Talk:Barbara Van Cleve

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AfC comment This article needs cleaning up for the non encyclopedic tone and non WP:NPOV such as " raising fine cattle" "most respected dude ranches in the west" " young Barbara" "according to her, was the largest of such agency in Chicago" "she decided to put herself to the test" The quotes from the subject are not necessary. It would be better to split the education and career into 2 sections Domdeparis (talk) 15:34, 28 September 2017 (UTC)