Talk:Battle of Jenin (2002)/Archive 1

Cassus Belli
Why is is that we have a cassus belli entry on this article, we dont have cassus belli for other attacks by Palestinians - and isn't really general practice elsewhere (I'm sure if Bin Laden edited the S11 article he'd add a Cassus Belli entry. This legitimizes the attack by suggesting the actions where justified and is clearly P.O.V. We should either add Cassus Belli everywhere or not use it at all - it can't simply be used selectively whenever an editor decides something was justified. The text implies (or at least "it may be inferred from") that the PA suggested the 3,000 death toll. Is this true -- if so, say it, if not, say who did say "3,000"... -- User:GWO


 * Beats me. I was just answering a question on a talk page, by copying a couple of factoids from the Jenin article. My impression was that some anti-Israeli political group was trying to get Israel in trouble with the UN, by claiming genocide or crimes against humanity.


 * Kind of like the "World Conference on Racism" in September 2001 which only found one country (suprise! Israel) as racist -- although it permits Arabs to be citizens and permits non-Jews to practice their religion. Other countries, such as the non-democratic Arab bloc which persecute non-Islamic people, got no criticism. --Ed Poor

precursors
I have added a precursors section as nothing happens in a vacuum Juanita 20:21, 11 October 2005 (UTC)

Battle
I plan to work on this section a bit. Try to make it read a bit better and clearer. I will justify my changes here. Juanita 20:21, 11 October 2005 (UTC) I worked it over quite a bit, presenting the Israel and consensus point of view, while not editing out the Palestinian position. I added some footnotes. Please check out my sources before you edit. Juanita 00:16, 14 October 2005 (UTC)
 * Thanks for putting the time in to sort out tedious text, good job! I did a few edits to 1-2 where I thought was a bit too OR, and also retrieved some sourced material that you had removed (although in paraphrase and shortened). You left in the part about 'war crimes' but took out the context, so I re-added it. Ramallite (talk) 13:33, 14 October 2005 (UTC)


 * Done a bit of my own. -- Tomhab 23:19, 14 October 2005 (UTC)

identifying civilian[s] from combatant[s]
this article is biased. Wherever the word Israel appears, language is curbed and the circumstances are glossed over. Wherever independent sources appear the claims are quickly rebuked. what a joke /lame.

I have removed a section from this text that claims that Palestinian civilian deaths can be imputed to the difficulty in "identifying civilian[s] from combatant[s]". This is POV and frankly does not tally with events as reported.

The many cases documented in the reports compiled by Amnesty International and Human Rights Watch confirm that many of the civilians were killed

a) in situations where their role as non-combatant was beyond any reasonable doubt

See the cases listed in Amnesty International's report on Jenin: ]

b) in houses that were demolished with little or no notice given to the occupants.

I quote from Amnesty International's report on Jenin:

"In several cases the IDF caused the deaths of Palestinians by demolishing homes while residents were still inside. IDF soldiers frequently failed to give adequate warnings before demolishing houses, refused to allow family and neighbours to warn residents, failed to offer help themselves or to call rescue units or ambulances and sometimes shot at those who tried to help." []

User:Faulenzer


 * Problem is that the way you've changed it assumes that the "at least 22" bit is a fact - which is disputed. -- Tomhab 13:25, 12 May 2005 (UTC)


 * I read some of the report, and found this diclaimer:
 * "IDF figures give 52 Palestinians killed and say that only 14 were not fighters (i.e every Palestinian male between 15 and 55 was counted as a fighter). Amnesty International has not studied each case; according to Palestinian statistics and Human Rights Watch about 22 of those killed were fighters. According to an UNRWA survey taken in the Jenin refugee camp after the IDF left the camp in April, only one person is currently reported as missing. See Israel, the Occupied West Bank and Gaza Strip, and Palestinian Authority Territories : Jenin IDF Military Operations, Human Rights Watch Report.
 * Since they data relies on secondary sources, it is disputed. The situation is that now almost everyone agrees on about 52 death toll but there are still disputs over the amounts of civilian killed, and how many were indeed killed by the IDF and bot by their fellows militants' booby traps. MathKnight 13:33, 12 May 2005 (UTC)


 * The same quote doesn't say that HRW didn't study each case though...? Actually why does the article say that 7 civilians were killed according to the IDF, when actually it was 14? -- Tomhab 13:47, 12 May 2005 (UTC)


 * The text is based on a press report or citation, but since many links turned dead it will take time to find it. I'll do it soon. MathKnight 17:18, 12 May 2005 (UTC)


 * Well, I found earlier estimation in Time's article "Then came the counting of casualties — and arguments about the count. Throughout the operation, Palestinian officials had said that as many as 800 had been killed. As is the case in the Middle East, the figure was inflated to fit local beliefs of Israeli depravity and Palestinian victimization: last week an Iranian waiter in Rome told an Israeli visitor of 16,000 people slaughtered in Jenin. The reality was different, though body counts and estimates of civilian casualties vary. Charles Kapes, the deputy chief of the U.N. office in the camp, says 54 dead have been pulled from the wreckage and 49 Palestinians are missing, of whom 18 are residents of the camp. Human Rights Watch says 52 were killed, of whom only 27 were thought to be armed Palestinians. The Israelis say they found 46 dead in the rubble, including a pile of five bodies that had been booby-trapped. Of these 46, say the Israelis, all but three were 'fighters,' men ages 18 to 40. The Jenin Hospital, meanwhile, says 52 camp residents died, including five women and four children under the age of 15. Of the 43 dead men, eight were 55 or older and therefore probably not involved in the fighting. No matter whose figures one accepts, 'there was no massacre,' concludes Amnesty's Holley." So what we realy learned here that it agreed the only 52-54 Palestinian were killed, the inner body count and classification of the dead is still hotly disputed. MathKnight 21:37, 12 May 2005 (UTC)

Massacre = Hoax
I have to say, I believe that when used in referece to Jenin, the term "massacre" is a gross exaggeration, but I feel calling it a "hoax" is also completely inappropriate. A hoax is something that is completely false, basely and quite POV. In my opinion it would be a hoax is the IDF never entered Jenin. I don't know if some people are in denial but people genuinely died in this conflict.

If no-one replies within 3 days or so I'll remove the category reference (which is what I'm writing this because of). Please reply with your views on this. -- Tomhab 03:50, 19 Mar 2005 (UTC)


 * I agree, putting this in the category Hoax is a totally disproportionate and misjudged classification. I can't see any possible reasoned argument supporting the Hoax classification, please change ASAP.  --Pluke 04:06, 19 Mar 2005 (UTC)


 * I'm guessing that the person who put it in this category feels that the many massacre accusations were a hoax, which they apparently were. Yes, people died in this conflict, which is only to be expected in a pitched battle between armed combatants; comparable numbers of soldiers on each side were killed. Jayjg (talk)  02:17, 20 Mar 2005 (UTC)


 * I strongly oppose to removing this category. Since the accusation of alleged "massacre" and "mass atrocities" was so widely circulated, even in the Western media, and is still being used in anti-Israel propaganda, and since there is a long history of anti-Semitic blood libels, this is not just a mere hoax, but one designed to bring old hatred back alive. Words can kill, and a serious encyclopedia is the right place to reassert NPOV.
 * Israel's actions in Jenin were "every bit as repellent" as Osama bin Laden's attack on New York on September 11, (Guardian, lead editorial, April 17 2002)
 * "We are talking here of massacre, and a cover-up, of genocide," (a leading columnist for the Evening Standard, London's main evening newspaper, April 15.)
 * "Rarely in more than a decade of war reporting from Bosnia, Chechnya, Sierra Leone, Kosovo, have I seen such deliberate destruction, such disrespect for human life," (Janine di Giovanni, the London Times, April 16.) [www.freerepublic.com/focus/f-news/1324221/posts Jenin Jenin Film-Maker Admits Fraud]         ←Humus sapiens←Talk 07:16, 20 Mar 2005 (UTC)


 * Well, I have to go here with Humus Sapiens. The Jenin massacre was a fraud (a false allegation with deliberate intention to decive world opinion, as it was proved by the photoes of the fake funeral). Moreover, this fraud had deadly results for the Jews of Europe, who suffered from a violent wave of antisemitic which was spawned because of the biased report of this allegation in the European press. The "massacre" in Jenin is regarded by many as something similiar to the Protocols of Elders of Zions (a known antisemitic fraud, used as a pretext to 100 year of persecution against Jews and which is still count as a true document in Arab countries and Palestinian society (see Al-Manar for example). MathKnight 08:11, 20 Mar 2005 (UTC)


 * "The Jenin massacre was a fraud (a false allegation with deliberate intention to decive world opinion, as it was proved by the photoes of the fake funeral)" i'm not arguing this point, the point that i am trying to address is the Battle_of_Jenin_2002, which both Israeli's and Palestinian's agree was a real event, classifying it under a hoax is therefore wrong. If events surrounding the battle can be proven to be as Hoaxes you may consider setting up a separate page, but to classify the Battle_of_Jenin_2002 as a hoax is misleading.  Using the same argument you are trying to use, you could classify Bloody_Sunday_(1972) as a hoax because of some of the misleading 'propaganda' surrounding the event, or even more extreme you could classify WW2 as a hoax because of some of the misleading propaganda delivered by both sides.--Pluke 23:05, 20 Mar 2005 (UTC)


 * Ah, I see your point; you're saying that the Battle of Jenin was not a hoax, even if the Jenin Massacre was. Is that correct? Jayjg (talk)  23:11, 20 Mar 2005 (UTC)


 * The difference is that a hoax is something that is intended to deceive. The world population generally agree it didn't happen, but saying its a hoax assumes it was used to fool people. My belief is that this was not the intention - people were genuinely worried at the scale of death and massacres going on. A false claim would harm any movement (hence why the Palestinian authorities came out with a more accurate estimate before any independent report did). I still feel calling it a hoax is a POV judgment making this a one sided argument within a neutral encyclopaedia. -- Tomhab 17:08, 20 Mar 2005 (UTC)


