Talk:Barge of the Dead/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: 1989 (talk · contribs) 08:08, 10 June 2017 (UTC)


 * Thank you for reviewing the article. I believe that I have addressed everything. Have a wonderful rest of your day. Aoba47 (talk) 13:51, 12 June 2017 (UTC)
 * Bullets 3 and 4 on 1a are not addressed yet. -- 1989 14:04, 12 June 2017 (UTC)
 * Thank you for pointing it out, and I apologize for missing those two points. I corrected Bullet 3, but I am not sure what you mean by Bullet 4. In the episode, Torres has a near-death experience and is taken to the Klingon version of Hell, where she sees her mother (Miral). Torres is revived, but wants to do a procedure to put her into a coma to mimic a near-death state to return to Hell to save her mother (Miral). Miral is completely separate from the procedure so I am not fully understanding the point about accepting the procedure. Some clarification would be helpful to better understand how to correct this. Aoba47 (talk) 15:48, 12 June 2017 (UTC)
 * Was Torres taking over her mother's place in response to Miral's opinion? -- 1989 16:18, 12 June 2017 (UTC)
 * Again, I am not certain about you mean by "opinion" in this context? Torres went down to the underworld to save her mother and take her place after seeing her there, not because the mother asked her to do so. Again, the procedure part of it takes place in a completely separate location from the hell/underworld portions of the episode so Miral has not connection to that part. Aoba47 (talk) 16:23, 12 June 2017 (UTC)
 * So if Miral is the mother, and she does not believe her daughter is fully connected to her roots, she let's her take over anyway? If so, please note that in the article. -- 1989 16:42, 12 June 2017 (UTC)
 * Oh, I see your point now. Miral actually resists and objects to her daughter taking her place, with the swap taking place without Miral's consent. Aoba47 (talk) 17:09, 12 June 2017 (UTC)
 * I would note that in the article. -- 1989 17:12, 12 June 2017 (UTC)
 * I added a note about it in the Plot section. Aoba47 (talk) 17:16, 12 June 2017 (UTC)


 * Thank you for making corrections to the article. I can now pass the article. -- 1989 17:24, 12 June 2017 (UTC)