Talk:Battle of Hayes Pond/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 23:03, 11 October 2021 (UTC)


 * "(including Lumbees and Tuscororas)" - Is this spelling of Tuscororas intentional? I think Tuscaroras is more common
 * Fixed.
 * "With Cole leading them as their "Grand Wizard"," - Go ahead and link Grand Wizard
 * Done.
 * Are the sources more specific as to what kind of place Hayes Pond was? Was it a settlement, an actual pond, or something else?
 * Some sources call it a "swamp", and it is indeed swampy (I went once). Found a DOT document that describes it as a former mill pond and added. There was once a dam that retained the water there but it washed out a few years ago.
 * "He also found klansmen hiding in the brush" - you capitalize klansmen in most of the other instances; maybe capitalize here?
 * Done.
 * "and no known Klan rallies have taken place there since." - unfortunately, this statement may require an "as of" date
 * Qualified.
 * Sources and images look fine

Good work on what had to be a difficult topic; placing on hold Hog Farm Talk 02:33, 14 October 2021 (UTC)
 * I have responded to your comments. -Indy beetle (talk) 04:34, 14 October 2021 (UTC)