 * Actually I notice that Fatah say only 56 died on April 30th, whereas western media were reporting "probably not massacre" from 25th or so. Anyway point is look at hoax category contents - this is not similar to any of them. -- Tomhab 17:55, 20 Mar 2005 (UTC)


 * The primary claim of those who consider it to be a hoax is that Arab spokespeople and leadership wilfully intended to deceive the world into believing thousands (later hundreds) of innocent Arab civilians had been massacred. The record tends to indicate that this is the case.  I recall reading an article by Middle East correspondent Stewart Bell during the incident itself.  He went looking for proof of the massacre, and was told by local Palestinians that a large refrigerated truck a ways off was filled with dead bodies.  I guess they didn't expect him to actually check; when he did, he found it was filled with apples.  There has been a lot of posturing and playacting going on for the Western press, with a willful intent to deceive. Jayjg (talk)  19:34, 20 Mar 2005 (UTC)


 * Another cases of deliberate frauds by Palestinian were the noteable fake funeral, caught by IDF UAV. The drone captured on video a staged in funeral in which the mourner accidently dropped the coffin and the "body" ran away. Another case is that of a Jewish-French television crew that pretended to be pro-Palestinian and ignorant of Arabic, and while it pretend to cooperate with the Palestinian sharade, it documented how the Palestinian activists briefed the interviewed people what to say and made up stories for them. MathKnight 20:15, 20 Mar 2005 (UTC)


 * Hmmm OK I see you guys feel quite strongly about this but point out that this is a little one-sided debate. I take it that most people here are Israelis? I'll arrange a RFC in a bit to get a wider range of views. -- Tomhab 20:35, 20 Mar 2005 (UTC)


 * I am not an Israeli, but why should it even matter? I do feel strongly about this because I happen to know a little bit from history of anti-Semitism and other hate crimes: creating such hoaxes is one stage in the process of dehumanization of an opponent. BTW, I'll have to disagree with your position: hoax category contents - this is not similar to any of them. - please see Blood libel, Ritual murder, The Protocols of the Elders of Zion, etc.  ←Humus sapiens←Talk 23:14, 20 Mar 2005 (UTC)


 * Sure. I understand this is a sensitive issue, but you're moving your own personal feelings into a NPOV encyclopaedia article. The reason why saying it is a hoax is not right is because the examples above are baseless:
 * Ritual murder - I presume it refers to accusaionts where it didn't happen. Well if it didn't happen its baseless
 * The Protocols of Elders of Zion - written by someone who wasn't to do with Zionism in anyway
 * Blood libel - Again, baseless
 * The difference is that in Jenin, people did die, and the fact that Israel didn't allow people to disprove it propogated it further. People have said it is possible summary executions were possible. I hope this clarifies. -- Tomhab 23:37, 20 Mar 2005 (UTC)


 * I'm trying to stay NPOV and would appreciate the same. Why did Zionism came into this picture is a logical jump I can't comprehend. Again, the question here is not whether "people did die", but rather was there a "massacre" or "genocide" or something "horrific beyond belief" (as the UN special envoy Roed-Larsen qualified it ). This case clearly demonstrated that the intl media and agencies - including the UN - were a little too eager to jump to conclusions vilifying Jews and Israel. IMHO, NPOV would be to stand up against that, not condone it. I offer a compromise: mark Jenin Massacre a hoax and this article a Category:Propaganda examples.  ←Humus sapiens←Talk 00:42, 21 Mar 2005 (UTC)


 * Please see the proposed RFC below. Comment/change as you see fit. I'll add it to the RFC list in a week or so, so we have some time to edit it. -- Tomhab 23:25, 20 Mar 2005 (UTC)


 * How about a different approach; separate this article into two, one about the Battle of Jenin, and one about the Jenin Massacre. The Battle of Jenin can be a factual description of the events, timelines, military actions, people killed, etc.  The Jenin Massacre can outline the accusations of massacre, their various sources, and the subsequent disproofs/retractions.  Thoughts? Jayjg (talk)  01:15, 21 Mar 2005 (UTC)


 * That would be a good idea. The article seems to get worse over time. Last time I checked there were more balanced views, but now the IDF POV seems to dominate. There are quite a few foul propaganda methods employed meant to associate Palestinians with dirty tricks - such as this "fake funeral" sentence (therefore everything they say must be false! Yes?). How is that relevant in "Jenin battle" context? If I was a Palestinian, then this would be another nakba denial or massacre denial if you like. Btw. even Shimon Peres called Jenin refugee camp events "a massacre" ( Ha'aretz censored the article and therefore it can't be found on their site ) . What we see here is pure revisionism of the worst kind. One can read contemporary articles from e.g. Ha'aretz and see that it was common knowledge that hundreds of people were killed and some were buried under rubble (and were subsequently unaccounted for). If everything was OK then one must ask why Israeli forces didn't let neither Palestinian humanitarian organizations nor UN and media in right after hostilities ended. Also it is should be not rocket science to understand that it was "battle" only to Israelis and Palestinian militants, for other civilians involved it was not a "battle", but a humanitarian/financial/etc problem. Therefore there should be separate article dealing with the facts about dead, wounded, homeless, etc and without military POV. If it was "massacre" or not is their to decide not ours. Magabund 11:50, 1 May 2006 (UTC)
 * This article is rife with POV, and outright falsehoods eg the UN did not accept the figure for the number of dead that Israel crowed over. What the UN said was: "In Jenin camp, by the time of the IDF's withdrawal and the lifting of the curfew on 18 April, at least 52 Palestinians, of whom up to half may have been civilians, and 23 Israeli soldiers were dead. Allegations by Palestinian Authority officials in mid-April that 500 or more persons were killed in Jenin camp were not substantiated by the evidence that subsequently emerged". Other observers noted (invasion of the Jenin Refugee Camp from 3-18 April 2002)
 * ....... People saw tanks and bulldozers run over bodies repeatedly in the process of bulldozing homes and moving around, sifting bodies into pieces and scattering them in the rubble. This has made it difficult to identify exactly how many have been killed. ...... members of Jenin Inquiry viewed many such partially decomposed bodies and severed, decomposing body parts in homes and in the streets of the camp. ...... bodies were still being recovered from under the rubble as late as early August. On 4 August, the bodies of one young boy and two adult males were discovered when an outer edge of the piles of rubble were sifted through. Four days later, another body was found compacted into the floor of his home. Public discourse about the number of dead has not taken such additional discoveries into account.
 * Remember just how much money is available to defend Israel (the US gives them $3 billion a year, with many other soft loans etc), and what the stakes are. We're talking about a $trillion or more of real estate that is grave danger of going back to its rightful owners at some time in the future (not too long, judging by the fright that Hezbollah handed out). There is no money whatsoever in criticising Israel - and I can't be bothered to get into a bad-tempered fight to improve this article.
 * PalestineRemembered 21:49, 3 November 2006 (UTC)


 * Errm, actually that could work. I quite like it as an idea. -- Tomhab 03:26, 21 Mar 2005 (UTC)


 * OK got rid of the RFC bit. Just started the Jenin massacre stub. As i get more free time I'll add bits to it

Hey, the link to the source saying that the massacre is not a hoax is broken. Somebody should fix it. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.218.236.221 (talk • contribs)


 * Thanks. There is plenty of links in this very Talk section (above). ←Humus sapiens ну? 00:52, 29 June 2006 (UTC)

What DID the IDF say, and who said it first?
I'm well aware that many of the websites put up in the last week have been emotive and twisting (ie sites that mention the radio report without the clarification). Looking for reports on the web from the slightly more reputable sites finds:


 * 4th April
 * I moved General Ron Kitrey's "apparently hundreds" quote here, based on Robert Fisk's assertion in his The Great War for Civilization that Kitrey '"said early in the battle that there were "apparently hundreds" of dead' (pg 497), PalestineCampaign.org's citation of a Reuter's 12th of April report (to which I changed the footnote to from the equally biased Newsmax.com), and the Pravda article found at http://english.pravda.ru/main/2002/04/12/27588.html. Yes, all of these sources are biased towards the Palestinians, but I find it difficult to believe that they are colluding in a conspiracy about the date of this quote. I also changed "the IDF quickly clarify" to "the IDF later say" as the timeline change makes it unclear as to how "quickly" the clarification came. Rojo gotz mojo 04:29, 13 February 2006 (UTC)
 * Rojo, lots of problems with this: First, both of your articles are datelined April 12, and the Pravda article says that the quote was from "today" - so there is no justificaiton for moving the date that I can see, in fact, these are confirmations of them. Second, the Pravda article makes it clear that the correction was quick, and the UPI article says "The army quickly issued a "clarification" ".  Third, you are calling United Press International (the Newsmax source given) "equally biased" to Pravda and the Palestine Campaign, and using those as sources!? That hardly seems to make sense, the UPI is considered reputable, Pravda is certainly not, and a pro-Palesitnian advocacy group is no one's idea of neutral. --Goodoldpolonius2 04:43, 13 February 2006 (UTC)
 * Goodoldpolonius. Yeah, I have to apologize to you and the community. My head was doing a brain fart on the date because of the difference between European and American dating systems (I kept reading it as April the 4th.). Stupid and not diligent, sorry. I've got an email into Fisk as to what he meant by "early in the battle." We'll see if he responds. I'm not going to apologize as to your third point. The UPI, under the influence of owner Sun Myung Moon, has clearly become a political organ of the right. It is certainly no more reputable a source then the Reuters report cited by Palestine Campaign. That said, I did totally screw up the date change, which was the entire reason for my involvement with this entry, and I therefore do owe and apology.Rojo gotz mojo 05:09, 13 February 2006 (UTC)


 * I wouldn't trust Fisk as NPOV source, either. ←Humus sapiens ну? 05:15, 13 February 2006 (UTC)


