Talk:Battle of Galveston Harbor (1862)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:47, 14 May 2021 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:47, 14 May 2021 (UTC)
 * No DABs, external links OK
 * Images appropriately licensed
 * In "the" shoreline
 * Corrected
 * Part of the Confederate coastline was within the state of Texas, and the most significant port at that time was Galveston. Awkward
 * Rephrased, is this better?
 * more bases for Union ships and fewer bases for blockade runners. proximity alert for "bases"
 * Dropped the second one
 * What kind of ships did Renshaw have?
 * Done. Thank goodness for DANFS.
 * continue to fire would be bad political optics Suggest "against the laws of war"
 * Done
 * Short but sweet--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:00, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * - Are my changes satisfactory? Hog Farm Talk 05:01, 28 May 2021 (UTC)