Talk:Battalia pie/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 13:34, 4 January 2022 (UTC)

Hi! I will review this article due to the ongoing GAN backlog. I will start the review a bit later today. Cheers, --Vacant0 (talk) 13:34, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Many thanks for taking this on. I'll get to it as soon as I can. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:14, 4 January 2022 (UTC)

General

 * Would prefer the beginning of the first sentence to be rewritten to "Battalia pie (obsolete spelling battaglia pye) is an English large game pie, or occasionally a fish pie...", in order to match with other English cuisine articles.
 * Done.


 * Link gravy, spices, and lemon.
 * Done.


 * Mention the fact that Disraeli was PM → Former prime minister of the United Kingdom, politician, and author Benjamin Disraeli...
 * Done.


 * Besides these minor things, it meets the manual of style and the prose is clear too.
 * Thank you.

Images

 * A picture of it isn't in the article, and I also wasn't able to find any on the internet that we can use. This is optional, so it's okay.
 * I live in hope.