Talk:Barrackpore Trunk Road/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 15:43, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments "The West Bengal State Highway 1 and State Highway 2 runs through it.[3] " again, we've lost what "it" is here. That's all I have on a very quick first pass. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 16:01, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "along it, like the" say "including" rather than "like".
 * ✅  Saha ❯❯❯  Stay safe    18:42, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "Once the areas around the road..." do you mean in the past?
 * Yes  Saha ❯❯❯  Stay safe    18:42, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "It has a major intersection..." which It? the previous sentence discusses metro stations/lines.
 * Here the intersection refers to Belghoria Expressway (AH1)  Saha ❯❯❯  Stay safe  </b> </b> 18:42, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * I meant what does "It" refer to here, it's unclear. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:47, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Oh. I have corrected it. <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 18:58, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "Barrackpore Chiria More" what is Chiria More?
 * "More" means intersection in Bangla. Chiria More is the name of the intersection. <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 18:42, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * A footnote to explain that would be helpful. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:46, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅ <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 19:18, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "of Barrackpore, Titagarh, Khardaha, Panihati, Kamarhati, Baranagar and" all overlinked.
 * ✅ Linked "baranagar" to "baranagar municipality" <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 18:42, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅ <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 19:19, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "was less than " fewer than.
 * ✅ <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 18:42, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Link flyover.
 * ✅ <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 18:42, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "with National Highway 16 and 19" Highways.
 * "respectively at Dunlop" comma after respectively.
 * "notable mills were" included instead of were. And delete etc.
 * ✅ <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 19:06, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "Other notable landmarks include" "Other notable landmarks along the route include"
 * ✅ <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 19:06, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * BT Road or B.T. Road?
 * Both <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 18:43, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Be consistent. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:46, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅. Acrually the institutes use with dot, so I used the same... <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 19:06, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "Baranagar–Barrackpore Line" unlink Barrackpore, it's confusing and the Kolkatta line 5 is linked above.
 * ✅ <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 19:09, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "As of May 2021, only" not referenced.
 * There is no direct reference for this. Line 1 is operational, and construction for Line 5 never started. I changed it to just 2021. <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 18:51, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "from Palta Waterworks to " don't use two links side by side like this, it's confusing.
 * ✅ <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 18:51, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "Today there are six pipelines of 42–70 in (110–180 cm) diameter" see WP:CURRENTLY and don't link basic English words like "diameter".
 * ✅ <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 19:21, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "5.77 km (3.59 mi)" and "18.1 km (11.2 mi)" be consistent with level of precision.
 * ✅ <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 19:06, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * " 5 point crossing" this was "5-point crossing" earlier.
 * ✅ <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 19:01, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Refs are squashed by the bottom image, consider removing, repositioning or using the clear template.
 * ✅ <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 18:58, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Be consistent, some of your refs have publication dates, some don't.
 * Refs without dates are websites of the institutes/buildings, used as source for their address. <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 19:01, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * That's as maybe, but online sources need publication and/or accessdates. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:33, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * @The Rambling Man: ✅ <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 19:47, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * That's as maybe, but online sources need publication and/or accessdates. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:33, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * @The Rambling Man: ✅ <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 19:47, 29 August 2021 (UTC)


 * @The Rambling Man I have tried to solve the issues stated above. Please check... <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 19:23, 29 August 2021 (UTC)