Talk:Battle in Berlin/Archive 1

Mass rape
... by "vengeful Soviet troops" is of course here to be sure. Fine, but please put this in the proper context and site what exactly Beevor is sayin, not through a chain of newspaper articles about the book. Book is available for search in Google books, btw. --Irpen 06:56, 19 March 2007 (UTC)


 * The Newspaper article you refer to in the citations to was written by Beevor. --Philip Baird Shearer 07:25, 19 March 2007 (UTC)

Article name
Per PBS' request, taking the discussion here. Having two articles named Battle in/of Berlin seems to me awkward and confusing. Since Battle of Berlin must refer to the overall 1945 conquest of eastern Germany, that leaves Battle in Berlin. How about:
 * Assault on Berlin / Berlin assault
 * Siege of Berlin / Berlin siege
 * Storming of Berlin

A parenthetical (1945) could also be added but that's probably not necessary. -- Hongooi 09:16, 17 July 2007 (UTC)


 * Definitely not siege as it was not one, the Soviets were entering Berlin before the investment (military) was finished. The name Storming has POV connotations. Assault is probably the best of the three it is technically accurate but it carries an attackers POV. Hence the reason the that the Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history suggests that battle and siege are prefered over  terms such as "attack", "slaughter", "massacre", or "raid" --Philip Baird Shearer 10:04, 17 July 2007 (UTC)

I would say that making the distinction clear between this article and Battle of Berlin takes priority over the POV issue. The overarching campaign has a neutral title and that's the one that I guess most people will look at first. -- Hongooi 11:19, 17 July 2007 (UTC)


 * Lets see what others think, because I think that it is already clear. If it is not, then the first first sentence should makes it so. If you do not think that it does then we should perhaps change the first paragraph so that it is. The other think we have to consider with the name is "Do not use an article name that suggests a hierarchy of articles" --Philip Baird Shearer 12:47, 17 July 2007 (UTC)


 * It's interesting that you should mention the first sentence, because that was what caused my confusion in the first place. It mentions "The battle of Berlin was decided outside the city...", and the switching of "of" for "in" is a subtle enough thing that it wasn't immediately picked up. That led to questions as to why an article on the battle in Berlin was mentioning events taking place outside. I do think a more obviously distinct name is a Good Thing. As for hierarchy, I'm not suggesting anything like "battle of Berlin/Berlin assault" or some other two-level name. -- Hongooi 13:06, 17 July 2007 (UTC)

Perhaps this article should be moved to Battle for the Berlin Defence Area the trouble is that that introduces a Commonwealth/American English spelling into the title -- what do other think? --Philip Baird Shearer 23:14, 27 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 'Battle inside the City of Berlin'? With or without a (1945)? Does that help? Buckshot06(prof) 23:53, 28 June 2008 (UTC)

After reading the article I had a feeling that the Nazis are the heroes and the Soviets are the bad guys. I think there is a need of change of akcent. Facts need to be interpreted as facts. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.93.73.244 (talk) 09:02, 2 May 2008 (UTC)


 * I've never seen this battle called the 'Battle in Berlin'. Aside from being uncommon, it's also inaccurate and confusing: some of the most important fighting in this battle took part in the outskirts of the city and relatively few German units fought inside the city proper. Nick Dowling (talk) 01:45, 1 July 2008 (UTC)


 * The most often used book titles in English use either "Battle of Berlin" or Battle for Berlin". These books in fact contain descriptions of three separate Frontal parts of the Berlin strategic offensive operation that were a number of smaller operational phases. Battle in Berlin is meant to focus on the fighting in the metropolitan Berlin and not describe the entire strategic operation. Battle of Berlin is supposed to deal with the larger strategic operation, although Philip Baird Shearer decided that vague references are better then actual operational names, and removed those. Something I'll return to in future--mrg3105 (comms) ♠ ♥ ♦ ♣ 02:08, 1 July 2008 (UTC)

battle for the Reichstag
From the edit history
 * 14:14, 17 July 2007 HanzoHattori (Talk | contribs | block) (55,024 bytes) (okay? there was no a real "battle for reichstag", there was a fight fight for reichstag (too) - maybe now you will understand (and no, "Battle for the city center" was not a separate battle, too)) (undo)

If there was no "battle of the Reichstag" why does a google search return "about 3,070 for "battle for the Reichstag"" It is well sourced that this stage of the battle is known as the Battle for the Reichstag. --Philip Baird Shearer

There was no SEPARATE battle worthy of the header in THIS article. It was "battle" as "fight". Jesus.

Maybe you don't understand, so I'll give you an example we have only "Battle of the Oder-Neisse", but we DON'T have the sub-header for the "Battle of the Seelow Heights". Look: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Berlin_Offensive#Battle_of_the_Oder-Neisse - SEE? --HanzoHattori 06:50, 30 July 2007 (UTC)

Also, for some reason you put:

In the early hours of the 29 April the Soviets crossed the Moltke bridge and started to fan out into the surrounding streets and buildings. The initial assaults on building, including Ministry of the Interior, were hampered by the lack of supporting artillery. It was not until the damaged bridges were repaired that artillery could be moved up in support. [35] At 04:00 hours, in the Führerbunker, Hitler signed his last will and testament and, shortly afterwards, married Eva Braun.[36][37] At dawn the Soviets pressed on with their assault in the south east. After very heavy fighting they managed to capture the Gestapo headquarters on Prinz-Albrechtstrasse, but a Waffen SS counter-attack forced the Soviets to withdraw from the building.[38] To the south west Chukiov's 8th Guards Army attacked north across the Landwehr canal into the Tiergarten.[39]

in your section of "Battle of the Reichstag". So, the German part of this "speific battle" was Hitler marrying, and the Soviet was the GENERAL attack in various directions? (what I also said already, "Gestapo headquarters" was really the the German Interior Ministry)

Still NO TRACE of the Polish contribution, EVEN in the Battle in Berlin article, where I think they are not mentioned by a SINGLE word. You know what? This is just quite simply outrageous - you removed when I wrote, and you didn't wrote yourself. (Instead you are keen on the redunant flood of "Prelude".) Only because your stupid book is not informed, or Soviet-centric. Amazing.

You censored (removed) my appeal of the administrator intervention previously. So, CAN WE HAVE THE ADMINISTRATOR INTERVENTION NOW, please? (PBS: You REALLY don't own this article, and it's NOT about how you interpret some book or whatever.) --HanzoHattori 07:03, 30 July 2007 (UTC)

This was about this AND the main article. --HanzoHattori 07:14, 30 July 2007 (UTC)


 * I think you are confused, the article as of 06:32, 30 July 2007 (an edit made before you wrote the above and for days before) did not have a section entitled "battle for the Reichstag", instead it has a section called "In the city centre".


 * I am perplexed by you mention of "Gestapo headquarters" was really the the German Interior Ministry. AFAICT the "Gestapo headquarters" was on Prinz-Albrechtstrasse (south of the centre while the Ministry of the Interior was on next to the Moltke Bridge north of the centre on what is now Willy-Brandt-Strasse but used to be Moltkestrasse.


 * AFAICT I have not "(removed) [your] appeal of the administrator intervention" where in the edit history did I do that? --Philip Baird Shearer 08:34, 30 July 2007 (UTC)


 * As I said on the Talk:Battle of Berlin
 * If you have reliable sources which mention the Polish contribution then by all means add the details you wish to (with of course citations). Presumably the feat of arms you mention was the Polish First Army because the Second fought in the Prague Offensive. But as the sources I have do not mention the Polish contribution to the fighting in Berlin. Perhaps if you are going to add these details then adding them with citations would be useful for the Polish First Army article as well because at the moment it is sadly lacking many citations. --Philip Baird Shearer 18:01, 22 July 2007 (UTC)
 * --Philip Baird Shearer 08:34, 30 July 2007 (UTC)

Prelude
From the history of the article:
 * 14:17, 17 July 2007 HanzoHattori (Talk | contribs | block) (50,751 bytes) ("Battle in Berlin" meas "Battle IN Berlin" ("in" like "inside") - read until you understand, and STOP COPY-PASTING from OTHER articles (including main articles))

It is not I who is "COPY-PASTING from OTHER articles" into this article. It is you who have deleted information that was already in this article before you ever edited it (see Revision as of 05:30, 16 July 2007 diffed with Revision as of 14:19, 17 July 2007)

Please read WikiProject_Military_history it suggests that the article should have four sections:
 * ''The article can be structured along these lines:
 * ''1. The background. Why did it take place? Which campaign did it belong to? What happened previously?
 * ''2. The prelude. What forces were involved? How did they arrive at the battleground? Was there a plan?
 * ''3. A description of the battle. What tactics were used?
 * ''4. The aftermath. Who won, if anyone? What were the casualties? Was there a pursuit or followup? What happened next? How did the battle affect the course of the war?