 * Fisk is certainly not neutral, but he is diligent. Which contrasts mightily with the equally not-neutral (but more accepted because they kowtow to power) and less diligent reporters of the Associated Press and similar. I know when Fisk is giving an opinion and when Fisk is giving a fact. 24.21.191.199 05:26, 13 February 2006 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your graciousness on the date, but I still have to disagree with your approach to sources. One does not counter a perceived bias in  a mainstream source by replacing it with an obviously biased source in the other direction, especially when you don't have a factual disagreement with the first source.  The tone of the Pravda article alone ("The things that Israeli Brigadier-General Ron Kitrey said, were shocking.") should be enough to indicate a problem, let alone the newspapers reputation for reporting, and to include a pro-Palestinian NGO is equally dubious. If you are going to quote a news source with a clear anti-Israel leaning, why not at least do something half-way respectable, like the Guardian story on the subject? --Goodoldpolonius2 05:28, 13 February 2006 (UTC)
 * Reuters 24.21.191.199 05:30, 13 February 2006 (UTC)


 * On April 4, Secretary-General of the Palestinian Authority, Ahmed Abdel Rahman, complained in an interview on Palestinian television about “…world silence over the massacres being perpetrated against the Palestinian people.” (BBC Worldwide Monitoring) Secondary source


 * 6th April
 * On April 6, Nabil Sha'ath delivered a speech at a meeting of the Arab League, in which he charged that “a ?massacre’ was underway in the Palestinian refugee camp of Jenin.” (Deutsche Presse-Agentur) He also “compared Israeli actions in the West Bank towns of Jenin and Nablus to the 1982 massacres of hundreds of Palestinans…” (The Associated Press) Secondary source


 * 7th April
 * On April 7, Abdel Rahman told NBC’s Tim Russert, “The victims so far has been over 250 Palestinians killed, many of them are children and women.” Secondary source
 * Saeb Erekat is quoted by Washington Post as having said “This is not fighting between armies, but a massacre in Jenin camp." Secondary source


 * 9th April
 * "They [Palestinians] estimate that more than 100 people have been killed by Israeli fire since the army ringed the camp on Wednesday" Guardian
 * "The number of Palestinians killed in Jenin is unclear. Israeli sources say it could be 150, but the Palestinians say it's higher." Children's BBC


 * 10th April
 * "As many as 100 people have been killed in the camp since the start of the invasion", most likely a Palestinian source. Guardian
 * Palestinians "reportedly suffered as many as 100 dead", most likely a Palestinian source. Guardian
 * "Israel says 150 Palestinians died in Jenin but Palestinians say the number is far higher" - BBC
 * On April 10, Sha'ath claimed, “We have 300 martyrs in Jenin in the last few days.” (Agence France Presse) Secondary source
 * According to one siteSaeb Erekat made four statements of "more than 500", "could reach 500", "more than 500" again, "They are burying more than 300 Palestinian in Jenin refugee camp alone"


 * 11th April
 * Quite emotive pro-Palestinian columnist in the Guardian, UK: "Hundreds are reported killed, including many civilians", most likely a Palestinian source. Guardian


 * 12th April
 * Palestinian Information Minister, Yasser Abed Rabbo, accuses Israel of digging mass graves for 900 Palestinians in the camp, - reasonably common knowledge
 * Saeb Erekat "hundreds dead"
 * United Press International quoted the Secretary-General of the Palestinian Authority, Ahmed Abdel Rahman, as saying "[that] thousands of Palestinians were either killed and buried in massive graves or smashed under houses destroyed in Jenin and Nablus."
 * IDF spokesman Brigadier-General Ron Kitrey mistakenly says hundreds killed when meant "hundreds of casualties"


 * 15th April
 * IDF put palestinian dead at 45 (common knowledge?)


 * 16th April
 * Unqualifiable report of two IDF spokesmen saying: "Early yesterday an IDF spokesman said the figure was likely to be 'several hundred' dead Palestinians and 23 dead Israelis. Another spokesman put the estimate at a precise 250 Palestinians dead but by last night the IDF count of dead Palestinians had been wound back significantly to 45." http://smh.com.au

Sites that mention the AFP report about IDF source claiming 250 killed:  Could not find ANYTHING of the sort on new.bbc.co.uk, guardian.co.uk. Google yielded the above.
 * http://www.khaleejtimes.co.ae/ktarchive/140402/middleeast.htm - twice

Sorry meant to do a more complete list but should be enough. Have to go now. You guys decide who said what first from that but I wouldn't weigh it all on Ron Kitrey. was the most useful

Hope it all helps. Sorry about relying on guardian.co.uk -- Tomhab 16:16, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC)

I think your list sum up the issue very well. MathKnight 20:30, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * Yeah I think basically we can say that
 * IDF predicted 150 dead at around 9th with the estimate reducing to probably less than 100 on 11th/12th then finally at 45 on the 15th from an actual body count.
 * There wasn't any real official palestinian number but: Saeb Erekat first spoke of a massacre on the 7th, and on the same day Abdel Rahman said 250 killed many of them men and women. By the 10th, Saeb Erekat claimed 500 dead, and 12th Yasser Abed Rabbo, a Palestinian minister, claimed 900 were dead. 12th again Secretary-General of the Palestinian Authority, Ahmed Abdel Rahman, claimed "thousands" dead. This was the same day as IDF spokesman Brigadier-General Ron Kitrey made his report with the mistake "hundreds killed" when he meant to say "hundreds of casualties".
 * Independent reports actually seemed to stay constant at around "up to 100 killed".


 * Scary what a bit of ignorance in the media can do. Anyway, unless someone points to something I've missed, we can say the the reports of "hundreds dead" did not originate from the IDF. -- Tomhab 20:48, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * OK I'll admit that the format of my edit is a little edgy, but it includes every source anyone could really want, and cannot be argued with. Reverting can end now hopefully -- Tomhab 00:36, 4 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * "IDF spokesman Brigadier-General Ron Kitrey mistakenly says hundreds killed when meant "hundreds of casualties"" : It's just an opinion. Maybe Ron Kitrey is good enough in english and he wanted to say "hundreds killed". The medias listening to Ron Kitrey cannot imagine he doesn't know what means "killed".


 * --Marcoo 00:53, 4 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * From my understanding of the situation, Ron Kitrey has probably never seen Jenin. He sits behind a desk all day at some Israeli office for media relations and every now and then gets handed somethin to say to the press. He is told what the IDF want him to say and thats what he says (hence the title IDF spokesman - he speaks for the IDF). If the IDF quickly say he made a mistake, then his report was a mistake. His opinion doesn't matter, because he's representing the IDF opinion. Maybe he misread what was handed to him in the first place. Does this really matter? -- Tomhab 01:21, 4 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * It matters in a way. Two possibilities : IDF thought first, had enough information to think that hundred of Palestinians were killed, and after the IDF realized (maybe asking officers and soldiers) that it was not possible, so they explained Kitrey meant "hundreds of casualties", but it's not necessary true that he meant that. (Israel estimates 150 dead on the April 10).
 * The other possibility is what you propose : Kitrey made a mistake reading a paper.
 * I think there is no reason to choose between the first or the second possibility. --Marcoo 21:36, 5 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * Again does it really matter? "hundreds" is quite a vague number. The original reason for this quote being included was that Ron Kitrey was to blame for the overblown numbers. I've shown you that numbers of up to 900 were suggested long before, so Ron Kitrey was not (solely) to blame. Could you be any more pedantic? I'm sorry for being short but what do you want me to say? Israel DID kill 52 Palestinians with dubious reason and possible (probable?) breaches of human rights, but "hundreds" of them were not killed. There was wanton killing. There were no mass graves. I'm pretty sympathetic for the Palestinian people (note distinction from militants) but you really cannot pin the blame on them for this. -- Tomhab 22:39, 5 Jun 2005 (UTC)

"The original reason for this quote being included was that Ron Kitrey was to blame for the overblown numbers." -> No, I just wanted the article to be a little bit more precise and complete on a confused context about the figures. --Marcoo 23:01, 5 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * No thats what I changed it to, to make sure the quote wasn't used out of context:


 * 16:13, 2 Jun 2005, 193.56.241.67, Its first use which, quite POVly, ignored the clarification. It also said it wast the first use of an inflated death toll - quite wrong


 * 20:21, 2 Jun 2005, Tomhab, After approaching a revert war I change the text within the paragraph to put it as a possible cause for the media hysteria. Only did a few minutes research but since the original user provided one example I assumed there was only one example of an inflated number. I knew that Palestinian exaggerations came before so made that clean.


 * 07:20, 3 Jun 2005, Marcoo, You enter the conversation and change the chronology to make it appear that the Ron Kitrey's comments were announced before any exaggerated estimates. I'll assume good faith here and it was just a mistake


 * 00:27, 4 Jun 2005, Marcoo, After entering a revert war insisting that the Israeli comment was before all, then changed to most comments of a massacre (you did 4 reverts so should have been banned for a day as punishment), you include a second quote about 250 from not a news site, but a pro-Palestinian "fan site".


 * Are you happy yet? Because of your insistance on following your own ignorance on the matter I had to spend over an hour researching the topic and finally providing the dates, and announcements of anything relevant to the body count above. I don't normally flame new wikipedians and I wouldn't have if you hadn't have insisted on your petty points in order to make israel look bad. You've been unable to take a NPOV and solely attempted to promote pro-Palestinian points (even though some are long dead or did you not hear that only 52 people died in Jenin?) typical of someone who is unable to take both sides of an argument. -- Tomhab 23:44, 5 Jun 2005 (UTC)

"You enter the conversation and change the chronology to make it appear that the Ron Kitrey's comments were announced before any exaggerated estimates"
 * Not "before any", don't exagerate, I wrote "before most". The only link which was in the article was, with the date of April 16,2002. This date made me make a mistake on the chronology, that's true, I recognize it. But your resume gives all the blame on me ! :-(

I just would like to notice that Chanting Fox simply deleted the Ron Kitrey's declaration, and MathKnight did the same.

