Talk:Barbara Bosworth

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 22 January 2020 and 1 May 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Peer reviewers: Amanda.j.michaud.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 17:49, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Review comments from AfC process
It's still pretty promotional in tone in places, imo -- it reads a bit like a patchwork between a promotional piece and a more-neutral entry, presumably more than one author at work?-- and far too long. It's a bit out of my area but I believe the subject is probably notable; see which makes her achievements clearer. The CV link {ref 1) has been taken down so the Chair is unsourced [eta: now fixed] also ref 9 to the Smithsonian. Ref 10 checks out, but needs to be attributed to Andy Grundberg in Grand Street. A lot of the refs, though not all, are to what she says about her work, in interviews (published in reputable places), and I think this material needs substantial pruning. Espresso Addict (talk) 08:52, 1 April 2018 (UTC)
 * The 17 April 2017 deleted version by Bosworthentry is pretty similar to the first draft version submitted, also by Bosworthentry. However there's an AfD keep Articles for deletion/Barbara Bosworth on a version that was later deleted for being created by a blocked user, which is completely different (much shorter, encyclopedic tone); I very much doubt they're the same person. Espresso Addict (talk) 09:21, 1 April 2018 (UTC)