Talk:Bara Gumbad/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:04, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

Hi! Will review this. Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 15:04, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

Update: A bit busy now, I think I will be able to get to this only by the end of this week. Cheers! Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 18:44, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

You appear to be inactive since January 2016. I will seek help at WP:WikiProject India. If there is no response within a week from now, I would be forced to fail this nomination. Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 11:12, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * Citations are typically excluded from the lead unless controversial statements are involved
 * Ensure that all facts in the lead are also mentioned in the main text
 * 400 meters South-West Convert template needed twice in this line. Say "southwest"
 * village Khairpur No italics needed

History

 * constructed in 1490 Say AD/BC
 * It's construction It's means "it is". Write "Its"
 * Add a word on who Sikandar Lodi was
 *  tells the date "gives" is better than "tells"
 * During the rule of Sikander Lodhi Why link him again? Also, you are referring to him differently now.
 * Say Lodi or Lodhi
 *  inaugurated by Lady Willingdon Who was she?

Construction and architecture

 * The platform measures 30 metres (98 ft) (East-West) and 25 metres (82 ft) (North-South) No caps needed for the directions.
 * Duplicate link: Shisha Gumbad
 * A string of citations is not needed unless the claims are very strong (WP:OVERCITE). I would recommend using at most three in each case.

Location

 * No italics for Khairpur.

These done, I would be happy to promote this. Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 11:12, 1 April 2016 (UTC)


 * I've addressed these issues. utcursch &#124; talk 20:09, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for resolving the issues. I believe the article can be promoted now. Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 08:18, 2 April 2016 (UTC)