The Ron Kitrey's declaration was deleted in every article where it has been inserted, which is, for me, but maybe I'm wrong, a kind of vandalism. (, by MathKnight,,  : declaration deleted twice by Jayjg)

When you wrote "the only IDF report with such a large body" "and came after inflated Palestinian reports of a massacre.", it wasn't a correct presentation, as your complete chonology shows after. So maybe my reverts were not correct (I continue with my first mistake), but the version I reverted 3 or 4 times also were not... I don't think I commited a crime when reverting ; and, for my opinion, to delete relevent facts, as it happens for Ron Kitrey's declaration, is more problematic on Wikipedia.

And about "fan-site", when you wrote "from not a news site, but a pro-Palestinian "fan site"", please notice that I used the same site that was in the paragraph before (13 May 2005 version , part "Allegations of a Massacre", 3rd paragraph, I couldn't guess it was a fan-site).

About my "own ignorance on the matter", please be less categoric, I've lived in Palestinian cities and some friends of my friends were injured during Jenin operation, some of them lost a leg or more (there are not included in the only 52 people killed). I can make mistake about facts, but I try to be honnest and not to hide anything.

"You've been unable to take a NPOV and solely attempted to promote pro-Palestinian points (even though some are long dead or did you not hear that only 52 people died in Jenin?) typical of someone who is unable to take both sides of an argument."
 * :-( Your conclusion is unfair. The article at the beginning didn't mention anything of the confused context of figures. I wanted to provide a more NPoV adding a fact I read on the net about IDF rumors. Bu it has been deleted many times. Many people in April 2002 gave false figures, based only on rumors, but there were no mention at all of the false figures given by the Israeli side.--Marcoo 09:17, 6 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * I reverted your addition because they were factually disacurate, to say the least. The way you wrote it clearly implied that the Palestinian allegations massacre came only after the IDF made such "allegation", which is simply not true, and thus removed. It was explained in the edit summary serveral times. MathKnight 10:35, 6 Jun 2005 (UTC)

Sorry, I just got frustrated when you refused to let the issue die. Next time, before there is a revert war, please just use the talk page. Using "removal of correct facts is vandalism" does not give people the right to continue revert wars. -- Tomhab 11:52, 6 Jun 2005 (UTC)

NPoV
"This appears to be the only IDF report with such a large body count and came after inflated Palestinian reports of a massacre." : This is not at all a NPoV.

Can you explain why did you deleted "The same day, an Israeli military source told AFP some 250 Palestinians were killed." ? (so it's not the only IDF report).

"and came after inflated Palestinian reports of a massacre" : It's just a PoV. There were Palestinian allegations BEFORE and AFTER the 12th. Why do you choose "before" ?

--Marcoo 00:29, 4 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * The point was that the western media mass hysteria could have been caused by his mistake. Point was that it wasn't the first report of an inflated estimate. Besides I've diced that whole section up now -- Tomhab 01:17, 4 Jun 2005 (UTC)

Mistakenly, clarify
I'm sorry, Tomhab, not to close the issue, but Jayjg insists to write "Ron Kitrey mistakenly says hundreds killed" with the argument : "of course it was a mistake since hundreds weren't killed."

Ok, so it means that I can write: "Saeb Erekat mistakenly make mention of a massacre" since there was no massacre or "Saeb Erekat mistakenly estimates 500 or more dead" since 500 weren't killed.....

For every reader, "mistakenly" supposes that Ron Kitrey misundertood what IDF explain to him, it's just the interpretation given by IDF, but it's not neutral to suppose it true.--Marcoo 15:59, 6 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * Unless you are saying there was some conspirecy, given the quick clarification, it is very reasonable to believe that Kitrey made a mistake in his statement (i.e. slipped in his tongue) rather than he "told the true" and was "covered up" by IDF statement. Moreover, since he is IDF spokesman, he was the one responsible for issuing the clarification. This was not the case with Saeb Erekat. MathKnight 16:38, 6 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * I have to repeat what I said above :
 * In the chronology of the article, we can find three items about israeli declarations :
 * On April 10, Israel estimates 150 dead
 * On April 12, Ron Kitrey mistakenly (or not) says hundreds killed
 * On April 14, the estimation progressivley came down (from 250 and 188) to a final figure of 45


 * So for me it's not very clear if IDF first thought on the 12th that hundred of Palestinians were killed and realized only after this figures was not possible, or if Kitrey misunderstood something. I never talk about "conspirecy", but everybody knows that boths sides in a conflict (which is also mediatic) sometimes say things a little bit different from the truth. If we always believe IDF only on their declarations and adopt their interpretation, it's useless to talk about neutrality here. That's why I propose to only report the facts : Kitrey says this, and IDF quickly explain he meant this. --Marcoo 17:48, 6 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * You failed to address the issue of quick clarification. Unless you are assuming some weird conspirecy theory I think "clarification" is suitly reasonable. MathKnight 19:15, 7 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * A little lie, if it is, is not always a conpirecy. I think you want to see everywhere conspirecies. --Marcoo 22:33, 7 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * OK I've had enough of this argument. What it comes down to is that this is Marcoo's speculation. The website provided says "clarification", so thats what we're using as its source. We CANNOT and WILL NOT include anything else until a link can be found that says the second statement was anything other than a clarification. If one is found, MathKnight (nor anyone else) can possibly argue with Marcoo - thats all that can be said about it.


 * Wikipedia can only report what others have said about the topic, not what editors think may have happened(its called original research, which wikipedia does not like). Thats the end of the topic - there is nothing more that can be said. -- Tomhab 02:13, 8 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * Don't exagerate everything please ! And I'm bored to be accused to think about conspiracy when I just want to say that IDF's point of view is not above everything. I've never ask to include any original research. My proposition was "IDF spokesman Brigadier-General Ron Kitrey says hundreds killed, IDF quickly explain he meant hundreds of casualties"
 * Where is the original research in my proposition ?
 * What's wrong with my proposition ?
 * And more, the website provided wrote "clarification" but between two '"', see here : "The army quickly issued a "clarification" saying that Kitrey meant to say "casualties - those killed or wounded" rather than just the number of those killed.". It's presented as IDF's word. That's why my proposition is more neutral. If we can't agree on this, we could make a request for a mediation. --Marcoo 12:17, 8 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * What's wrong is you're trying to re-word the source to say what you think it should have said. Jayjg (talk) 16:25, 8 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * You didn't tell me where is the original research in my proposition, because there's not. You're unable to tell exactly what's wrong with any word of my proposition, any meaning, the only thing you say is an interpretation about my proposition, which doesn't exists in it.
 * If I wanted to re-word something, if I was obsessed by a conspiracy, if I wanted to say that IDF lied when telling that Kitrey meant something else, I would have proposed "Ron Kitrey was told to talk about hundreds killed, but later IDF realize that the figure was over-estimated and decide to save themselves by insinuating that he meant hundreds of casualties". If we want to stay on the facts : Ron Kitrey said X, and IDF explain Y. What is more neutral ? Really, I don't understand your point of view. --Marcoo 20:52, 8 Jun 2005 (UTC)
 * If I wanted to re-word something, if I was obsessed by a conspiracy, if I wanted to say that IDF lied when telling that Kitrey meant something else, I would have proposed "Ron Kitrey was told to talk about hundreds killed, but later IDF realize that the figure was over-estimated and decide to save themselves by insinuating that he meant hundreds of casualties". If we want to stay on the facts : Ron Kitrey said X, and IDF explain Y. What is more neutral ? Really, I don't understand your point of view. --Marcoo 20:52, 8 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * Please re-read Tomhab's comments. Jayjg (talk) 21:15, 8 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * I've just re-read them, and I've already answered to Tomhab's comments. If we report what others have said about a topic, we have to present a fact as a fact, and an interpretation/PoV as an interpretation/PoV. Here, if we stay on the facts, we could write : "Ron Kitrey said X, and IDF explain Y". If we want to present a PoV, we could write : "Ron Kitrey said X and IDF explain later he mistakenly said this". But Wikipedia is not IDF, isn't it ? --Marcoo 22:26, 8 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * OK - just read through this entire talk section and I'm not sure, but this might be what Marcoo is after (but wasn't explicit in his first comment). Changing:


 * IDF spokesman Brigadier-General Ron Kitrey mistakenly says hundreds killed, but IDF quickly clarify he meant hundreds of casualties (killed or injured).


 * to


 * IDF spokesman Brigadier-General Ron Kitrey says hundreds killed, but IDF quickly clarify he made a mistake and meant hundreds of casualties (killed or injured).


 * If thats right it looks reasonable. To me Marcoo's first comment implied removing the entire second half of the clarification as irrelevant hence the confusion. -- Tomhab 23:21, 8 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * I will be OK with : "IDF spokesman Brigadier-General Ron Kitrey says hundreds killed, but IDF quickly explain he made a mistake and meant hundreds of casualties (killed or injured)."


 * For my level of english, "clarify" means "to make understandable", so if we use the verb clarify, it means that we'd suppose true the fact that he made a mistake. That's why I proposed before "explain", which doesn't presume if the explanation is the good one or not.
 * --Marcoo 23:49, 8 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * I prefer Tomhab's version; governments and organizations issue "clarifications" all the time. Jayjg (talk) 16:28, 9 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * Seconded as quickly explain sounds odd --Pluke 16:39, 9 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * I don't accept "clarify", because it's a way to suppose true the fact that he made a mistake. So it's only a PoV. If there is no solution, I will ask for a mediation, but I don't consider Jayjg's position as impartial. --Marcoo 21:47, 9 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * My position? There are three people so far here who consider the wording fine, only you disapprove. Jayjg (talk)  21:50, 9 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * If it's your position as an admin (so as a possible mediator), I persist to say that your position is not impartial at all. You're three so you're right ? New rule on Wikipedia ? For me the respect of NPoV is more important than how many are on each side. It should be the same for a mediator, not considering how many support a proposition. --Marcoo 22:18, 9 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * It's my position as an editor. And now there are four people who think the word is fine, against one who does not.  This is called "consensus" on Wikipedia, and it's not a new rule at all.  What you think is a NPOV issue is simply not, according to the consensus. Jayjg (talk)  19:24, 10 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * Hi Marcoo, Please don't take offense at what i'm about to say, but you seem to be having a problem properly grasping the meaning of the english in this statement. From my position as having British English as a first language, this is not POV in the slightest.  If English is not your first language are you sure you can make statements querying the validity of phrases that you are not fully familiar with?  Even with your interpretation of the word clarify, if you go back to the article this was taken from  it quotes IDF spokesman Brigadier-General Ron Kitrey as saying "there were apparently hundreds of people killed in the Jenin refugee camp.".  Note the use of apparently, this shows a level of uncertainty and would therefore need clarification, and thus making clear.  Again, please don't take this as an attack.