Please stop deleting the prelude --Philip Baird Shearer 17:33, 17 July 2007 (UTC)

I repeat please stop deleting the prelude --Philip Baird Shearer 08:35, 30 July 2007 (UTC)


 * I repeat stop inserting. Practically nothing of this is about "battle in Berlin" - it's all in the main article ("of Berlin"), where is its place. --HanzoHattori 12:37, 3 August 2007 (UTC)

Articles should be stand alone, and battle articles need a "Prelude" (see above WikiProject_Military_history) --Philip Baird Shearer 12:43, 3 August 2007 (UTC)

Polish troops
The article ignores the participation of Polish troops. Source: Meanwhile, the 1st Army was taking part in the Berlin operation. [...] ''The following units took part in the attack on Berlin, which was happening simultaneously: the 1st Infantry Division, the 2nd Brigade of Howitzer Artillery and the 1st Independent Mortar Brigade. The troops of the 1st Infantry Division fought in the central sector of Berlin's defences, seizing the Technical University, the Tiergarten underground station and the Tiergarten park (the Zoo), entering the rear areas of the Reichstag and the Reich's Chancellery.''--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus 18:36, 2 August 2007 (UTC)


 * It needs reliable sources before it can be added to the article. Unfortunately the sources I have do not include the Polish contribution within the city. --Philip Baird Shearer 22:50, 2 August 2007 (UTC)


 * I didn't know this article is called "A summary of some book(s) as interpreted by Philip Baird Shearer". But now I do. --HanzoHattori 12:34, 3 August 2007 (UTC)


 * Just look at my post above, where I have an external link to a reliable article, published on the pages of the Association "Polish Community". You can find more by reading books such as Race for the Reichstag: The 1945 Battle for Berlin by Tony Le Tissier. Plenty of other refs have been preseted at Talk:Battle_of_Berlin. See also Berlin 1945: The Final Reckoning By Karl Bahm. And if you can, go for the Poles in the Battle of Berlin by Stanislaw Komornicki and Piotr Borowy, translated by Andrzej Zielinski - Ministry of National Defence . --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus 13:18, 3 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Then please add what you wish. Do you have the dates when they captured their objectives, as it would make it easier to slot into the text which is broadly in chronological order? --Philip Baird Shearer 16:41, 3 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I was hoping that you, as the main contributor, would chose the most relevant fact and add them. Over the coming weeks, I will look into that matter (my university seems to have a copy of both Komornicki & Borowy and Bahm book).--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus 18:46, 3 August 2007 (UTC)

Ironically, the article has a picture with the caption "Polish flag in Berlin", without mentioning the role of Polish troops or even the very fact of Polish participation in the battle at all. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus 19:10, 29 January 2008 (UTC)


 * User:Piotrus you have had months to add additional information to this page if you think it is necessary. You have not chosen to do so. There are two significant viewpoints of this battle that of the Allies and that of the Axis forces. Both significant viewpoints are represented, there is no need for such a misleading template as Toofewopinions at the top of this article --Philip Baird Shearer (talk) 21:51, 26 June 2008 (UTC)


 * It is not my responsibility to fix all the errors on Wikipedia. I have pointed that one out and provided information how one can fix it. I will fix it, eventually. Until I do so, or somebody else does, the tag is valid.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus 02:43, 27 June 2008 (UTC)

And I don't so lets get a Third opinion --Philip Baird Shearer (talk) 09:02, 27 June 2008 (UTC)

Well, Template:Toofewopinions might not be entirely suitable in this case, as it is not completely obvious that it is a "viewpoint" and this tag does not indicate what exactly has to be changed... Maybe Template:Expand or Template:Expand-section would be more suitable? For example, " " or "  "? --Martynas Patasius (talk) 18:19, 27 June 2008 (UTC)
 * We don't have a section for it, but the seems as good as the toofewopinions (and perhaps better indeed).--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus 19:29, 27 June 2008 (UTC)


 * I'm not sure how this claim can be made that "The following units took part in the attack on Berlin, which was happening simultaneously: the 1st Infantry Division, the 2nd Brigade of Howitzer Artillery and the 1st Independent Mortar Brigade. The troops of the 1st Infantry Division fought in the central sector of Berlin's defences, seizing the Technical University, the Tiergarten underground station and the Tiergarten park (the Zoo), entering the rear areas of the Reichstag and the Reich's Chancellery." These units were detached from the 1st Polish Army to the 2nd Guards Tank Army during the Seelow-Berlin Offensive Operation. The 2nd Guards Tank Army operated to the north of Berlin, and its objective was to cut off the routes into and out of Berlin to the north and west of the city. The area you attribute to operation of Polish troops would in fact put them in the area of operations of the 3rd Shock Army because the 2nd Guards Tank Army never got further then Charlottenberg though some of its troops did penetrate into Moabit. The Polish troops are given credit for the operation because they did enter the metropolitan area of Berlin, but their role in the operation as a whole was one of support, and a minor one at that, so their point of view would have been far from an influencing one given this is a reference work and not an in-depth study of street-by street fighting in Berlin--mrg3105 (comms) ♠ ♥ ♦ ♣ 00:27, 28 June 2008 (UTC)


 * The areas described is geographically compact (south western and western end of the Tiergarten).   If operating in that area the Poles were on the western flank of the main thrust by Chuikov's 8th Guards Army towards Potsdamer Platz/Brandenburg Gate and the Reich Chancellery. The Polish area of operations had a low density of buildings, but would have involved bridging at least one seizable water obstacle. The Poles must have been operating under the shadow of the Flak tower at Berlin Zoo. --Philip Baird Shearer (talk) 10:19, 28 June 2008 (UTC)


 * Two references from Google Books that mention the Poles contribution: Race for the Reichstag: The 1945 Battle for Berlin By Tony Le Tissier page 158, Berlin 1945: End of the Thousand Year Reich By Peter Antill, Peter Dennis page 79. Antill puts the Polish combat to the west of the web page Source given above. --Philip Baird Shearer (talk) 11:21, 28 June 2008 (UTC)

I suggest that we keep a banner at the top about Polish troops until a paragraph is written about their contribution, only if a non Polish source claims that they contributed significantly to the battle in Berlin. Hopefully if such a source is provided it will also describe their contribution and it can be added. Additional content improvements should be mentioned on the talk page (that is what they are for) not left as a banner in article space for months or years. If the text "The examples and perspective in this article or section may not include all significant viewpoints." was not in a pretty box it would be removed from the article onto the talk page. Just because it is in a box does not change its nature. --Philip Baird Shearer (talk) 10:34, 28 June 2008 (UTC)


 * Hi guys; Piotrus asked for third opinions on the main talk page, so I thought I'd give you my thoughts. In my view, Polish troops were allied forces operating slotted within the Soviet structure, so in the detailed chronology of the battle, when the formation involved is Polish, I'd simply make that clear maybe with a (Polish) or some such. I'd add a separate casualty figure with the casualties and, in the initial tally of forces, maybe add a line or two of description of the status of Polish force (both First and Second Armies, or just First?) - specific logistical and morale concerns having been supported through a allied rather than national support chain, and maybe a note about whether or not they were now directly drawing on the parts of Poland that had been liberated. Disagreement welcome.
 * (update)I see now there isn't an initial tally of forces to army level on the Soviet side; maybe there, just above the section on German forces, could be a note on the status of Polish forces at the end of the battle. I see there's been some reverting going on; would appreciate if you both considered working on a draft at this talkpage. Kind regards to both of you, Buckshot06(prof) 23:48, 28 June 2008 (UTC)


