Talk:Battle of Caen (1346)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 00:15, 26 November 2018 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:15, 26 November 2018 (UTC)
 * No DABs, external links fine.
 * Images appropriately licensed.
 * the deterioration of the English position in Flanders What does this refer to?
 * Rephrased to, hopefully, be clearer.


 * Philip IV relied on his powerful navy typo?
 * Fixed. (Took me ages to spot it! I'm impressed that you did.


 * Hyphenate: last minute repairs
 * Done.


 * executed by the French king. The English discovered a proclamation from the French king too close in conjunction
 * Better?


 * They then turned north and a month after the capture of Caen the English won the Battle of Blanchetaque Missing some commas
 * D'oh!. Fixed.


 * Short and sweet.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:39, 21 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Hi, you are clearly a glutton for punishment. Points above all addressed. Gog the Mild (talk) 20:42, 21 December 2018 (UTC)