Talk:Battle of Babylon Hill/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 21:54, 24 September 2019 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:54, 24 September 2019 (UTC)
 * (Just in case you'd forgotten about this.) Harrias  talk 10:09, 6 October 2019 (UTC)


 * No DABs, external links OK
 * Images properly licensed
 * "nominal" victory rather than "notional"
 * were carrying out reconnaissance passive voice "reconnoitering"
 * Link Somerset, musketeer, dragoon, artillery on first use
 * were able to pull back from the hill under the cover
 * town itself but were unable comma after "itself"
 * defence on Yeovil Bridge, over the River Yeo, a combination of infantry and artillery awkward
 * I have rephrased to "Bedford had posted a guard, consisting of both infantry and artillery, on Yeovil Bridge, which spanned the River Yeo." Harrias  talk 08:55, 8 October 2019 (UTC)
 * Before the entire foot >Before all of the foot
 * amongst Moreton's men too "as well"
 * Which son of William Balfour?
 * None of the sources say. Harrias  talk 08:55, 8 October 2019 (UTC)
 * lost five, and the Royalists around 20 MOS says that spelling needs to be consistent for quantities of the same things, overriding the normal requirement about spelling numbers below ten
 * No need to link publisher locations--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:32, 8 October 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your review; I have edited the article to account for each of your points, and have addressed a couple directly above. Harrias  talk 08:55, 8 October 2019 (UTC)