Talk:Baron Maurice de Hirsch's Agricultural Settlements in Argentina

Peer-review
I peer-reviewed your article, let me know if you have any questions.

Emmacmckee (talk) 01:22, 11 April 2023 (UTC)

I also peer-reviewed your article! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Miamiheat12 (talk • contribs) 20:39, 11 April 2023 (UTC)

Lead
"This article will provide information on multiple colonies in Argentina, their struggles, and aspects of Hirsch's personal background that led him to this pursuit" - This is formulated like an academic paper rather than a wiki article. I propose replacing it with a descriptive sentence that mentions the names of the colonies, a short mention of specific challenges and their eventual fate. Dolly City (talk) 15:20, 2 May 2023 (UTC)

Wiki Education assignment: Zionism and the Roads Not Taken 1880-1948
Dolly City (talk) 15:29, 2 May 2023 (UTC)