 * As everybody knows, english is not my first language. Ok. But when I go on Merriam-Webster online dictionary, I read for "clarify" that one of the meanings is "to make understandable". So it appears that this word have the exact same meanings in French. So from what I understand, if we write : "IDF quickly clarify he made a mistake", it means that we suppose true the fact that he made a mistake. Am I right ot not ? So I ask for a verb which doesnt suppose if it is true or not. And notice that in the link, the article used two """ for the word "clarification", they is a reason. If "quickly explain" is "too odd", you can propose something else, after all, you know english better than me.--Marcoo 08:01, 10 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * "Note the use of apparently, this shows a level of uncertainty and would therefore need clarification, and thus making clear." -> It's not the point here. IDF didn't clarify the word "apparently", they said that Ron Kitrey meant "casualties" when he said "killed people". It's not the same thing at all (that's maybe why the article put "clarification" between two """). Using two """, the article from Newsmax is more NPoV than your proposition. --Marcoo 08:15, 10 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * I feel it is the word mistakenly giving you real problems. would a statement such as


 * IDF spokesman Brigadier-General Ron Kitrey tells Israeli Army Radio that there are apparently hundreds killed, the IDF quickly [clarifies/corrects] this position, stating that there were hundreds of casualties (killed or injured).


 * clear this up? Clarifies is still a perfectly good alternative.  Feedback please  --Pluke 12:03, 10 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * As I explained since the beginning, the problem doesn't come only from "mistakenly", it also come from "clarify". I repeat : using two quotes """ for the word "clarify", the article from Newsmax is more NPoV than your proposition. I ask for a neutral verb (which doesn't suppose if Ron Kitrey made a mistake or not) : "to say", "to explain", "to tell", whatever you want. I think it's not too much to ask for... :-( --Marcoo 12:26, 10 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * so IDF spokesman Brigadier-General Ron Kitrey tells Israeli Army Radio that there are apparently hundreds killed, the IDF quickly corrects this position, stating that there were hundreds of casualties (killed or injured). is ok with you, though please understand in my eyes it is the same as clarifies? --Pluke 14:56, 10 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * saying that they clarrified is not POV - look back at the source - it directly implicates that the second statement from the IDF was related to the first. Quoting Marcoo which doesn't suppose if Ron Kitrey made a mistake or not - if you look at the source the second statement is released solely to explain Ron Kitrey DID make a mistake! To imply otherwise is not just POV, its wrong. I suggest the best move you could do is put a double quote (") around clarify, to make it clear that it was their wording, not wikipedia. -- Tomhab 18:18, 10 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * That would look like scare quotes. Jayjg (talk) 19:22, 10 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * Possibly, but it is what the source uses... -- Tomhab 19:40, 10 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * And since it's neutral and accurate, we can use it to; no need to make it look like we don't believe them, which is exactly what it will look like. Jayjg (talk) 20:38, 10 Jun 2005 (UTC)

I'm OK with Tomhab's proposition. Ok with : "IDF spokesman Brigadier-General Ron Kitrey tells Israeli Army Radio that there are apparently hundreds killed, the IDF quickly "clarify" [or issued a "clarification" saying that] he meant hundreds of casualties (killed or injured)." (even if I'd have prefered to use a neutral verb like 'explain' instead of using a verb between two double quotes ; it would have been more simple !). --Marcoo 01:23, 11 Jun 2005 (UTC)

One-sided
This article is biased toward Israel. Robin Hood 1212 22:36, 5 May 2006 (UTC)
 * Yeah, right. If facts contradict theory, so much worse for the facts. ←Humus sapiens ну? 23:07, 5 May 2006 (UTC)
 * please give some basis for that accusation and we can work to resolve any problems you may have.Pluke 00:13, 6 May 2006 (UTC)

200 square metres
One should look at the pictures and then try to imagine 200 square metres. It is about 15x15 metres. Maybe the writer meant 200x200 metres, which seems a bit more plausible area of 40 000 square metres. I added the link to Jenin pictures (this.is/jenin) for clarification. Believe me or your own eyes, the destroyed area is not 15 by 15 metres. And one can call this article NPOV? I didn't expect to read IDF press releases from Wikipedia. --Magabund 11:29, 1 August 2005 (UTC)


 * We have worked very hard to make this article NPOV. Take a look at http://www.mfa.gov.il/MFA/MFAArchive/2000_2009/2002/4/Aerial%20Photographs%20of%20Jenin (included in the links at the bottom). It shows a series of aerial photographs of the devastation. Whilst your point that 200m2 is very different from 200x200, saying that the 40 000m2 of area was destroyed isn't right. The article meant that 200x200m was the areas of greatest fighting. The article never makes any mention of the total area of devastation.
 * Sorry - I just noticed - I was wrong :) -- Tomhab 12:59, 1 August 2005 (UTC)


 * If you have any other points which you feel are POV, please let us know. -- Tomhab 12:54, 1 August 2005 (UTC)


 * Found a first hand source that puts the destroyed area at 100x200 - good enough for me. -- Tomhab 13:09, 1 August 2005 (UTC)


 * Sorry, but this does not add up, most sources say that the area was as big as several football fields. British correspondents from "The Independent" who visited it described the area as 400x500 metres. Btw. I did not say it _is_ 40 000m2, I said that 200x200 metres is a bit more plausible than 15x15 metres. Now you are saying that it is an area of 20 000m2, but I doubt that. And I am not talking about the whole article written from Israeli POV. From the NPOV it was a by any means a large scale destruction of a internationally recognized refugee camp. The military significance is _only one aspect_ in the disaster that hit people (about 15 000) living in Jenin refugee camp. Trying to show it in the light of military conflict and mostly dispute about body counts is shown already in the title - Battle of Jenin. It would be more helpful, maybe, to view it in the humanitarian/occupation context.--Magabund 15:40, 1 August 2005 (UTC)

Well, one way to POV an article is to insert a series of highly edited and selected quotes in order to make a political point. Let's not do that again, please. Jayjg (talk) 15:43, 1 August 2005 (UTC)


 * Well, the quote from US envoy (among others) was absolutely relevant, because it shows the humanitarian dimension to this "battle". I cannot see why did you remove them instead of adding something. Did you find any of the quotes to be false or something? They were not "highly edited". I spent about an hour to search as complete versions of the quotes as possible. And of course you are welcome to make them more complete. Maybe I should add Yassir Arafat's Jeningrad quote also? --Magabund 16:05, 1 August 2005 (UTC)


 * Part of the problem with this particular battle is that the varied views as time goes by. If you knew the number of dead as in the 500+ range then its a lot more tragic than someone thats around 50.


 * The media frenzy on the battle is by far the most signifant (and interesting) part of it all hence why a lot of the article is dedicated to it. I have to agree with Jayjg that the quotes do not help make the article NPOV. If you feel like something is POV, then unPOV it, don't just try and counter it by making it more POV the other way. -- Tomhab 16:33, 1 August 2005 (UTC)

Tomhab's comments are spot-on. Jayjg (talk) 17:21, 1 August 2005 (UTC)


 * Exactly, thats what I said also. If you felt that my addition was POV then you should have unPOV'd it. But you deleted instead. The article fails to mention international outcry that followed. That included US president who twice asked for withdrawal and numerous other diplomats/politicians. This is relevant information. The dispute about body counts is more like obfuscation. As I understand, this article is currently not about what happened in Jenin refugee camp for about two weeks starting from april 3. 2002, but about media frenzy surrounding these events. --Magabund 20:45, 1 August 2005 (UTC)

How can you agree be saying exactly what Tomhab says when he disagrees with you? As for the quotes, they were inherently POV; their choice, editing, etc. They added no value to the article, only POV. The solution was not to add more biased quotes saying other things, but to remove them entirely. Jayjg (talk) 00:31, 2 August 2005 (UTC)


 * I wrote this but it failed to submit after the database was locked up


 * As far as I can see, there is around a quarter to each of:
 * The battle
 * The media frenzy of a massacre
 * The human rights reports
 * External links


 * The reason for the disproportion of information is thus. The article missed out the media section and vague comments about allegations of a massacre were spread throughout. Because of the difficultly deciphering what actually happened (who said what, when and what actually happened), there was a lot of "vandalism" from over-zealous persons who fell on one side of the Israel/Palestine argument. 95% of the arguments were nonsense based on people's badly formed opinions based on misinformation.


 * You can see above a nice big conversation with Marco about one particular incident. Anyway, I did several hours research collecting as many reports on the 'massacre' as possible and put them on the talk page, but it wasn't enough. So it went onto the main page to finally shut people up.


 * It is interesting in my opinion, so not worth deleting, but it is also disproportionally sized compared to other sections.


