum (talk) 21:43, 18 June 2014 (UTC)

Passing Production, after having made a few small alterations.

Marketing
 * I don't see the $10M figure on the IMDb page sourced. That said, IMDb is not always the best source. Any marketing cost reference in Variety or another source?
 * "as part of the film's gimmick" sounds like it's part of an overarching gimmick. The induction was a stunt, but the phrasing was misleading. I've changed it.
 * Changed the source for the marketing budget. DepressedPer (talk) 17:05, 21 June 2014 (UTC)

Always remember to put context. The name of a writer is "whoever", unless you mention their outlet, which likely had greater name recognition. The name of a theatre is "whatever", if you don't say where the theatre is. With quotes, you can make stylistic changes, like italicizing titles. -- Zanimum (talk) 15:24, 21 June 2014 (UTC)

Cast and characters
 * Bowie... early February of what year?

Passing External links.

I think it's just the lead, Plot, and references left. -- Zanimum (talk) 17:53, 25 June 2014 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay, reviewed the rest, passing. -- Zanimum (talk) 00:01, 9 July 2014 (UTC)