Talk:Barbara Sykes (artist)

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 29 January 2020 and 5 May 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Mrlixiaoye, Aalmuk. Peer reviewers: A Peresie, Nolanbarry.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 17:50, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review
I think this is going well, maybe looking at roger eberts page in breaking it up might help in seperating everthing and figuring out what you still want to add. Also you might want to separate your lead or create one (Im not sure which is which ) AlyaDuusu (talk) 16:34, 4 March 2018 (UTC)

This is a very great start. I can definitely get the sense of how influential she is by the achievements that you've presented. I see that you have an outline in which to categorize the information so that's good :-) User:Jceval

I think the improvements you've made on the article are pretty good. Something I'd suggest is including more sources, especially in the Career section (I'm saying this based on Wikipedia's suggestion of using one source per sentence - if you don't have sources to add, I think that's fine. Just see what you can do.) Also, I like how you've used a table for the List of Works, however I think it would benefit from having a short description of each work in the table OR making a section for List of Works, having each work be a sub-section, and adding descriptions in that way. Other than that, I think you've done a good job on the edit. DanaLangston —Preceding undated comment added 19:47, 4 March 2019 (UTC)

Review
This is a good start and looks like you plan to develop further following your outline (though you should have a full draft at this point). Consider adding books to your source list -- Sykes-Dietz is included in numerous books on Women's, feminist, and video art. This will help you to round out her career and the nature of her influence. You should also redevelop your lead -- explain how Sykes-Dietz is influential and cite accordingly. Finally, make sure to format your bibliography so that it follows Wikipedia standards. Review the guidelines for citations and sources here WP:CS. AmyDeer (talk) 03:36, 7 March 2018 (UTC)