 * That was not my point. There is no doubt that Polish troops were in Berlin during the operation. The question is, was their viewpoint significant? Several armies with literally dozens of divisions were in Berlin during the operation. Was the Polish viewpoint significant because of their operational participation, or because they were Polish? My argument is that there was nothing operationally significant about 1st Polish infantry division's participation. The significance of Polish troops participating in the taking of Berlin was undoubtedly significant for Poland, but any reference to that are likely to be found in Polish sources, are likely to be highly political, and very emotive. Is something like that worthy of inclusion in a reference work?--mrg3105 (comms) ♠ ♥ ♦ ♣ 00:44, 29 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Buckshot06 I think you would benefit from reading the pages from two books that came up in Google Books search I did, particularly, Tony Le Tissier page 158, and then look at a map such as this one, although one seconded division of Poles (not an army) fought in the west of Berlin under the command of the 2nd Guards Tank Army and helped in the capture of Charlottenberg, there were dozens of Soviet divisions doing similar work all over Berlin, and the only reason why the Polish division's contribution may be notable is that is was not a Soviet Army division. This short article inevitably concentrates on the spearheads that were fighting their way into the "lair of the fascist beast" and as far as I can tell from the few sources I have read (all listed here), the Polish division was not directly involved in that. Please understand that I an not arguing that the Polish contribution should not be mentioned in this article, it's just that I don't think that there needs to be a banner at the top of this article for months implying that there is a significant POV missing from the article, or a banner at the top that says it needs expanding -- it is already 57 kilobytes long and is itself a more detailed description of some sections in the Battle of Berlin article -- because such banners are IMHO misleading. --Philip Baird Shearer (talk) 09:30, 29 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Ah; it was only one division, rather than the whole First Polish Army. I was aware this was a two-front, ~10 army or plus operation (and the famous story of Stalin drawing the dividing line that stopped half-way between Koniev and Zhukov etc). OK, in that case, if we mention 2 GTA, I'd mention sort of in passing that one of it's divisions was Polish, and that would be about it. Given that yes there were ~50 divisions rampaging through Berlin, I wouldn't even give the designation - thinking WP:UNDUE, but we could wiki-link the mention of a Polish division to the division in question. But the question desn't arise unless there's already a paragraph, or several sentences through the article, covering what 2 GTA was up to. Only if that's done does the Polish division get mentioned, because otherwise we get back to WP:UNDUE. Yes in that case I'd remove the banner. But some mention should be added to the 2nd Guards Tank Army (Soviet Union) article; that's where that combat path belongs to. Buckshot06(prof) 10:39, 29 June 2008 (UTC)

Well, I guess there is one more mention in a non-Polish source: ''Коллектив авторов. Советские танковые войска 1941-1945. — М.: Воениздат, 1973; Глава пятнадцатая. Вперед, на Берлин!'' (Approximate translations - "Soviet tank forces 1941-1945", "Chapter 15. Forward, to Berlin!") - "2-я гвардейская танковая армия и 1-я пехотная дивизия Войска Польского, овладев северо-западной частью Берлина, вышли к западной окраине парка Тиргартен." (Approximate translation - "2nd Guards tank army and 1st Infantry division of Polish Forces captured north-west part of Berlin and reached western limit of Tiergarten park."). Not much (and it seems relatively unreasonable to expect much more), but no other individual division is mentioned in that section. The extent of the section about the Battle in Berlin ("Штурм Берлина") in the source seems to be more or less comparable to the extent of this article, so, I guess, it might be argued that a mention like that (one sentence) would not give obviously undue weight...

And another possibility to consider - maybe it would be a good idea to add orders of battle for both sides (which might list every individual division, just as, for example, Order of battle for the Battle of France, avoiding any problems with undue weight)? For a start, something like a list from ru:Берлинская наступательная операция could be added to Battle of Berlin... Soviet order of battle for Battle in Berling might be taken from ''Справочник «Освобождение городов: Справочник по освобождению городов в период Великой Отечественной войны 1941–1945» / М.Л.Дударенко, Ю.Г.Перечнев, В.Т.Елисеев и др. — М.: Воениздат, 1985. — 598 с.'' --Martynas Patasius (talk) 14:57, 18 July 2008 (UTC)


 * I look forward to someone writing such an article. The point in this article is not whether to include a mention of the Polish division it is whether keeping a template with "Please help improve this article or section by expanding it." is justified. I do not think that it is (given that any article can be expanded by anyone and most articles do not carry such a banner). --Philip Baird Shearer (talk) 15:10, 18 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Looks like similar concerns have been voiced in Templates for deletion/Log/2007_July_13 where one of the users (Beland) noted "While in theory, anyone could at any moment come along and add information to an article, this tag is useful in situations where 1.) the article is too long to be considered a stub and either 2.) there is a specific request for expansion (which is what I most often use this tag for) or 3.) there are obvious gaps.". As in this case "there is a specific request for expansion" (even if it looks like it could be met by adding one sentence to the article or a template,  or  to some section - most likely "Preparation", or some new one), technically, the tag seems to be appropriate... --Martynas Patasius (talk) 17:47, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

Time for the banner to go. It has been there for more than 8 months which is plenty of time for anyone who wanted to include more on the Polish contribution to do the work. -PBS (talk) 10:51, 20 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Nope. The article doesn't become complete simply because nobody made it so. I've added a brief mention, that should suffice for now. I completly support the idea for adding an order of battle section.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus 12:45, 20 March 2009 (UTC)

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Clausewitz
Philip raised this as something that needs to cited, but I have nothing although being aware of it. Apparently much was made of the proposed evacuation of Berlin in the German movie about Hiterl (2004), but I have not seen it. Clausewitz was the codeword that was supposed to be broadcast to begin the evacuation. I am dubious as to the role of SS in its execution--mrg3105 (comms) ♠ ♥ ♦ ♣ 23:09, 16 June 2008 (UTC)

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Artermath
That part must be rewrited - "100.000 raped" - well, it WERY big count, incredible count. Mass violence was not possible - to each battalion was assigned "politruk" - person with an officer rank, and tracking to prevent looting, rape, and so on. "Politruk's" also have the right to a quick execution of persons found guilty of war crimes. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 95.37.230.63 (talk) 19:43, 15 August 2009 (UTC)

Relevant content from BoB
I think most of the content I mentioned, ref-ed, at Talk:Battle_of_Berlin, should be added to this article. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; talk 19:01, 5 May 2011 (UTC)


 * The question is how to add it. There is nothing on the 2nd Tank army's assault on the city, and that is integral to the Polish advance on the city as they were part of that army. At the moment the attack is broadly written as chronological narrative rather than in sections on the attacks made by individual Soviet armies. Should the assault of the 2nd Tank army be woven into the current chronological narrative or should it be added as a separate section?-- PBS (talk) 18:50, 8 May 2011 (UTC)
 * I finished expanding from the book source I mentioned. I am open to content being further tweaked, or moved around, but I hope you'll agree it is relevant. A map of the Polish troops participation in the battle of Berlin is here. I am not sure when it will be transformed into a free map, unfortunately (but if anybody here has map making skills, check commons:User_talk:Lonio17. Unfortunately, Lonio, while saying he is almost done with Bautzen, is not sure if he will find time and will to do the Berlin maps. While most of the maps I found for him are about Polish participation, I am surprised that we have no map of German defenses (see this). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; talk 21:01, 12 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Tweaked and edits to your recent edition, Piotrus; you guys review same and see what you think; added in a couple of points by Hamilton with one cite added (I was going to add a second cite but decided it was not needed). I wanted to keep the chronological timeframe in order as best one can. Cheers, Kierzek (talk) 15:38, 13 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks. Why did you remove the "Polish units took possession of the Tiergarten Park and approach the Reichstag from the rear." sentence? --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; talk 16:36, 13 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Because, Hamilton states the Soviets and Poles did that together as the Red Army, and I was also trying to keep the chronological timeframe in order as best one can-at that point, 1 May. Hamilton states the Tiergarten was taken in the early morning hours of 2 May. Kierzek (talk) 17:18, 13 May 2011 (UTC)

Headed north


I have removed
 * Rhein and his men headed north crossing the Friedrichstraße S-Baun Station where they moved into the ruins hours before the main breakout across the Spree.

because I think it is misleading.

