Talk:Battle of Fort Lahtzanit/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: — Ed! (talk) 03:33, 3 December 2010 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria) (see here for this contributor's history of GA reviews)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written:
 * Comments
 * 1) The lead should be expanded to give a little context. Make it a few paras and talk a little about which war, which country, etc. Right now it is very brief.
 * 2) Whose plan is Operation Badr? What does it say? The article should be self-sustaining, ie all the context for what is going on should be here without having to click another link.
 * 3) The article is short on links. See if articles exist for any of the towns, military units, etc. in the article.
 * 4) "...between an area two kilometers south and one-and-a-half kilometers north of the fort." - these measurements need convert templates.
 * 5) "Abassi was reinforced with a Sa'iqa company (lit. lightening; Egyptians commandos)" - link to company (military unit) and commando here. Military jargain tends to be lost on the average reader.
 * 6) The references aren't consistent. The proper format for them is "Name year, page."
 * 7) It is factually accurate and verifiable:
 * Pass no problems there
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage:
 * Pass it needs a little more context to explain which war and what was happening in the area around this battle, etc.
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy:
 * Comments
 * 1) 'Isolation' section: "They succeeded in attracting enemy fire," - avoid the use of the term "enemy" to keep the article neutral
 * 2) It is stable:
 * Pass No problems there.
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate:
 * Pass An infobox is in use.
 * 1) Overall:
 * On Hold for just a few comments before it passes. — Ed! (talk) 05:57, 3 December 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for making this review! All comments/issues have been addressed I believe. Let me know if there's something else to be done. --Sherif9282 (talk) 11:38, 3 December 2010 (UTC)