Talk:Battle of Fakhkh/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 18:24, 26 June 2020 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:24, 26 June 2020 (UTC)
 * One DAB to Bayah, external links OK
 * Done
 * Images properly licensed
 * Put the title of El-Hibri's article in title case
 * Done
 * that a general indignation arose against them This doesn't sound like you, but more like a quote. Rephrase
 * It actually was my wording :). Rephrased a bit nevertheless.
 * and were left prey to the beasts awkward. perhaps something like "their bodies were abandoned to scavangers for three days" or somesuch.
 * That actually was a (rather too close) paraphrase of Veccia Vaglieri. Rephrased completely.
 * Otherwise nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:48, 12 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks Sturmvogel 66, much appreciated! Constantine  ✍  07:54, 18 July 2020 (UTC)
 * a small reminder. :) Constantine  ✍  16:01, 24 July 2020 (UTC)