Talk:Bangong suture

Review of page by Michael Stevens
Murl The Bangong suture is 10–20 km wide and up to 50 km wide. Difficult to understand. Obduction should be a wiki link to another page, first time not there, but I found it later in the page Basic geology, should be basic Lithology Meso-Tethys forms the oceanic division between the Lhasa and Qiangtang terranes. – Said twice Can you tell whether or not you found the faults that you would expect to see? Or is that information threatening to your former thesis? Label the suture on your image. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mstev18 (talk • contribs) 14:41, 16 November 2011 (UTC)

Post-live wiki review for class by Erin:
The article is well-cited, but can take a bit of a conversational tone at times: "in general", "as previously mentioned", etc. These can be cleaned up to speak with more authority about your subject and make the article flow smoothly without sounding informal. The figures are well done, (and this is a nit-pick, but might be difficult for color-blind persons to see, with all the green?) There does seem to be some confusion (as Michael pointed out) about orientation of some features, just add some descriptors like north, south, southwest, etc. Ewalde1 (talk) 05:09, 17 November 2011 (UTC)

Oh HAI
Your figures are very nice. I agree with Erin in that the article is pretty technical, whereas on Wikipedia it should maybe take on a more informal tone? You don't need to change much, just a few "therefore"s or other smoothing phrases, like the ones erin mentioned. A little thing on the references: 'et al' should be limited to in-text citations. When you cite at the end of an article it needs to be all of the authors. But, other than that the references look nice. Lastly, as far as things you could add, what about a map showing where in Tibet this suture is located? Since you can use government images, I believe all you would need to do is find a map online (check the US state dept) and then you could simply add on to it, and just say it is a derivative of a state department map when you put it on wikipedia (Graeme told me to do this with my map, so you can look at it if you want).

HOLLA Cshirc1 (talk) 13:25, 17 November 2011 (UTC)Cshirc1

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