 * The article is well researched with the context of each quote considered, so adding something like "This is horrific beyond belief", "It is totally destroyed, it looks like an earthquake has hit it", a "blot that will forever live on the history of the state of Israel" which isn't sourced, dated, and certainly no context (which is the most interesting part) put in is very hard to include. -- Tomhab 01:03, 2 August 2005 (UTC)

Numbers etc
Ramallite, the first figures given by Palestinian spokesman Saeb Erekat, according to journalist Tom Gross, were 3,000 Palestinian dead. As for the causes of the British misreporting, it can't have been because of an Israeli exclusion zone, because they were reporting from inside the camp. Phil Reeves of the Independent, for example, wrote at least one of his notorious stories from inside a damaged house where he had spent the night. SlimVirgin <sup style="color:purple;">(talk) 21:25, 10 March 2006 (UTC)
 * The second paragraph is the least of my concerns - I had some changes in the 1st and 3rd also ... Ramallite <sup style="color:DarkBlue;">(talk) 21:38, 10 March 2006 (UTC)


 * I didn't see any changes in the third paragraph. As for the first, the only change I saw is that you want to dispute it was a counter-terrorist operation (or rather, you want to dispute stating it as a fact), but I don't know of anyone who says otherwise. The State Dept, for example, refers to it as counter-terrorist, and no one disputes that the Israelis had targeted the people who organize suicide attacks. SlimVirgin <sup style="color:purple;">(talk) 21:50, 10 March 2006 (UTC)
 * The US State Department is hardly an objective source regarding Palestine, to put it mildly. Palmiro | Talk 21:57, 10 March 2006 (UTC)
 * It counts as a reputable source for Wikipedia. But regardless, who seriously disputes that it was a counter-terrorist operation? SlimVirgin <sup style="color:purple;">(talk) 22:05, 10 March 2006 (UTC)
 * I've restored Ramallite's edit while we discuss it, because I hadn't actually intended to delete it. SlimVirgin <sup style="color:purple;">(talk) 22:14, 10 March 2006 (UTC)

As for the first paragraph, are you saying that Palestinians (regardless of how one feels about them) share the POV that it was a counter-terrorist operation? It shouldn't be necessary to pull out countless Palestinian references that called it 'aggression' (again regardless of if one thinks they are right or not - this is about neutrality). Regardless of whether the State Dept is biased or not, their saying something doesn't automatically make it neutral. We are not using DOS as a source here, that would be a tangent sentence that we are not going into. Ramallite <sup style="color:DarkBlue;">(talk) 22:24, 10 March 2006 (UTC)
 * Would you two stop for a second so I can save my stuff?? GASP! This is my third attempt. If you look closely at my edit, I don't think the first paragraph is actually reducing the notion of "counter-terrorist". I was careful not to use the word "claim" (i.e. that the IDF 'claims' it was counter-terrorist) because it's more solid than that. Is my wording really that problematic? Slim, if you are sure that there were journalists in there during the block, who were saying that there are hundreds or thousands of bodies and secret mass graves, then I withdraw my opposition to your second paragraph, although I do contend that part of the reason it drew attention was because of the media blackout (irrespective of the reports coming out). Ramallite <sup style="color:DarkBlue;">(talk) 22:24, 10 March 2006 (UTC)


 * First, yes, there were British journalists reporting from inside the camp. Indeed, that was Phil Reeves' excuse afterwards: that he had written his story from inside a damaged house in the camp where he had spent the night, trying to write by candlelight, highly personalized account etc.


 * I didn't get your point about perceived bias between being killed and losing lives. I used a different phrase only to avoid repetition. I don't see how there's a POV difference.


 * As for "aggressive" versus "counter-terrorist," the two are not mutually exclusive. It would be a pretty ineffectual counter-terrorist operation if it weren't aggressive. SlimVirgin <sup style="color:purple;">(talk) 22:35, 10 March 2006 (UTC)
 * It was called "an aggression" not "aggressive", you misread the above. The Palestinians media carried the headlines about "Udwaan Isra'ili" (Israeli aggression) for months during and after the operation. Ramallite <sup style="color:DarkBlue;">(talk) 22:58, 10 March 2006 (UTC)


 * Why have you added "also"? Now it sounds as though "oh, by the way, some Israelis died too." The two sentences shouldn't be linked by "also." SlimVirgin <sup style="color:purple;">(talk) 22:38, 10 March 2006 (UTC)
 * I was concerned about Palestinians are merely "killed" vs Israelis "lose lives". There is a perceived distinction between the two when talking about a battle, such phrasing does in fact suggest one side is more righteous. But I understand the repetition concern. Can you suggest a compromise? Ramallite <sup style="color:DarkBlue;">(talk) 22:58, 10 March 2006 (UTC)
 * I honestly can't see any difference. Which side sounds as though it's more righteous, and in what way? SlimVirgin <sup style="color:purple;">(talk) 23:02, 10 March 2006 (UTC)
 * And how did the word "also" help? SlimVirgin <sup style="color:purple;">(talk) 23:02, 10 March 2006 (UTC)


 * "Lost their lives" generally (though not always) is more emotive language than "killed". I contend that "lost their lives" is used more often to generate sympathy, whereas 'killed' is not necessarily as often so. The 'also' was my attempt to equate "killed" with "loss of life" to sort of level the field between the two, not to suggest an "oh by the way" POV. So again, I would appreciate compromise language if you can suggest any. Of course, if there is no difference between the two, we could just switch the two phrases' locations? Compromise language (for either) would be things like "fatally wounded", "lost", "fatally ambushed", etc. Don't get me wrong, I have nothing against sympathizing with the Israeli side, but doing so at the expense of the Palestinian side is not neutral in my mind. Ramallite <sup style="color:DarkBlue;">(talk) 23:24, 10 March 2006 (UTC)


 * Okay, I've gone for the repetition instead of possible POV problems, and it now says "killed" for both. SlimVirgin <sup style="color:purple;">(talk) 01:31, 11 March 2006 (UTC)


 * 1) Counter-terrorism implies that the Palestinians were terrorists - disputed by what... around 1 billion people worldwide?
 * 2) "Lost their lives" is unacceptable whilst Palestinians were merely "killed". If you still consider them the same as no different you won't mind me making it "Palestinians lost their lives" and "Israelis died" then?
 * 3) The fact the media were barred from the scene is significant - they felt they were being barred from viewing the massacres that the Palestinians were talking about
 * 4) Not really related, but only 23 Israelis died - people keep inserting the figure 33 (which is either wrong or unsourced). -- Tomhab 01:26, 11 March 2006 (UTC)


 * I think all your points have been dealt with already, except for the media exclusion, but there were, in fact, journalists reporting from inside the camp. See above. In any event, what difference does it make whether you're a reporter inside the camp, inside Israel, or on the other end of a telephone? The journalists who got it wrong reported what largely anonymous sources told them with no evidence whatsoever to back it up. Where they were when they wrote their copy isn't the issue. SlimVirgin <sup style="color:purple;">(talk) 01:35, 11 March 2006 (UTC)


 * Using PR terms from one side such as "counter-terrorist operations" is surely perceived by readers as POV. You may argue otherwise, but the perception remains. Or can we start categorizing suicide bombings as "counter-occupation operations"?

HRW report and BBC link
I've removed the BBC link from the HRW report section, as it was an obvious attempt to discredit the HRW report via original research. The link provided was not a response to the report; indeed, it came out before the HRW report, and did not mention it. You can't use your own arguments to try to refute various sources, you have to come up with a reliable source which itself tries to refute them. Again, please read WP:NOR. Jayjg <small style="color:darkgreen;">(talk) 20:34, 25 June 2006 (UTC)


 * It provides the background of the circumstances surrounding the HRW report's findings, and puts them into perspective. Looks like it's me vs. a few disciplined users attempting to whitewash facts through suppresion and intimidation, or dare I say censorship? It's all in context, so the obscure OR accusation is unfounded. Ulritz 23:25, 29 June 2006 (UTC)


 * How does it provide background regarding the HRW report? The HRW report came after the article and the quote in question. You're trying to insert OR in the article via this quote. Bibigon 23:55, 29 June 2006 (UTC)


 * "Puts them into perspective" = original research. Please read the policy; it is not "obscure", but rather one of Wikipedia's 3 fundamental content policies. The only person connecting this article to the HRW report is you. Jayjg <small style="color:darkgreen;">(talk) 16:13, 30 June 2006 (UTC)


 * I'd agree that the link isn't that useful (I wouldn't really say it was original research, just not that useful), but one thing which I note about that section is that the article says the HRW report focused "mainly on the actions of the IDF", yet we have 2 quotes saying about how Palestinians endangering life, but none about the IDF endangering life.
 * If someone is keen to balance it up a bit, it might be an idea to find the quote that suggests Israelis used human shields?
 * Having said that its not all that bad. -- Tomhab 10:24, 1 July 2006 (UTC)
 * Is there any reason to believe the Israelis actually used human shields? Bibigon 17:57, 1 July 2006 (UTC)
 * All observers told of it, here's the UN report (Israel refused to let their team go in, apparently terrified that war-crime allegations would be made against individual soldiers, on top of anything else).
 * 01/08/2002 - Press Release - SG2077 - REPORT OF SECRETARY-GENERAL ON RECENT EVENTS IN JENIN, OTHER PALESTINIAN CITIES
 * ....... Human shields: There were numerous reports of the IDF compelling Palestinian civilians to accompany them during house searches, check suspicious subjects, stand in the line of fire, and in other ways protect soldiers from danger. Witnesses claim that this was done in the Jenin camp and other Palestinian cities. The Government of Israel has denied that its military personnel systematically engaged in this practice, but on 5 May issued "an unequivocal order ... that forces in the field are absolutely forbidden to use civilians as a means of 'living shield'". .......
 * (Note that this report didn't actually agree that only 70 or so Palestinians were killed in Jenin. There were that number in Nablus, which was far less attacked).
 * ......... Death toll: Four hundred ninety-seven Palestinians were killed and 1,447 wounded in the course of the IDF reoccupation of Palestinian areas from 1 March through 7 May 2002 and in the immediate aftermath. Most accounts estimate that between 70 and 80 Palestinians, including approximately 50 civilians, were killed in Nablus. The IDF lost four soldiers there.
 * PalestineRemembered 19:01, 3 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Yes, all sorts of reports. Here's what it says about the "Battle of Jenin": "By the time of the IDF withdrawal and the lifting of the curfew on 18 April, at least 52 Palestinians, of whom up to half may have been civilians, and 23 Israeli soldiers were dead." Jayjg <small style="color:darkgreen;">(talk) 19:09, 3 November 2006 (UTC)

Media reports vs. IDF claims
The section Inflated body counts shows (on April 14) references to reports by the BBC and Australian newpapers that give inflated body counts of 250 and 188. The referenced articles indicate that these numbers come from the IDF, but do not indicate the exact source (like done on April 12, "IDF spokesman Brigadier-General Ron Kitrey reports ...") It is true that IDF reports were inaccurate at the beginning; I guess that they relied on Palestinian estimates, not being able to return to the battlefield and assess the situation themselves. Now I need some help... I think that this perspective should somehow be incorporated into the article, but I don't know the right way to do it. Any suggestions? --Gabi S. 17:09, 16 September 2006 (UTC)


 * part of the point of it all is that no-one really knew (or at least publically admitted) that only 50 or so palestinians died, IDF, media or Palestinians. If you leave in the Palestinians' estimates, and say the media said "250 palestinians dead" then it looks like the media were biased and solely relied on either faulty reports. But lets face it, if the IDF and PLO both claim 250+ figures then the over inflation makes mroe sense.... --Tomhab 01:16, 17 September 2006 (UTC)

Allegations of a massacre
After "Rumors of massacres in Jenin swirled through Palestinian communities which were then echoed in the world press for several weeks," the phrase: "pitting world public opinion against Israel" is biased and not properly sourced. The source is from a pro-Israeli group.