As can be seen from the map (right) the land directly north of the Reichstag is between the Reichstag and the Spree. It was held after very heavy fighting by the Soviets who were using it as one of their main thrusts to try to enter the Reichstag. Those Germans who did retreat out of the must have gone east or south east, like the sentence confirms by mentioning Friedrichstraße S-Baun Station the railway bridge of which was used as one of the breakout routes. See this Google map link for clarification. -- PBS (talk) 08:14, 22 September 2011 (UTC)
 * PBS, your problem as to the entry is with the wording by historian, Hamilton. I was quoting him, as I said when we went through all this on the "Battle of Berlin" talk page, under the section, "And headed north" which is in Archive 7 . My guess is they first went north and then turned south east. I have re-inserted the book cited text without the words "and headed north", since I don't feel those words are necessary to illustrate the Germans withdraw. Kierzek (talk) 14:48, 22 September 2011 (UTC)


 * You quote him "The Germans remaining in the Reichstag began to pull out of the building by the evening. Rhein and his men broke out, and then headed north. They initially crossed Friedrichstraße S-Baun Station and moved into the ruins hours before the main breakout across the Spree. They ominously saw Russians crawling all over the streets"
 * I think you have misunderstood the attachment of the phrase "broke out"; it is not referring to breaking out of the Reichstag, they "pull out" of the Reichstag. Then they headed east to Friedrichstraße S-Bahn, (by the way it is "Bahn" not "Baun") and then took part in the "break out" presumably along Schönhauser Alle with others from that north eastern area of the perimeter. So what Hamilton has done is give a brief 2 sentence description "The Germans remaining in the Reichstag began to pull out of the building by the evening. Rhein and his men broke out, and then headed north" and then a more detail "They initially crossed Friedrichstraße S-Baun Station and moved into the ruins hours before the main breakout across the Spree. ..." Least that is my reading given the impossibility of trying to head north out of the Reichstag. -- PBS (talk) 03:38, 23 September 2011 (UTC)
 * I know they withdrew (as I said above) or "pull(ed) out", as you phrase it, from the Reichstag; But, I think you are right in that Hamilton gives a general description of their overall action; followed by detail of more immediate (preceding) movement. Kierzek (talk) 13:13, 23 September 2011 (UTC)
 * "pull out" is quoting his words (that you kindly supplied) and I think "withdrew" is a perfectly adequate synonym (but "break out" has a different meaning as it implies that someone would be in the way trying to stop the pull out/withdrawal and those withdrawing would have to fight their way thorough (eg the contemporary and close by Battle of Halbe)). -- PBS (talk) 02:39, 24 September 2011 (UTC)
 * PBS, I know; what needed dissecting was the way Hamilton was conveying the movements ("headed north"), which has been done. Kierzek (talk) 14:55, 24 September 2011 (UTC)

Polish participation
I've just stumbled upon an article on the subject (in Polish):. For future reference. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; talk to me 18:34, 16 December 2011 (UTC)

Map of the participation of Polish troops in the Battle in Berlin
I do not think that this map should be included because:
 * 1) it is unreadable for an English monoglot
 * 2) the colour scheme and the size of the arrows overemphasise Polish contributions
 * 3) The advance through the Tiergarten represents an advance along a road already under the control of the Soviets, and the sources I quoted in Talk:Battle of Berlin/Archive 7 state it occurred on the morning of the 2 May (after the capitulation). -- PBS (talk) 20:31, 12 March 2012 (UTC)
 * It should be removed, undue weight and unreadable, as well. Kierzek (talk) 21:09, 12 March 2012 (UTC)


 * We commonly use foreign language maps if no English language version exists. If you disagree, cite the policy that supports removal of foreign language maps.
 * The map is about Polish troops participation, so it obviously is going to focus on, well, Polish troops. It's not a map of the battle in Berlin, it's a map of certain troops participation in it. The legend clearly states that only selected Russian advances are shown (we could add this to the caption if you think it is not clear enough).
 * The map is referenced; sources can vary. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; talk to me 19:40, 14 March 2012 (UTC)


 * Well, looks like we have to use what we have and not what we don't... It is true that this map isn't perfect, but, unfortunately, it looks like it is one of only two really different maps of this battle stored in Commons... If the other map (File:Battle for Reichstag 1945 map-eng.png) gave an overview of the whole battle, as opposed to a small (though important) fragment of it, perhaps removing the "Polish" map would be a good idea. But we do not have an overview map, and the "Polish" map is the only one showing that specific part of battle (the other map covers just a small part of the territory covered by the "Polish" map)...
 * Still, maybe the problems with undue weight could be diminished if we added some additional maps? File:Battle for Reichstag 1945 map-eng.png and File:Battle of Berlin 1945-b.png do not really show the battle in Berlin, but maybe it could be argued that they would put the fights in context (for example, German attempts to relieve Berlin might have had some influence)...
 * Also, the current caption ("Participation of Polish troops in the Battle in Berlin" - ) might be changed to something like "A map of the battle emphasising [showing? dedicated to showing? illustrating?] the Polish contribution")...
 * Finally, concerning "[...] the sources I quoted in Talk:Battle of Berlin/Archive 7#Polish forces April 2011 state it occurred on the morning of the 2 May (after the capitulation)." - for what it's worth, the map does give this same date to this advance... --Martynas Patasius (talk) 21:12, 14 March 2012 (UTC)
 * For the record, I could easily translate the legend and map abbreviations, if somebody would like to list the map in the Graphic Lab Map Workshop. We did this for the maps of the Battle of Bautzen (1945). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; talk to me 22:20, 14 March 2012 (UTC)

Race for the Reichstag: the 1945 Battle for Berlin by Tony Le Tissier page 195

The Soviet casualties in Berlin were 20,000 total casualties for the Poles was about 500 or about 2.5% of the causalities. It is reasonable to assume that the Poles suffered about the same percentage casualties as other soviet lead forces in which case this map shows the advance of about 2.5% of the forces assaulting Berlin. It also emphasises an advance made after (or close to the time of) the the general capitulation of the city. This is misleading as the map implies that Polish forces were involved in the capture of Reichstag and the Brandenburg gate. If this map belongs anywhere it is in the article on the First Polish Army. -- PBS (talk) 22:59, 14 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Sorry Apples and oranges it is 20,000 dead not 20,000 casualties so the ratio was < 0.5% not 2.5% -- PBS (talk) 08:46, 17 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Don't try to beat the dead horse, Philip. You tried to erase any mentions of the Polish troops from this article in the past, and the consensus was against it. There is no reason that the paragraph dedicated mostly to discussion of operations carried out by Polish units should not be illustrated with a useful map. There is certainly space in the article for more images and/or maps. And the map does not focuses on the Reichstag advance; instead it focuses, correctly, on the advance and capture of the Technische Hoschshule, and advance towards Tiergarten. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; talk to me 23:06, 14 March 2012 (UTC)
 * I really don't believe the map should be included for reasons I stated above. IF consensus goes the other way in the end, I believe it should be made bigger and stated clearly this map: "illustrating the Polish units advances on 2 May 1945, the day of capitulation. Kierzek (talk) 00:17, 15 March 2012 (UTC)
 * I have no problem with either. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; talk to me 00:51, 15 March 2012 (UTC)


