Talk:Battle of Huoyi/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 05:31, 10 February 2013 (UTC)

I'll start this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 05:31, 10 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Latter or later? During the latter reign
 * Nice map, but the movements of the Sui forces are not marked in red.
 * What's dii?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 08:07, 10 February 2013 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the review. It's "later", and "dii" is a typo for "dignity" (my keyboard went on strike, apparently). On the map, the movements are not those of the Sui army: the map represents the entire period of warfare, and I couldn't fit the initial Sui movements in, so for this campaign there's only the initial Tang advance from Taiyuan to Chang'an... Anything else? Constantine  ✍  20:39, 13 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Then please change the description on the map file itself.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:52, 13 February 2013 (UTC)