Talk:Bart the Fink/GA1

GA Review
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I've looked through the article and have a few brief items, they shouldn't take long to address...

Lead:
 * "The title is a play on the film Barton Fink." This should be moved to the end of the last paragraph, not the first one.
 * Please add a mention of the fact that Bob Newhart made a guest appearance in the episode as himself.

Plot:
 * Can you add a very brief mention of Newhart's characters in there? I'm not sure what part he played in the episode so I can't really make any kind of suggestion on the wording...

—  Hunter  Kahn  ( contribs )  14:07, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
 * I will expand the article and clean it up a bit, so don't pass it yet. :)  The Le ft orium  18:05, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Thank god for The Leftorium :P Cheers.  I 'mperator 18:32, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
 * OK, I've cleaned it up a bit now so please take another look. :)  The Le ft orium  19:53, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

A good article is:
 * 1) Well-written: Prose is good, MOS is good.
 * 2) Factually accurate and verifiable: Sources are good, no original research.
 * 3) Broad in its coverage: Covers main aspects, no unneeded detail.
 * 4) Neutral: Yes.
 * 5) Stable: Yes.
 * 6) Illustrated, if possible, by images: Yes.

Nicely done, guys. —  Hunter  Kahn  ( contribs )  22:52, 8 April 2009 (UTC)