 * Yes, I guess it is clear that Polish contribution wasn't vital - if all those forces were sent away without any replacements, the battle wouldn't have ended with German victory. And it is highly probable that Polish historiography gives far more attention to actions of Polish forces, than to actions of Soviet units of equivalent size. It might not be fair, but it sure is natural. Still, it is not the Wikipedia's job to make the things more fair, and if the Polish sources give more emphasis for the Polish contribution, and are not "counterbalanced" by sufficient numbers of other sources giving them "too little" emphasis, looks like we will have to give somewhat more emphasis to Polish contribution as well...
 * And if there are sources, saying that in some cases the arrows in the map correspond to advances through territory that had already been captured by other units, maybe we should say so in the caption? --Martynas Patasius (talk) 00:22, 15 March 2012 (UTC)
 * If my opinion were asked, I would not include such a map in the article; unduely weights Polish involvement. Buckshot06 (talk) 05:43, 15 March 2012 (UTC)
 * As well as unduly weighting Polish involvement, the map is of low quality, especially in regards to its use on En-Wiki. I have no idea what those Polish-language abbreviations mean and it took a bit of work to figure out what the difference between the dark blue and aqua blue arrows is. The implication of the map seems to be that it was the Poles who captured central Berlin, which is of course not true. The geographic details on the map also contain some errors (most obviously, Hitler's bunker wasn't in a park). Nick-D (talk) 07:05, 15 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Comment from Chumchum7: Coming out of semi-reitrement to add my view, for what it's worth, as I was involved in this article in the past. First, this is not a map of participation of Polish troops in the Battle in Berlin, this is a map of both Soviet and Polish troop movements during the Battle in Berlin and it should be re-captioned and restored as such. That would appear to be a fair solution to this discussion, especially given the map is very helpful for orientation, especially if it can be translated. Second, this issue of Polish participation might be resolved by going back and looking at previous discussion in the 'Battle of Berlin' Talk archive, where consensus appears to have agreed on adding a relatively small section on Polish participation in the Battle of Berlin, (dwarfed by Soviet troops, but bigger than the combined American/British/Canadian deployment at D-Day, and one of the biggest Polish Army battle deployments of WWII). I recall we found several Soviet cinema clips featuring their Polish allies at the battle (e.g. at Berlin Zoo), plus a compelling though possibly irrelevant anecdote about a Jewish Polish Army soldier who had fought all the way into Berlin. None of us got ever got round to doing that section, but we should do it now. In it or near it, this map would also be helpful; and given that the Battle of Berlin article is getting pretty good, we would ideally have an an English-language version of the map. As an aside, I'm one of many editors who finds the split of two articles Battle of Berlin / Battle in Berlin confusing (perhaps a product of original research in its strictest sense?), and would argue for them to be merged, but that is a separate matter. Best wishes, -Chumchum7 (talk) 08:10, 15 March 2012 (UTC)
 * See WP:SUMMARY STYLE (this article is 70k in size) and it only briefly summarises the battle outside Berlin. The battle of Berlin article is 68K in size, it is a summary style article that is still short on the later stages of the battle outside Berlin and it already includes 3 other daughter articles. It is not original research to structure articles into summary style.
 * This is not a map of of both Soviet and Polish troop movements during the Battle in Berlin it is a map of Polish movements a few Polish regiments (detached from the First Polish Army that remained outside the city) and attached to the 2nd Soviet Tank Army) with arrows a large as those given to a few of the Soviet armies that fought their way into Berlin. The Polish map show that the 8th Guard Army attacking from the south and the 3rd Shock Army attacking from the North but not showing that they had already captured the eastern end of the Tiergarten up to the Strasse des 17 Juni then known as Charlottenburger Chaussee that was the demarcation line between the two armies before the Poles advanced along the Strasse des 17 Juni


 * The Polish map, both through the size, colour and positioning of the arrows and the time line it represents, gives undue weight to Polish involvement. To put this in perspective see these maps copied from Ziemke 1969, Battle For Berlin: End Of The Third Reich
 * Battle of Berlin: April 26-28, 1945
 * Map of the Battle for Reichstag 29 April – 2 May 1945
 * -- PBS (talk) 10:34, 15 March 2012 (UTC)


 * Just to clarify, my mention of WP:OR wasn't a suggestion that summary style is original research, rather that the distinction between the 'B in B' and the 'B of B' appears to have been constructed by Wikipedia editors, not a majority of verifiable sources. I may be wrong. Like I say it is a separate subject, but I add my voice to those who think a merge is merited. -Chumchum7 (talk) 11:04, 15 March 2012 (UTC)
 * In the absence of better map, this one should stay. Foreign language maps are used commonly on Wiki.--MyMoloboaccount (talk) 11:34, 15 March 2012 (UTC)
 * On the reliability of sources, Wikipedia policy does not state we should throw out authors when they write about the history of the country they come from. Moreover, if there were such a tendency it could quickly degenerate into prejudicial behaviour, which is banned, e.g. alleging an Irish authors has no right to be quoted in a Wikipedia article on the history of the IRA because he is bound to be irrationally biased, etc. Where there are serious grounds for questioning reliability, then raise them; but nationality of the author alone is not reason enough.
 * On the merits of the sources themselves, Ziemke's 43-year-old map inaccurately refers to 'Russian' rather than 'Soviet' troops; he has also entirely omitted Polish Army troops, which is another inaccuracy. Its not a perfect map. On further observation, I see the author of the proposed map in question, using a 3-year-old source, has disclosed that it omits some Soviet troops movements; so it isn't perfect either for a general overview, and is indeed better for any section that deals with the Polish contribution to the battle. For an overview map in this 'B in B' article, a map editor needs to carefully take from both sourced maps, and others; none offered so far is better or worse than any other. -Chumchum7 (talk) 15:49, 15 March 2012 (UTC)
 * I still don't see a problem. Things can be explained in the description, with a caption that Kierzek proposed above. There is room in this article for more pictures and maps, this map seems useful (in addition to showing Polish troops, the map is also the only map showing a given part of Berlin, so it's usefulness extends beyond just the Polish actions). And with regards to undue weight, we have already agreed in the past to mention Polish participation, there was consensus such a mention was not undue. There is an entire para dedicated to that, a para that has room for a picture. The article would simply benefit from a map enriching this paragraph. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; talk to me 16:34, 15 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Russian is a standard term in English to mean citizens/soldiers of the Soviet Union, just as the term British is the standard term for citizens/soldiers of the United Kingdom. It is more common in British English than it is in American English to use Russian (probably because Americans vie the world as "isms" while the English view the world as tribal nation). See for example the Singleton report of 1942 "If Russia can hold Germany on land I doubt whether Germany will stand 12 or 18 months’ continuous, intensified and increased bombing" (dehousing memo) and many other sources. So its use on those maps is not inaccurate. I wrote the initial version of this article using Soviet because is is less ambiguous to some American readers and many international readers who do not realise that Russian can mean Soviet. Further if we were to be completely accurate we shoudl use Red Army rather than Soviet Army


 * I am not suggesting that the maps to which I provided a link are included in the article (it would be a copyright violation). I provided them to indicate that this is a much bigger operation than is indicated by the Polish map and that the Polish map is misleading because of the colour of the arrows, the size of the arrows and that the map indicates a Polish advance through the Tiergarten without any distinction that unlike the other arrows it is not displaying a movement during hostilities.


 * Also the paragraph about the Polish contribution to the battle is not very good as it does not name let alone describe the contribution of the Soviet Army (2nd Guards Tank Army?) to which the Polish forces were attached for the battle in Berlin. As such the Polish contribution is lacking context, to understand that one has to know what were the objectives Soviet army to which the Polish units were attached and what the sub units such as divisions of that army to which the Polish regiments were attached were tasked to do. -- PBS (talk) 09:42, 16 March 2012 (UTC)
 * The paragraph is not focused on the army level, but on the division and smaller level. It mentions that Poles were sent as reinforcements, and to which Soviet units they were attached. Anyway, I am going to restore the map with an updated wording, hopefully it will avoid any undue weight confusion. I strongly suggest we keep it, if for no other reason than as a map of the Berlin where much of the fighting took place that we are currently missing). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; talk to me 19:18, 16 March 2012 (UTC)
 * If you are justifying the map only because it shows the western end of the Tiergarten then you presumably will not object if another map is substituted that shows the same area without the Polish advances on it. -- PBS (talk) 08:40, 17 March 2012 (UTC)


 * Piotrus, you're right. Agreed. -Chumchum7 (talk) 16:38, 15 March 2012 (UTC)


 * Remove map as undue weight. The minor participation of Polish troops appear to be unduly amplified. ⋙–Berean–Hunter—►  15:09, 17 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Have you seen the new caption? And the argument that there is no other map of the area in question in the article? --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; talk to me 15:46, 17 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Better to have no map than one that gives undue weight to the Polish contribution to the overall battle. I have ordered Race for the Reichstag: the 1945 Battle for Berlin by Tony Le Tissier, which has some detailed battle maps in it, when it arrives (in the next few days) I'll use the information in it coupled with some other maps to create a map of the centre with a mode balanced perspective. At the moment I do not see that there is a consensus on this talk page to include the recently added map so I have removed it. -- PBS (talk) 20:31, 22 March 2012 (UTC)

