Talk:Barbuda Land Acts

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Sarahdavies3. Peer reviewers: CarletonFP.

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Peer Review
Hi Sarah,

After carefully peer reviewing you article some of my recommendations on how to improve your article are as the following….

1) I would add one or two sentences to your lead (to make it stronger). Adding details from your ‘Recent Developments’ paragraph, I believe could improve it and allow readers to get a better grasp of what your article is about.

2) I would also recommend including details about where the islands of Antigua and Barbuda are located (geographically speaking), for people who have never heard of the islands before.

3) Finally my third point which is not a recommendation, simply an observation; under your ‘Communal Land History’ section, paragraph two. You mention, “however, residents are beginning to stray away from communal agricultural methods”. I believe you meant to say stay instead of stray.

Thats it, let me know if you have any questions. CarletonFP (talk) 01:50, 25 November 2017 (UTC)

Thanks for the feedback. I will add to the lead in order to make it stronger and will probably add the information about the location of the islands there as well. I think I am just going to re-work the sentence you mentioned in the third point, as I think it could be written in a more succinct way. Thanks for the feedback. Sarahdavies3 (talk) 22:41, 25 November 2017 (UTC)