Talk:Battle of Kampala/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 19:27, 25 July 2019 (UTC)

Damn Indy, long time no see right? If you do not mind then I'd review this one? Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 19:27, 25 July 2019 (UTC)
 * Any progress on the review? -Indy beetle (talk) 20:15, 5 August 2019 (UTC)
 * Not really I was on holiday for two weeks I will now start with my review. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 18:27, 15 August 2019 (UTC)

More to come I'll continue the source's, image's and infobox's part. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 15:21, 18 August 2019 (UTC)
 * and captured the city of Kampala, Uganda Current countries shouldn't be linked.
 * Unlinked.
 * Okello fled in a helicopter and flew to Sudan Same as above.
 * Unlinked.
 * was sworn in as President of Uganda Link the title.
 * Done.
 * In August the NRA launched a series of coordinated attacks American coordinated.
 * Fixed.
 * In the autumn of 1985, the NRA laid siege Try to avoid to use seasons in the article.
 * Revised.
 * Museveni President and Vice-President of Uganda Link Vice-President of Uganda.
 * Done.
 * At the same time, the NRA's 9th and 19th Battalions Link both the 9th and the 19th Battalions.
 * Though as large combat formations they could technically qualify under notability per MilHist guidelines, I don't think there's enough info about them, especially outside Kainerugaba's book or the engagements they participated in, to make it worth red-linking them with the expectation that they'll become articles in the future.
 * including the Former Uganda National Army (FUNA) and the Uganda Freedom Army Link both the Former Uganda National Army and the Uganda Freedom Army.
 * Done.
 * The NRA's 1st, 3rd, 5th and 11th Battalions moved Link all the Battalions here. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 11:48, 16 August 2019 (UTC)
 * Same as I wrote above applies here.
 * while the 7th Battalion traveled down Hoima Road American travelled.
 * Britified.
 * was hauling a 37 mm anti-aircraft gun No English units?
 * I was under the impression that using metric units was sufficient for weapon descriptions.
 * Okello fled via helicopter to Sudan with several members Unlink Sudan because I think MOS tries to tell us we shan't link current countries.
 * Done.
 * fortifying the crossings of the Nile to prevent Unlink Nile because of common term.
 * Done.
 * He soon joined the fledgling National Resistance Movement American fledgling.
 * Revised.
 * which constituted the second largest ethnic group in the UNLA Second largest needs any hyphen.
 * Done.
 * Suspected to harbor NRA fighters American harbor.
 * Fixed.

Images
 * Looks fine.

Sources
 * Ref 23, no link and needs an access-date?
 * I retrieved that through my university's database (and, if I recall, specifically through ProQuest), which can't be linked to (since the whole network is password protected). And since its an archived version of a print copy and there's no link to maintain, there is no point in adding an access-date.
 * Does that means that the rest of the refs in this source review are also archives in ProQuest? Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 14:39, 21 August 2019 (UTC)
 * I have just finished adding access-dates to all of the sources I retrieved from normal links online. The rest have come from ProQuest or other databases as archived copies. -Indy beetle (talk) 21:28, 21 August 2019 (UTC)


 * Ref 26, Same as above and needs an access-date.
 * Ref 27, needs an access-date.
 * Ref 32, same as above.
 * Ref 42, same as above.
 * Ref 43, no link and needs an access-date?
 * Ref 45, same as above.
 * Ref 46, same as above.
 * Ref 49, same as above.
 * Standardise ISBNs, some of them have hyphens in their ISBNs and some don't.
 * Hyphenated.
 * Hyphenated.

Infobox That's anything. Place it on hold. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 10:56, 21 August 2019 (UTC)
 * Are there links for all the commanders?
 * None that I know of.
 * Are there links for all the units?
 * None that I've found.
 * I think I've responded to everything. -Indy beetle (talk) 22:28, 21 August 2019 (UTC)
 * Okay I think this one is ready to go, I'll pass it. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 08:04, 22 August 2019 (UTC)