Result
With this edit PBS removed Poland as a victor after the Soviet Union. His edit summary explains: "At a 2% contribution this was not a Polish victory." This prompts several questions. (1) The '2%' appears to be based on Polish casualties as a proportion of Soviet casualties. Did the source specify that the number of Polish Army casualties were a total for all Polish Army casualties in the battle, or were they a sub-total of casualties from certain units? Is the 2% synthetic, or verifiable? (2) Where in Wikipedia are we advised to calculate military 'contribution' based on casualties, rather than say tactical value? (3) What would then be the XX% casualty threshold for inclusion, and where has Wikipedia established that there is such a threshold? (4) What are the implications of excluding a belligerent from victor status based on proportion of casualties, given that US and British casualties in WWII were about 400,000 each, versus Soviet casualties of about 27,000,000? The British and Americans both had about 1.5% of the casualties of the Soviet Union in WWII, which was a lower proportion of casualties than the Polish Army's casualties as a proportion of Soviet casualties at the Battle in Berlin. Surely, it is impossible to universally apply this rationale of XX% casualties as a threshold for inclusion in joint-victor status? (5) If we have two states listed as belligerents, is it logical to have only one of them listed as a victor? (6) Is it verifiable whether or not the Polish flag was raised alongside the Soviet flag at the end of the battle? (7) Was the Polish Army's 1st Infantry invited by the Soviet Union to the Moscow Victory Parade for its combat in Berlin, or elsewhere? -Chumchum7 (talk) 16:02, 17 March 2012 (UTC) In the meantime I looked up the Polish flag raising. Apparently, official Flag Day in the country of Poland is May 2, because... it was the day in 1945 in which the Polish Army raised the flag at the Siegessaule, also known as the Victory Column, in central Berlin. There are better refs offline (I was at the library today), but here's a couple of open source indicative/unreliable refs:  In which case, I modify my question #(6) to: Why on May 2 each year does the country of Poland officially commemorate the Polish flag being raised at the end of the Battle in Berlin in 1945, if Poland was not one of the victors? -Chumchum7 (talk) 21:16, 17 March 2012 (UTC)


 * No one is disputing that some Polish forces fought in Berlin, but the vast bulk of the Polish forces were in two armies which took part in the battle outside Berlin. If there had been a couple of American liaison officer attached to headquarters who had flown the Starts and Stripes over the Reich Chancellery on the 2nd of May 1945, would that justify the inclusion of the Americans in the battle box? Or the RAF bombed Berlin every night for over a month until the night of 20/21 April so should the Union Jack be in the battle box? British histories credit the victory over the French at the battle of Waterloo to British contributions to the battle while underplaying the contribution by their allies. Such exaggerations are common in the historiography of nations. Just because a nation commemorate a flag raising it does not necessarily make that event a significant event in other historiographies. -- PBS (talk) 15:21, 19 March 2012 (UTC)


 * I don't understand this "inferiority" of 2%. 2% is still 2%, which seems enough to justify inclusion in the battle box per our practices. Warsaw Uprising lists the contribution of USA, UK, USSR and even SAAF, even if all they did was supporting air drops. If we were to count casualties as rations, we get (military), 30,000:100, so 0.3%. And that is combining the UK, USA and SAAF into one group, btw. As there is no policy, AFAIK, that specifies what % of combat participation (or losses) has to be to merit inclusion in the box, but since this is the argument Philip made, fine, I will point out to the established precedent of the WU that 0.3% is enough. More realistically speaking, as long as there is a reliable source about any notable contribution to a battle (as is the case here), than such participation has merit. Now, let's take a look at WWII page. Let's take one of the belligerents listed on the main list: South Africa. Their military casualties? 9,000. Total allied military casualties? 16,000,000. So, SA part of that is 0.05%; yet it was still enough for inclusion in the widely disputed WWII list of participants. Numbers for some other countries are similar (New Zealand dead are about 12,000), so it's not like SA is an exceptionally weird case. So no, Philip, you cannot use a 2% casualties to make a case this is against any established customs we have. Based on our practices, however, I am now making the argument that 2% is way more than enough to merit inclusion, so thank you, Philip, for making it clear that Poland most certainly does deserve a place in the battlebox here. PS. Oh, and the last time I checked, WWII was an Allied victory, and not USA/USSR/China victory, or such, meaning that the names of all participants are used. So it only makes sense to call this a Soviet and Polish victory. PPS. This would also bring this in line with Battle of Berlin, which is clearly labeled as "Soviet and Polish victory".--<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; talk to me 04:43, 18 March 2012 (UTC)


 * The inclusion of SAAF in the battle box of the Warsaw Uprising is a very good example of the problem of the "me too" inclusions that discredit battle boxes. Indeed I personally would remove the RAF and the USAAF from that battle box as well. A bad decision somewhere else does not justify the inclusion in another article. -- PBS (talk) 15:21, 19 March 2012 (UTC)


 * The nations that took place in a war need to be listed somewhere, but it is different from listing nations in a war article and listing combatants in a specific battle, where they either did not take part of played an insignificant role.


 * See the previous section "Sorry apples and oranges it is 20,000 dead not 20,000 casualties so the ratio was < 0.5% not 2.5% -- PBS (talk) 08:46, 17 March 2012 (UTC)" The ratio of dead is easy to work out from the 20,000 Soviet dead and the 88 dead given in the Tony Le Tissier quote above. So assuming that the number of dead is roughly in line with the Polish forces engaged, then Polish forces committed to the battle in Berlin was a very small proportion to the total. Further they were not under independent operation command even at divisional level but assigned and temporarily integrated into a Soviet division(s?). Putting the Polish into the battle box is a distortion because the battle box does not allow the reader to tell scale the contributions were. For the Battle of Berlin were the two Polish armies were committed to the campaign and made up about 10% of the total forces committed, I do not think that it justifies the inclusion in the battle box as victors of the Battle of Berlin article for reasons I have already given (an the edit that recently included Poland in the battle box (15 February 2012‎) was not clearly labelled as such in the edit history). But even if one thinks that the Poland should be included in the Battle of Berlin battle box article as participants, that is very different from this part of the battle were the Polish contribution less than half of one percent. If the Poles had been engaged in fighting in the main line of attack to the city centre and were involved in capturing some key defensive points that made their contribution significant because of an action rather than nationality (eg like that of the Soviet 150th and 171st Rifle divisions), then perhaps that would be notable enough to mention their contribution in the battle box. But they were assigned to a Soviet army that was tasked with clearing western suburbs and was not engaged in the main advance on the centre. There were dozens of such engagements through Berlin, and to date the only reason given by any editor for including them is that the fighting involved Polish soldiers rather than just Soviet ones. While I would not be able to make a hard and fast rule on this, I do not see how one can argue that a participation of under half a percent of the forces engaged against against secondary objectives can be classed as significant enough to be listed in the battle box. -- PBS (talk) 15:21, 19 March 2012 (UTC)
 * First, Baluk (1990) p.129 states Polish Army units taking part in the "direct storming of Berlin" include: 1st Infantry Division, 2nd Howitzer Brigade, 6th Pontoon Brigade Battalion and a Mortar Brigade. Afaik a division is anything from 10,000 to 20,000 troops, brigade about 4000 and battalion about 800. So can we double-check that the calculations above are not speculative or original research, please? Second, on PBS's "If the Poles had been engaged in fighting in the main line of attack to the city centre and were involved in capturing some key defensive points" Baluk states that the Polish 1st Infantry Div. in Berlin captured "56 blocks, 7 industrial compounds, 4 subway stations and the Technical University Compound." The Polish 1st Infantry Div. also took 2500 German POWs, Baluk states. Third, on PBS's issue with what made the Polish Army's "contribution significant because of an action rather than nationality..." to make it "notable enough": It is generally agreed that Soviet tanks in central Berlin got stuck and were unable to advance without infantry support, it is widely documented (and even depicted in the Mosfilm re-enactment Liberation (film series)) that the Polish 1st Infantry Div. were called in to support them for the final push - an integral tactical involvement. PBS appears to suggest here that the significance I and Piotr see in the Polish Army has been based on its nationality, rather than a sound rationale in keeping with Wikipedia policy and guidelines; I think that was PBS' good faith, mistaken assumption. Fourth, several of my queries remain unanswered, including the Polish victory flag being raised on the battlefield, as commemorated each May 2 by the country of Poland on its Flag Day. I'd still wholeheartedly welcome answers to those queries. Fifth, let's see where we can identify a difference in principle: it appears that Piotr and myself concur that any participation in a battle by an identifiable state military qualifies that state for participation in victory or defeat of said battle (by this token the US is a joint victor at the Liberation of Paris where American fatalities are unknown, because they were possibly zero), the same principle is equally applied to wars (including at WWII where most Allied powers had less than 2% fatalities of the USSR); it appears that PBS feels that under a certain X% proportional fatality share, a participant in the battle does not qualify for participation in victory or defeat, however this is not applied to wars where one power has say 1.5% casualties of another it can still participate in joint victor or vanquished status. This difference of principle could be taken to MILHIST or some other council for resolution, to see how either principle can and should be universally applied - or indeed whether some other threshold, such as e.g. verifiability, should take precedence. -Chumchum7 (talk) 21:51, 19 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Additionally, on PBS' "Putting the Polish into the battle box is a distortion because the battle box does not allow the reader to tell scale the contributions were" - Plenty if not most of Wikipedia's battle boxes don't show the reader what the scale the contributions were and there are no major problems about that; if there is a problem in this specific case it can be solved by adding a Polish Army unit list, per Baluk, under Soviet strength. There's no nationalistic distortion going on here and per lessons learned at WP:ARBEE, etc., let's not jump the gun, please. -Chumchum7 (talk) 08:18, 20 March 2012 (UTC)


