Talk:Bardas/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 05:31, 12 March 2014 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 05:31, 12 March 2014 (UTC)


 * No DABs and external links are good.
 * Images appropriately licensed.
 * In circa 855, Bardas married This reads a little oddly; suggest dropping the "in".
 * Finally, in spring 866 Bardas began Missing comma after 866.
 * Now that I look at it more deeply, the phrasing of time in this paragraph could be clarified. Exactly when did Inderina get married to Basil? Early in 866, I suspect. And the "finally" presupposes a longer sequence of intermediate steps than just one. So I'd drop that and add early 866 for the marriage.
 * Nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:41, 16 March 2014 (UTC)


 * As usual, thanks for taking the time. I've rephrased a bit in the sentences in question, both for the dates and to clarify Bardas' position further, have a look. Constantine  ✍  07:21, 18 March 2014 (UTC)