Talk:Battle of Cer/GA1

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 19:42, 30 June 2013 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:42, 30 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Capitalize mountain: Cer Mountain
 * Done.


 * Stocks of munitions: had better munition stocks,
 * Fixed.
 * Check again.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:30, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
 * How about | now? 23 editor (talk) 01:53, 8 July 2013 (UTC)


 * Only name year in dates on first mention or if its in another paragraph.
 * Done.


 * Not necessary to give nationality of each unit if it's clear who it belongs to.
 * Removed.


 * "the Cer" reads very oddly. Use either just Cer or Cer Mountain.
 * Done.


 * Second use of this phrase: across the Drina brought an end to the first Austro-Hungarian invasion of Serbia Reword one or the other.
 * The repeating sentence has been removed.


 * Cannon is both singular and plural.
 * Remove the "s"--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:30, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Done. 23 editor (talk) 01:55, 8 July 2013 (UTC)


 * Any book or source that you don't use in the article should either be deleted or moved to a "Further reading" section
 * All books and sources provided seem to be used as refs in the article.


 * Image licenses good
 * Couple of duplicate links that need to be removed
 * Done. 23 editor (talk) 00:07, 8 July 2013 (UTC)


 * External links good, no DABs.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:42, 4 July 2013 (UTC)