Talk:Battle of Entebbe/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Buidhe (talk · contribs) 23:26, 2 January 2019 (UTC)

It's great to see more coverage of African topics at Wikipedia. Full review forthcoming. buidhe (formerly Catrìona) 23:26, 2 January 2019 (UTC)

Prose comments

 * "Tanzania to the south"—state that it is a neighboring country
 * "The Tanzanians successfully occupied the area" remove "successfully", it comes off as POV
 * "The Tanzanians successfully occupied the area, killing hundreds of Libyans and ending their airlift in support of the Ugandan government. " You might consider rewording this sentence entirely: "The Tanzanians occupied the area, killed hundreds of Libyans, and ended the Libyan airlift in support of the Ugandan government."
 * "Tanzania blunted the assault" do you mean "Tanzania halted the assault"?
 * All done as recommended.

Source checks

 * I checked some of the online sources. The only issue I found was "as was a battery of Ugandan 122mm guns at Katabi Barracks". The article cited mentions both Katabi barraks and 122mm guns, but does not support this statement.
 * Oops. Removed mention of the barracks. Thanks for taking up the review, I've responded to your comments. -Indy beetle (talk) 07:35, 3 January 2019 (UTC)