Talk:Bangui/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Smarojit (talk · contribs) 12:05, 28 July 2013 (UTC)

I shall review this article. -- smaro jit  HD 12:05, 28 July 2013 (UTC)

-- smaro jit  HD 15:52, 30 July 2013 (UTC)

Additional comment: Any reason why the three sentences on health care are provided in the "economy" section? -- smaro jit  HD 16:04, 30 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Shifted to a separate section on Health.


 * Dr.Blofeld and myself were involved in the DYK. I also edited and enlarged the bibliography section and corrected some other sections before it was posted on GA. I have replied to all the observations. I hope it is ok now.-- Nvvchar . 23:16, 30 July 2013 (UTC)

Comment: Please ensure that there aren't any instances of overlinking in the prose. Currently, there are several such instances. Also, the third and fourth mention of "AIDS" has been wikilinked, while the first one hasn't been. So please link only the first occurrence of the word. -- smaro jit  HD 02:19, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. Hopefully, I have removed extra links and addressed all other issues.-- Nvvchar . 04:39, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Will come back later in the day after finding new sources for the dead links.-- Nvvchar . 15:04, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Addressed all other issues raised by you.-- Nvvchar . 19:28, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Good job. I am passing the article. :) -- smaro jit  HD 05:31, 1 August 2013 (UTC)

Comments from other users
Citations 31, 32, 55, and 56 do not work.-- Gilderien Talk&#124;List of good deeds 23:58, 29 July 2013 (UTC)


 * All the references are given in the bibliography and one reference is added in the main text. -- Nvvchar . 23:18, 30 July 2013 (UTC)