Also, this sentence contains Weasel Words:

"There are various journalists who believe that the Jenin Massacre tale is an example of a wider systematic use of lies by Arab propganda throughout the years, such as allegations of massacres during the 1948 war."

And its reference to a pro-Israeli propoganda site is very biased: "...is an example of a wider systematic use of lies by Arab propganda throughout the years, such as allegations of massacres during the 1948 war." —Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.155.165.220 (talk • contribs)

In fact, one could easily say:

"There are various journalists who believe that this Wikipedia tale is an example of a wider systematic use of lies by Israeli propganda throughout the years, such as allegations of terrorism." —Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.152.240.79 (talk • contribs)

Jewish blood incident
Only one partisan source for this incident seems suspicious. When the Urban Legends website [] discussed this incident, they just said that they were reporting that this story had appeared in one newspaper, they were making no claims that it was accurate. PatGallacher 12:18, 6 November 2006 (UTC)


 * The Snopes story is here.. Snopes sort of vouches for the piece, stating that the news story was printed, that author specifically identified his sources, and that the Israeli accounts of Jenin have generally been shown to be accurate, but that they can't specifically confirm this account beyond that.  IMHO, the underlying question is whether the Jewish Journal (LA) is a reliable source or not.  If so, the incident is fair game, if not, not.  Based on the Jewish Journal's self-description, I would say that it is a sufficiently reliable source to make the encyclopedia.  WP frequently cites similar "free weeklies," and the JJ claims to be an award winning LA free weekly.  TheronJ 14:07, 6 November 2006 (UTC)

precursors to the battle
i removed this problematic use of information from the article:

During the same period, hundreds of Palestinians were killed in the occupied territories by israeli soldiers. The UN estimated that 497 Palestinians were killed and 1,447 wounded during the IDF reoccupation of Palestinian areas between 1 March through 7 May and in the immediate aftermath. An estimated 70-80 Palestinians, including approximately 50 civilians, were killed in Nablus. 

end

i'm concerned both with how this nitpicks at the detail of the article and creating bias by adding up to the death toll including the fights but mostly by how it is inserted into the precursors to the battle while it is definately not centered on events of before the battle. Jaakobou 21:51, 17 April 2007 (UTC) ---

Why is this information problematic at all? It is also in other articles about the intifada, and is backed by a official source. I dont wan´t to be biased, but as it is now the part " precursor to the battle" talks only about violence against Israelis. There is no single word to let the uniformed know that violence in this time frame, as in all this whole conflict, has always been used by both sides. If the sentence above is not to the liking of forum members ok, but I think a way to balance this especific part of the article has to be found. ( Rathed - 18 April 2007 )

-- Jaakobou 17:51, 18 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) nice to see you've just joined wikipedia.
 * 2) you should re-read my 2 concerns.
 * 3) if you wish to present a generic death toll across the land, you should work on the second intifada article rather than the battle on jenin.

Best regards ( Rathed, 18 april)
 * 1) Many thanks :) Actualy, been contributing for a long time, mostly on military articles.
 * 2) I did read your concerns. Like I said, I am trying to be balanced, exactly the oposity to biased. The overall palestianian death toll is the period certainly is not "centered" on the episody at hand, but how the israely casualities differ on this? And we do find space for them...If we are going to mention israeli deaths that ocurred before the battle , and outside Jenin, we should at least mention that palestianas deaths also ocurred in the same period. As I said, to give the uniformed reader a fair view.
 * 3) You did not answered any of the points I made regarding the article being unbalaced as it is now.


 * (1) you can add a pre-battle notes if you find something that focuses on pre-battle notes. I don't see how your post emphasized precursors to the battle of jenin. (2) considering that this article covers a blatant libel attempt that failed (see the CNN trasncripts about the mass graves rumors), i don't see how the article is imbalanced. Jaakobou 21:30, 19 April 2007 (UTC)

Jenin battle wasn't even a massacre
The battle in the jenin refugee camp wasn't a massacre. A massacre is when someone comes intentionally killing innocent civilians. What Israel did in Jenin was trying to dismantle terrorist activity. israel iontended to minimize civilian casulties. The terrorists hid themselves and their weapons in a refugee camp so they can get Israel to kill refugees so they can get sympathy form the world amd more Palestinians to hate Israel. if Israel wanted to kill the civilians or anted to bomb the terrorists without caring about the civilians then Israel would have just bombed it. I am not saying that bombing the refugee camp would have been the right descision for Israel to make but Israel risk the lives of their soldiers to minimize civilian casulties in Jenin. Jenin was a battle not a massacre. The world condemns Israel when she defends herself. The Purity of Arms, is in the IDF charter and it calls on Israel to minimize its civilian casulties. We should listen to more guys like Walid Shoebat-Dendoi Monday Apiril 23, 2007 10:06 PM
 * We have "strong evidence" from many sources, amounting to "undisputable proof" that innocent civilians were deliberately killed.
 * Most graphic of all (and nobody can call it "Palestinian propaganda") may be the "Kurdi Bear" testimony published in Yediot Aharonot, Israel's most widely circulated tabloid paper, on May 31, 2002. Moshe Nissim, nicknamed "Kurdi Bear", D-9 operator "I had no mercy for anybody. I would erase anyone with the D-9 ...  They were warned by loudspeaker to get out of the house before I come, but I gave no one a chance. I didn't wait. I didn't give one blow, and wait for them to come out. I would just ram the house with full power, to bring it down as fast as possible. ... Many people where inside houses we started to demolish. They would come out of the houses we where working on. I didn't see, with my own eyes, people dying under the blade of the D-9. and I didn't see house falling down on live people. But if there were any, I wouldn't care at all. ... I am sure people died inside these houses." PalestineRemembered 09:05, 13 May 2007 (UTC)

BBC wrongly quotes the UN report
The BBC (and presumably other media sources) appear to be quite wrong about what is in the UN report "Report of the Secretary-General prepared pursuant to General Assembly resolution ES-10/10" at.

The BBC report quotes the UN as saying "the UN said the overall number of Palestinians killed was 52".

However, examining the report itself we find "By the time of the IDF withdrawal and the lifting of the curfew on 18 April, at least 52 Palestinians ........ were dead" and "Fifty-two Palestinian deaths had been confirmed by the hospital in Jenin by the end of May 2002. IDF also place the death toll at approximately 52".

There is a further problem, since the BBC report is titled "UN says no massacre in Jenin", and I can see nothing of the sort in the report. The UN report refers to "the battle" 6 times and "battle-field" twice, it also refers to "massacre" 7 times.

I would propose that the BBC has failed to reach Wikipedia: Reliable Source in this particular case, and that quotes from the report should take precedence (in fact, the BBC version should not appear). This would not be un-encyclopaedic, since the BBC's own investigation of its coverage of the area in 2006 showed bias in favour of Israel. PalestineRemembered 16:12, 2 May 2007 (UTC)

Intro
Ramallite 15:32, 26 January 2007: The reasons of Operation Defensive Shield are Israeli reasons, not Israeli-Palestinian reasons. The Israelis called it an operation to "crush the terrorist infrastructure"; the Palestinians called it "the Israeli assault". I don't think it's particularly NPOV to describe the Israeli reasoning as fact. This is not to belittle the reasons for ODS, but to make clear that the Palestinians did not see it the same way the Israelis did. It's a neutral phrasing issue....

Jaakobou 21:20, 28 January 2007: '''this is ridiculous, israel went on an operation due to an onslaught of suicide attacks and you want to say that those attacks can't be mentioned in the intro... pure POV vandalism on your part.''' Jaakobou 19:36, 28 January 2007 (UTC)
 * You must not understand English very well. I didn't say you can't mention the Israeli POV, I said it's not neutral to present it as a matter-of-fact. Park3r understood the difference. Do you? Ramallite <sup style="color:DarkBlue;">(talk) 00:45, 29 January 2007 (UTC)


 * I understand the difference between point of view and between baseless accusations of point of view... until you can prove that those people making the attacks who the militant group claimed was their responsibility did not come from the city israel claims they came from, your "alleged" vandalism, shows "personal reaserch" which is not allowed on wikipedia. Jaakobou 08:17, 29 January 2007 (UTC)

Actually, Ramallite, since it was the Israeli forces "on the move" then their reasons are much more germane. The Palestinians do not need to have a justification for staying and defending their territory, while the Israelis do need a justification for invading. For that reason, it seems to me that it is required to present the one side's reasons much more than the other's.

