Talk:Battle of Chosin Reservoir/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk) 11:09, 12 February 2010 (UTC)

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 * (a) ; and
 * Gave it a copy edit.
 * (b).
 * Yes.

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 * (a) ;
 * Yes
 * (b) ; and
 * Yes. Footnoted as per B-class MILHIST article.
 * (c).
 * Yes.

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 * (a) ; and
 * Yes. Like some of the other editors, some more information on aviation support would be nice.
 * That I have no idea...someone who is more familiar with the US Navy and Marines could help out here. Jim101 (talk) 19:20, 12 February 2010 (UTC)
 * (b).
 * Yes.

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 * Yes. Very even handed.

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 * Yes.

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 * (a) ; and
 * Yes. Checked the dabs and all pix have alt text.
 * (b).
 * Yes.

Three things I'd like cleared up before passing the article:
 * 1) Mutual distrust between Oliver and Almond. Reasons why Oliver disliked and distrusted Almond are given. Reasons for the reverse are not.
 * Cleared up, Almond found Smith's caution annoying
 * 1) AA guns of the 57th Field Artillery Battalion. I don't have your source. Mine assigns the AA to the 15th AAA Automatic weapons Battalion.
 * D Battery of the 15th Antiaircraft Battalion was attached to the 57th Field Artillery Battalion. Cleared up. (BTW you don't have Appleman's book? I'm surprised.)
 * 1) More reinforcements arrived at Hagaru-ri on 30 November. What were they and how did they get there?
 * Hudong-ni as explained in the "East of the reservoir" section, I added that fact in this section as well. Jim101 (talk) 19:05, 12 February 2010 (UTC)

All issues resolved. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:39, 12 February 2010 (UTC)