Talk:Bart vs. Thanksgiving/GA1

GA Review
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""At the risk of losing my voice, let me just say one more thing: I'm sorry I came.""

- Jacqueline Bouvier

The article does not have serious issues that would warrant a quick-fail. Full review to be commenced shortly, likely tomorrow or Saturday. decltype (talk) 20:35, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

Checking against GA criteria

 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose):
 * The prose is clear and the spelling and grammar are correct.
 * b (MoS):
 * Looks good.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references):
 * b (citations to reliable sources):
 * c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its scope.
 * a (major aspects):
 * b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
 * b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
 * b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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As usual, this article seems to equal the standard of other TV Episode GAs. Here are some minor issues:

"Jay Kogen and Wallace Wolodarsky are the names of two Dallas Cowboys players, a reference to two writers on The Simpsons." This was a bit confusing to me, I had to look up whether they where players or writers. How about "Two of the fictional DC players, JK and WW, are named after [two] writers ...", or something like that.
 * Done.

The Lisa quote about her centerpiece uses ellipses, but where text really omitted from it, or are they used to illustrate slight pauses?
 * Pauses.
 * I changed it into regular punctuation.

IIRC Maggie speaks in the dream sequence. "It's your fault I can't talk" or similar (voiced by Yeardley I presume). Is it worth a mention?
 * It might, but I can't find a reliable source for it.
 * Ah, too bad.

Are you sure the ISBN number is correct?
 * Fixed.

I have watchlisted the article and the review and will respond to improvements as fast as I can. decltype (talk) 07:11, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review!  The Le ft orium  07:59, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

Everything seems to check out now. I did a small ce and tweaked the FUR a little. The plot summary made me remember the entire episode, so I think it's pretty good. Still, I'd like to rewatch the episode before passing it. But I have no more issues, and I definitely think it is GA standard. Good work! (som vanligt) decltype (talk) 09:43, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Okay, everything checks out. The plot section is succint, but is an excellent summary of the episode. GA passed. decltype (talk) 21:03, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much. :)  The Le ft orium  21:14, 12 June 2009 (UTC)