Talk:Barbertonite

Introduction
The language of the introduction paragraph (the first paragraph) needs to be written in a clearer prose style, that can be more easily understood. The introduction is the first section before the table of contents. See Your first article and WP:Five pillars. These can be very helpful for editing articles. Steve Quinn (formerly Ti-30X) (talk) 06:50, 3 December 2009 (UTC)