 * Recommendation: Within in this article, pontificating on Polish contributions seems to be undue weight but a compromise may be possible by creating a new article and placing a link in the See also section. If the Polish participation is particularly notable, someone should consider creating an article where it may be given proper treatment with reliable sources. Possibly Polish military actions in the Battle in Berlin as a title? I also can't seem glean the Polish contributions in the Order of battle for the battle in Berlin article...an article which needs quite a bit of attention in other ways. <b style="color:#00C">⋙–Ber</b><b style="color:#66f">ean–Hun</b><b style="color:#00C">ter—►</b>  16:58, 20 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks Berean. Just so we're on the same page, this discussion is not about whether or not to pontificate about the Polish Army's contribution in the article, it's just about the 'Result' line in the infobox. Your idea about dealing with the Polish Army's contribution in an earmarked place concurs exactly with what appears to have been consensus on adding such a section to the Battle of Berlin article. That's yet to be done. Thanks again, -Chumchum7 (talk) 17:19, 20 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Right. Probably best left as Soviet victory and not over stress undue relevance. <b style="color:#00C">⋙–Ber</b><b style="color:#66f">ean–Hun</b><b style="color:#00C">ter—►</b>  17:37, 20 March 2012 (UTC)
 * So how would you describe the Liberation of Paris: French victory, American victory, French and American Victory, or Allied victory? And the Battle for Caen, a British victory? And was the Prague Offensive not an Allied victory, but Soviet? And the Vienna Offensive, not a joint victory with Bulgaria? -Chumchum7 (talk) 20:49, 20 March 2012 (UTC)


 * It depends on the size of the contribution of a national component, the command structure of the forces involved, and the notability of the a nations actions in an engagement. For example the Polish 1st Independent Parachute Brigade played a notable role in Operation Market Garden, but troops from other nations who may have had as many troops in the action but involved in none pivotal roles do not get a mention in general histories. This article is a general history and the Polish contribution to the battle of Berlin is not mentioned in most English language histories histories of the battle and when it is mentioned seems to be usual a line and perhaps a paragraph. This article is far from a book. With the exception of the attack on the Reichstag and a couple of other all the rest of the article is at army level what is it other than the fact that they were Polish that makes the contribution of these units notable? -- PBS (talk) 20:08, 22 March 2012 (UTC)


 * Similarly, I am confused at Normandy landings, which lists numerous belligerents, but is an Allied victory, and most of the parties mentioned are not touched upon in the article. --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; talk to me 20:08, 21 March 2012 (UTC)


 * That you find it confusing is a good reason for moving a lot of the minnows out of the battle box. However a fundamental difference between the command structures on the Eastern Front and the Western Front is that the Western Allies had a formal system of a shared Combined Chiefs of Staff nothing like it existed on the Eastern Front. The Soviets did not share the higher command structure with their allies. So at a campaign level such as that on the Western Front are called Allied victories it is because the higher echelons of command and control of the armed forces were integrated, and was the model on which NATO was founded. The breakout from Normandy is a classic example of all the advantages and disadvantages of this system. Uncle Joe would never have accepted such an arrangement in the east. Countries like Australian could choose to withdraw from one area of the conflict and redeploy in another, but they could not and did not decide strategy (Eg Germany first). That was decided by Britain and America with the America gradually coming to dominate as the war progressed and they were able to mobilise their economic and manpower resources. Nevertheless in cases like Ruhr Pocket which only involved one Allied combatant, I think it should be described as a US victory rather than an Allied victory, as the latter implies a significant contribution by Commonwealth or French troops which is not true.-- PBS (talk) 20:08, 22 March 2012 (UTC)


 * "I also can't seem glean the Polish contributions in the Order of battle for the battle in Berlin article...an article which needs quite a bit of attention in other ways." - look for "1st Polish Infantry Division" and "2nd Polish Howitzer Artillery Brigade". They are listed . --Martynas Patasius (talk) 01:08, 22 March 2012 (UTC)
 * PBS, I've been waiting for your response to the explanations and rationale above for two days, as per the normal consensus-building process. Please participate in helping me work toward consensus. As a good faith gesture, to address your concern about proportionality, I'm adding a verifiable Polish Army unit list to the infobox (per Wikipedia precedent), which will show it was a small fraction of the Soviet total. Thanks, -Chumchum7 (talk) 07:53, 22 March 2012 (UTC)

I have been looking at the 2nd Guards Tank Army's contribution in the battle as mentioned by Beevor, so that the Polish contribution can be placed in to the general narrative. Here are some notes that I have drawn up:

By the evening of the 19 April Bogdanov 2nd Guards Tank Army was approaching the autobahn ring road from the north west (south of Oranienburg). The lead tank elements had outrun their infantry support and were taking losses from ambushes set up by Hitler Youth and Volkssturm concealed in houses and in the undergrowth. The next day Zhukov on hearing that the lead elements of the 1 Ukrainian front were entering the Southern Berlin suburbs, he ordered Katukov (commander of the 1st Guards Tank Army) and Bogdanov (commander of the 2nd Guards Tank Army) to spearhead his Front's advance into Berlin and be first "raise the banner of victory". They were to start their assault no later than 04:00 hours on April 21, but the first tank brigades did not reach the outskirts until the evning of the 21st.

By the 24 April the 2nd Guard Tank Army had penetrated Berlin's outer defences and were in Reinickendorf., but initially the lead elements of the Soviets assault suffered heavy casualties because the leading tank armies tired to use speed to talk the city and attempted to drive straight down the main roads. As this proved to be costly they switched tactics, moving more slowly with tanks driving down the pavements on either side of the road giving each other covering fire by firing across the road into the houses directly in front of the other tank.

By 27 April the 47th Tank Army was approaching Spandau. To its east the 2nd Guards Tank Army met heavy resistance and by the evening of the 27 April and had not advanced as far into Berlin as some other armies, they were just south of Siemensstadt [and Charlottenburg-Nord]

By 30 April the 2nd Tank Army had captured most of northern Charlottenburg while the Zorkov's remaining corps held the south, [The rest of the 1st Ukranian Front had been pulled out because of friendly fire incidents].

On the evening of May 1 remnants of the Müncheberg  the 18th Panzer Grenadier and 9th Parachute divisions broke out of the centre westward through the Tiergarten over the Charlotten Bridge and into to Spandau. and broke through the 2nd Guards Tank Army and headed west.

