Talk:Bassline (Chris Brown song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Till (talk · contribs) 02:49, 14 October 2012 (UTC)

Hi, I will be reviewing the article. It's been a long wait (a month actually). Till 02:49, 14 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks. — Oz  (talk)   04:34, 14 October 2012 (UTC)

Checking against GA criteria
 * Try to incorporate the whole lead into one paragraph.
 * The production of the song was handled by → Just say the producer, let's not beat around the bush.
 * The song contains lyrics about Brown trying to "convince a hot girl he spots in the club to come back to his crib" → This would be better paraphrased.
 * "Bassline" garnered mixed reviews from music critics, with some critics noting it as one of the standout tracks on the album, while others criticized the song's production and lyrics. → This jumps from past tense to present tense and back to past tense. Try to keep everything consistent.
 * To the works by → Works... you mean songs? If so, then just write songs.
 * "Bassline" debuted at number 28 on the UK R&B Chart and at number 122 on the UK Singles Chart → "Bassline" debuted at numbers 28 and 122 on the UK R&B Chart and UK Singles Chart, respectively.
 * There is barely background information in the first section, so change the title to "Development and composition".
 * The production of the song was handled by → Same as point 2
 * with assistance by Iain Findley → With assistance from Iain Findley
 * The song last for a duration of three minutes and 58 seconds
 *  to the works by → Same as above
 * Why is penis in quotation marks? Lol.
 * Make the chart table sortable.
 * Ref #15: publisher is Hearst Magazines UK.
 * A picture would be nice.
 * ✅ but what do you mean in point 10? — Oz  (talk)   04:34, 14 October 2012 (UTC)
 * ..."The song last" ... "for a duration"... Till 05:05, 14 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Um I still don't get you lol. Do you want me to change or remove a word? — Oz  (talk)   05:14, 14 October 2012 (UTC)
 * "The song last" is incorrect grammar, it should be "the song lasts..." and "for a duration" is completely redundant and should be removed. Till 05:24, 14 October 2012 (UTC)
 * ✅ — Oz  (talk)   05:30, 14 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Btw "which incorporates elements of reggae" should be "that incorporates elements of reggae". Till 05:09, 14 October 2012 (UTC)
 * ✅ — Oz  (talk)   05:14, 14 October 2012 (UTC)


 * Passing. Till 05:32, 14 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks. — Oz  (talk)   05:37, 14 October 2012 (UTC)