Talk:Barnes Milam/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 16:29, 25 August 2023 (UTC)

I will review. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 16:29, 25 August 2023 (UTC)

Comments
Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 16:41, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
 * I copyedited the article here. Let me know if you disagree with any edits.
 * The lead seems short, maybe add a sentence about his academic administrative career?
 * becoming head principal.[19] He retired at the end of 1971. maybe combine, like principal until he retired at the end of 1971.
 * Spot check: 4, 7, 9, 13, 17, 20
 * The non-newspaper articles need access-dates
 * Ref 7 and 17 needs "agency = Associated Press"
 * I archived the reference links.
 * I believe I've addressed all of the issues. BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:36, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Looks good, passing. « Gonzo fan2007  (talk)  @ 19:39, 25 August 2023 (UTC)