The problem here is that although initially tasked with spearheading the attack on Berlin the 2nd Guard Tank Army got bogged down in the north west suburbs and their task became a secondary one. Previously Chumchum7 (Talk:Battle of Berlin/Archive 7), you quoted this:

Detailed Polish detachments in the company of the Soviet units took part in the direct storming of Berlin. They were: the 2nd Howitzer Brigade, the 6th Motorized Pontoon Brigade Battalion and a Mortar Brigade, as well as the 1st Kosciuszko Infantry Division brought over from the front line on April 30. Polish engineers prepared 3 crossings of the river Spree for the Soviet armoured troops. Regiments of the Mortar Brigade detailed to the Soviet Divisions fought for Spandau and Potsdam. From April 27 to 30 Polish howitzers supported the Soviet attack on the Tiergarten. The regiments of the 1st Infantry Division were detailed to the Soviet armoured groups charging in the direction of Tiergarten. Soldiers of the 1st Infantry Division carried out the heaviest fighting on the Technical University Campus and in the environs of the Brandenburg Gate. On May 2nd, Berlin surrendered. During the fighting in the city the 1st Infantry Division captured 56 blocks, 7 industrial complexes, 4 subway stations and the Technical University Compound, much weaponry, including 24 tanks and self-propelled guns, 28 pieces of artillery, hundreds of trucks, fuel and ammo depots tec. Captured were some 2500 German soldiers. Alongside the Soviet flag, the Polish white-and-red also flew over Berlin.(Baluk pp.127-9)

I suspect that the mention of the Brandenburg Gate is a mistake and it should be the Charlottenburg Gate which is in the vicinity of the TU and between the TU and the Tiergarten underground station and would tie in with your comment in the archive "The Poles were tasked with securing the Charlottenburger bridge and taking the Tiergarten S-Baun which they did at daybreak the following morning of 2 May." The Charlottenburg Bridge is next to the Charlottenburg Gate and the Gate is only about 150m from the Tiergarten S-Bahn (see this google map).

This is a post to the talk page of the Battle of Berlin by Kierzek 15:41, 28 April 2011 (UTC):


 * On 1 May, they helped clear the Kaiser Friedrichstraße and then took the Trinity Church
 * The 2nd Polish ID fought in the Landwehr Canal area and the Poles took the Technical High School
 * The 3rd Polish I. Reg. came to the aid of the 66th Guards Tank Brig. north of the Landwehr Canal, which was presumably advancing down Gutenbergerstrasser and Wegelstrasser or along the side of the canal along Salzufer (or both) and then captured the Tiergarten S-bahn.

So the Polish infantry ended up at the time of the ceasefire within a few hundred meters around the Technical University. It seems to me that the Baluk p.127-9 is a hagiography, for example what where the Poles who had been fighting west of the Charlottenburg Bridge on the first, and our article claims "and thus the Polish 1st Infantry Regiment assigned to support [the Soviet] had to, in effect, take over their tasks". If so why is there no mention of fighting and failing to stop thousands of Germans who crossed the Charlottenburg Bridge during the breakout in the early hours of the 1/2 of May? The comment by Baluk about what the Polish 1st Infantry Division captured implies that they were fighting as a cohesive unit, yet they were mixed in with Soviet units and so it is probably true that the captured infrastructure were dual captures, and without a corresponding comparison with what was captured by other similar units it is impossible to tell if this was extraordinary or par for the course. For example Baluk says 2,500 captured soldiers, yet the total numbers captured were well in excess of 100,000 because any German man in a uniform was arrested. Further as one of the major breakouts routes went straight through the Polish positions around the TU, one would have expected them to take disproportionate number of prisoners.

I still do not think that the current map is appropriate for all the reason I have given, and I still do not see why we have have the Polish contribution to the battle in the article in such detail as regiment level when no other Allied units that took part in the are discussed below divisional level (With the exception of the combat to take key installations on the advance into the centre). Take for example the second paragraph "Starting from 16:00 on April 30" given that the 2nd Guards Tank Army was not involved in the assault on the centre of the city but as secondary role of cleaning up a western suburb why is the barricade on "Pestalozzistrasse a major obstacle" in the way to the capitulation of the German garrison? Because I am familiar with the battle in more detail than this overview allows I know what the paragraph means and can put it into context. But for a reader of the article who has know knowledge of the battle other than what they read here, and don't know the geography of Berlin, this emphasis on Polish actions is distorting the article by spending paragraphs discussing sub divisional units movements for AFAICT for no other reason than that they are Polish and not Soviet. I agree with Berean Hunter and this type of detailed information should be placed into a sub article probably not one called Polish military actions in the Battle in Berlin but one on the parent army such as assault on Berlin by the 2nd Guards Tank Army. Over time we could have articles on each Army's contribution to the battle. -- PBS (talk) 20:08, 22 March 2012 (UTC)


 * I see no reason to assume Baluk is unreliable, unless you show me an academic review that says so. If the sources vary, the article should make a note on that. Btw, here are some comments from The Economist, in the context of Polish flag in Berlin on May 2: "...they did make a tactically instrumental contribution to the fight: the Polish 1st Infantry Division bailed out a halted Soviet tank advance on  the Reichstag". --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; talk to me  22:48, 18 May 2012 (UTC)

MOS:BOLDTITLE
According to MOS:BOLDTITLE the first usage of the article in the lead should be in bold; it is not a "neologism". A neologism is completely different. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 01:33, 2 December 2013 (UTC)


 * Because of popularity of Wikipedia articles, and special early raking of Wikipedia articles in Google searches using a bold title for a descriptive name helps to creates a neologism. MOS:BOLDTITLE states "If an article's title is a formal or widely accepted name for the subject, display it in bold as early as possible in the first sentence". This is neither a formal or a widely accepted name for the subject. but instead it is a descriptive title take from the section heading in the article Battle of Berlin (which is an accepted name). The article Battle of Berlin summarises the fuller treatment of this major subtopic which has been placed here in a separate article of its own. -- PBS (talk) 13:26, 21 November 2014 (UTC)

POV?
Perhaps I am being oversensitive, but there does seem to be some real bias issues in this article - ironically pro-German ones. While the actions of individual German units and people are picked out in minute detail, the Russians are dealt with as an amorphous mass. I understand that this is mostly due to the western historiography, but this should be considered by subsequent editors here.—Brigade Piron (talk) 09:56, 21 November 2014 (UTC)


 * No it is not it is to do with the fact that the Soviets had an overwhelming force and the German defenders were relatively few. The result is that typically one understrength German division within Berlin was up against a one or more Soviet armies. See for example this map copied from Ziemke 1969,Battle For Berlin: End Of The Third Reich p. 93.


 * So to keep a balance in the fighting it is inevitable that a German division will be mentioned in the same paragraph as a Soviet army. In specific last engagements such as the final taking of the area around the Reichstage and the taking of the Reich Chancellery then Soviet forces are mentioned in more detail, down to individuals who made a notable contribution.


 * Some Polish contributors have put in more emphasise on the Polish contribution than I think the article needs and if we were to do the same for the regiments in the Red Army then this article would be the length of a book. But Wikipedia articles are written as a collaborative effort and so the information is here.


 * Something I have been thinking of doing is writing a detailed articles on the different Red Army armies assaults on Berlin starting with the 2 Guards Tank Army, so that the Polish contribution could be put into the correct perspective. The 2 Guards Tank Army does not get much of a mention in this article (apart from the Polish units) because although it was initially given a lead role in the attack into Berlin, it got bogged down in the suburbs and did not enter the citadel until the very end of the battle. For similar reasons the 47th Army only gets two sentences although of course they too were involved in heavy fighting on the north western approaches to Spandau.


 * I have not done it because I have been involved in other projects such as the Waterloo Campaign, but if none else does so one day... -- PBS (talk) 14:06, 21 November 2014 (UTC)
 * I agree with PBS. I have, in the past, put in additions as to Polish units contributions but it could use more; and there could be some more added as to specific Soviet units but concision also plays a factor; this is an overview article and certainly other sub-article can be done and with links to here, as needed. Kierzek (talk) 16:19, 21 November 2014 (UTC)