Talk:Barnaby Miln

Neutrality
I think the tone of some of the sections here is too POV. I will wait until after the references are added to make edits to those sections if they have not been changed, but I wanted the tag there. Wperdue (talk) 17:04, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

I have started to remove some of the unsourced claims and opinions as well as weasel words and peacock terms. I added fact tags to the unsourced claims. I also removed the "scandal" section. It's not perfect, but it is much more neutral than it was. Wperdue (talk) 18:08, 27 July 2009 (UTC)