Consider a less emotionally charged incident, the Battle of the Alamo. The Prelude to battle section there goes extensively into Santa Anna's reasons and justifications, without any mention at all of Travis' reasons for investing and defending the fort. The attacker's reasons need to be explained, the defender's don't. This is not PoV, it is simply common sense! --Eliyahu S Talk 13:22, 29 January 2007 (UTC)
 * If the notion that "Palestinians were defending their territory" were allowed in here, I would be much less inclined to object to the language that is being pushed now. Not to mention the original research being introduced that the Palestinians reaction was "inconsistent" or whatever. Is there an actual source that describes the Palestinian reaction as "inconsistent"???? Ramallite <sup style="color:DarkBlue;">(talk) 13:28, 29 January 2007 (UTC)


 * Ramallite, I don't see a problem with a mentioning that Paletinian perception is that they are defending their territory (if you can find a proper link), however, removing the precursors to the israeli operation is far from useful ettiquette for this article.. and you've recieved 2 warnings. i suggest you revert the information back to avoid a deservingly third warning. Jaakobou 13:48, 30 January 2007 (UTC)


 * I don't know what warnings you are referring to. First, you are ignoring what I said about NPOV, each side has its story and you cannot present one side's narrative as fact. SECOND: You have no source for this notion that Palestinian reaction was inconsistent, that is nonsense. You have references attached to that statement, but they do not support what you say about "inconsistent". I have made several attempts to modify this intro to suit your needs, but you just blindly revert every time. This version is not consistent with WP:NPOV and WP:V and will have to be reverted. How about you try to address some concerns instead of blindly reverting? Ramallite <sup style="color:DarkBlue;">(talk) 14:37, 30 January 2007 (UTC)


 * I seem to be having a monologue here. Jaakobou, how can you say to me "i thought you were the one reverting rather than working with others" when I am the one trying to work with you as shown here and you just revert? I will still revert to my version. Second, this source does in no way support the claim that "Palestinians reaction was inconsistent as some denied that those responsible for the attacks on Israel were in Jenin and claimed a Massacre was being commited by Israel, while others gave the city the nickname of "City of Martyrs" for the large number of Palestinan Suicide Bombers emerging from it" - that's rubbish. Third, you didn't answer my question: Are you User MouseWarrior? Ramallite <sup style="color:DarkBlue;">(talk) 04:59, 31 January 2007 (UTC)
 * This is getting very annoying. Now we have "MouseWarrior", "Paul T. Evans" and Jaakobou all reverting this article.Park3r 10:39, 31 January 2007 (UTC)
 * I've asked Jaakobou if he is also MouseWarrior. Here and on his talk page. He has not responded to that particular question, yet. Ramallite <sup style="color:DarkBlue;">(talk) 14:55, 31 January 2007 (UTC)

rest of the talk
Also, there were no "mixed" Palestinian reactions to the Jenin massacre, it produced blanket condemnation by Palestinians. I took out that sentence because that unsourced sentiment was not shown to be related to the contents of this article. If Jenin was actually called "city of martyrs", it was because of those killed there, not for suicide bombers launched from there. No? Ramallite <sup style="color:DarkBlue;">(talk) 15:32, 26 January 2007 (UTC)


 * you insist on showing both bias (OMG! the palestinans saw an israeli offensive as an assault??! no way!) and lack of knowledge on this issue ("there were no mixed reactions"). your initial vandalism in removing anything which might shed light into why israel would "assault" on the poor defenseless "city of martyrs" is exactly the bullshit that encyclopedia's should avoid.. if you don't know the material then butt out and don't destroy the hard work of others who actually do know the material. Jaakobou 16:23, 26 January 2007 (UTC)


 * I would watch my language if I were you. Your edits are uncivil and you are asking for intervention. Ramallite <sup style="color:DarkBlue;">(talk) 16:45, 26 January 2007 (UTC)


 * Also, "showing both bias" as you say is Wikipedia policy. Don't assume to know the extent of knowledge of others. And when you talk about 'hard work' on this page, look at the history. In all, be civil, air your concerns properly, and do not be rude, provocative, and/or disrespectful of me or of WP policies. Ramallite <sup style="color:DarkBlue;">(talk) 16:54, 26 January 2007 (UTC)


 * I do believe that some context needs to be added to the intro. Israel was reacting to suicide bombings (or at least claimed to be, a claim that I would tend to believe in this case).


 * However, the addition of details that are covered in the Defensive Shield article is pointless, makes the intro too long (and the Passover Massacre is already linked to in the infobox). The "City of Martyr's" thing should be removed, unless someone can provide a source.


 * On another topic, why are the civilian casualties not being covered in any depth? Surely there is some information about the 22 civilian casualties from reputable sources? Park3r 16:09, 28 January 2007 (UTC)


 * you can find examples on how Israel knows where the suicide attacks are coming from here:


 * 1) living in jenin.
 * 2) coming from jenin.
 * 3) Jenin was was dubbed "city of martyrs" by Palestinain for 28 succesful suicide assains in the span of 2.5 years Israel totaled it as 34% of all suicide massacre assasinations within' the second intifada. Jaakobou 19:54, 28 January 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) sample of "city of martyrs" use by pro-palestinain reporter takig his story from the palestinians Jaakobou 21:10, 28 January 2007 (UTC)


 * All Israeli government sources, which is fine, but it should be evident that it's one side's POV and not necessarily undisputed fact. Ramallite <sup style="color:DarkBlue;">(talk) 00:45, 29 January 2007 (UTC)


 * Actually, no, Ramallite. The third link is to the British newspaper "The Observer", which is hardly a pro-Israeli source.  Please be factual in your comments, and avoid misleading generalizations.  Misstatements is how the whole "massacre" epithet was applied to this incident.  --Eliyahu S Talk 13:36, 29 January 2007 (UTC)
 * Well don't I feel like an idiot for mistaking one British source for Israeli? Anyway if you read my statement above you'll notice that my pointing to the sources as being Israeli was not to discount them, because I said "which is fine". I think it is misleading of you to portray my comment as discounting Israeli media - and if you were not accusing me of this then I apologize in advance. Are you disagreeing that one side's narrative should not be introduced here as fact? THAT is the essence of what I'm writing, not pointing out what source is Israeli, and what is British, Bahraini, or Bhutanese. Ramallite <sup style="color:DarkBlue;">(talk) 13:40, 29 January 2007 (UTC)


 * Well if something along the lines of "Israel alleged that suicide bombers were originating from this camp" needs to be included, that's fine. There's nothing wrong with that. But that wasn't the content before. As for the 22 civilian casualties (just the dead, not including the wounded), I have no idea why it's not covered, except to emphasize that the number was 22 and not in the hundreds as feared earlier, and thus couldn't be called a massacre. Apparently a 'massacre' is a number somewhere above 23. Ramallite <sup style="color:DarkBlue;">(talk) 16:24, 28 January 2007 (UTC)


 * Israel lost 23 soldiers in the battle. Essentially, Israeli soldiers lost their lives in order to keep the collateral deaths of Palestinian civilians to a minimum. this -> 8,000 Muslim men and boys were massacred by Serbs, Israeli army killed between 3,000 and 4,000 Arabs. - did not happen. Jaakobou 19:45, 28 January 2007 (UTC)


 * This is an article about Palestine and Israel. Why are you bringing up Muslims/Serbs/etc here? Wrong article for that, it's irrelevant. Ramallite <sup style="color:DarkBlue;">(talk) 00:45, 29 January 2007 (UTC)


 * It seemed clear to me that comparisons with other, contemporary "massacres" is a very appropriate point to bring up in a discussion of the appropriateness of the term "massacre". Especially so where the referenced article, in the Christian Science Monitor, was contrasting the Arab, and especially Egyptian, reaction to and perception of the two "battles". --Eliyahu S Talk 13:29, 29 January 2007 (UTC)


 * What is a "massacre"? What is the magic number that qualifies a killing from being officially designated a massacre? Ramallite <sup style="color:DarkBlue;">(talk) 13:54, 29 January 2007 (UTC)
 * Just for the record, and I'm not taking sides here, the Passover Massacre which is linked to from this article as the cause, had 30 civilian casualties and is called a massacre. Of course they were not "collateral damage", but targets of the suicide bombing. Interesting how this article seems to have become about the media controversy over the term "massacre", and less about the battle itself.Park3r 15:15, 29 January 2007 (UTC)
 * I don't want to take sides either ;) But I will say that using phrases like "collateral damage" insinuates that civilians were not intentionally targeted (I'm not referring to your usage above, Park3r). Rightly or wrongly, that opinion is not shared by the Palestinian victims, according to Palestinian media/publications. I agree with Park3r that this article seems to have turned into a terminology war. That is not the intent of this article. Ramallite <sup style="color:DarkBlue;">(talk) 15:21, 29 January 2007 (UTC)
 * I don't think the intro is the only problematic part of this lengthy apologia, but certainly bald statements about Palestinian inconsistency, for example, don't help. Palmiro | Talk 00:15, 1 February 2007 (UTC)
 * The "Boston massacre" was 5 killed. While they were technically "innocent victims", they had chosen to be on the street demonstrating. Unlike the refugees in Jenin, 100s of whom died in their houses (not that you'd guess that from reading this article). See for the nearest thing to a determined attempt by international observers to document this event. PalestineRemembered 17:47, 19 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Passover Battle? // Liftarn 10:48, 7 June 2007 (UTC)

Intro Part 2
Folks,

I've tried to work in some of the previous concerns. These have been reverted by some without any explanation and without addressing the reasons why the other version won't work because or NPOV and original research. Shamir1 added that Human Rights Watch reported that Palestinian militants had "endangered the lives of Palestinian civilians". According to the source, this is absolutely correct. But the source also says that HRW "has so far found no evidence that Palestinian gunmen forced Palestinian civilians to serve as human shields during the attack." This is contradictory to what the article said before (prior to Shamir1's addition), so I removed it. Ramallite <sup style="color:DarkBlue;">(talk) 03:03, 1 February 2007 (UTC)


 * i do believe that the population was not forced to do anything there - see the CNN transcripts link:


 * "And all of them, almost all of them, told us stories of mass graves, of bodies being loaded into trucks and driven away. Of bodies being left in the sewers and bulldozed."


 * doesn't sound to me like they were all, almost all, forced to spread libel. Jaakobou 21:57, 17 April 2007 (UTC)