Talk:Battle of Kleidion

GA Review
Hi, I was going to give this a thorough GA review along the lines I usually do them. However I have discovered after reading through that the only major obstacle to this article's promotion is the quality of the prose, which has significant problems. If you like, I can copyedit the article myself for you and then provide a a review based on any remaining issues? Let me know.--Jackyd101 (talk) 09:17, 8 February 2008 (UTC)


 * I will be grateful if you copyedit the article. Thank you very much. --Gligan (talk) 09:04, 9 February 2008 (UTC)


 * OK, Some comments on the copyedit below.
 * "the Kievans were defeated by the Byzantines after the fall of the Bulgarian capital Preslav in 971 the Byzantines and Bulgarians had been at war for decades." - I can't make out what this means. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Jackyd101 (talk • contribs) 14:03, 9 February 2008 (UTC)


 * I tried to say that as of 1014 the Byzantines and the Bulgarians had been in war for decades after the fall of the Bulgarian capital in 971 (which occurred after the disastrous Rus' raids between 968 and 971 and the subsequent war between the Kievans and the Byzantines). --Gligan (talk) 14:41, 9 February 2008 (UTC)


 * I have copyedited the article, and soon will provide a list of recommended changes. Before I promote this to GA however I'm going to ask for a second opinion on this regarding the prose however as I am not sure that I have sufficiently improved it.--Jackyd101 (talk) 20:35, 10 February 2008 (UTC)


 * I'm sorry for the delay, I've been a little bit ill and haven't managed to get to this yet. I promise I'll provide a review in the next few days.--Jackyd101 (talk) 21:53, 12 February 2008 (UTC)


 * No problemo: ) : ) : ) --Gligan (talk) 20:05, 13 February 2008 (UTC)

GA Notes

 * 1) Why are the first and second notes in the lead? There is really no need to source things in the lead but since the sources are in Bulgarian (I assume), I don't know what they say. In any case, sources should only really be used in the lead for direct quotes, everything else should be referenced further down the article, where it appears in the text.
 * 2) All sources should be after punctuation. Preferably this means a full stop but a comma is OK. I moved a few but missed others. Please make sure this is complied with.
 * 3) All web sources should have last access dates and publication information as per WP:CITE or Template:Cite web. Please make sure they all comply.

Otherwise I think the article is in good shape. I obviously cannot read the sources but it seems that the English ones are OK. As I heavily edited the prose I no longer feel qualified to judge its standard and so will apply today for another reviewer to check over this. I should think they will have further comments.--Jackyd101 (talk) 16:36, 14 February 2008 (UTC)
 * I tweaked a few MOS things, but have a couple of comments. First, in the Bulgarian sources, I take it the "c. " is page number?  If so, I think it should actually be "p. " or "pp. " (for ranges).  Second, you might want to look at the transliteration and latinization of the Cyrillic text, as PMAnderson commented on in the Sumuil of Bulgaria FAC.  Of course, that was FAC not GAN, but worth considering.  Carré (talk) 09:23, 15 February 2008 (UTC)


 * I am personally happy for this article to pass, provided jackturner3 is happy with the state of the prose and any other comments he may have. I leave the eventual passing or failing of this article up to him. Nice work everyone and thankyou.--Jackyd101 (talk) 02:21, 17 February 2008 (UTC)

GA Review

 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * Done to three reasonably short paragraphs. Also removed material with inline citations from lead. --Lantonov (talk) 08:01, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
 * Done to three reasonably short paragraphs. Also removed material with inline citations from lead. --Lantonov (talk) 08:01, 16 February 2008 (UTC)

Translated sources titles into English and transliterated from Cyrillic to Latin. Transliteration was done according to the official transliteration decree of 2006 and thus may be different from some earlier transliterations done by various transliteration schemes, some of them using diacritics. --Lantonov (talk) 08:54, 16 February 2008 (UTC) I would like also to transliterate the inline citations but short of time now. --Lantonov (talk) 09:00, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * Done. The inline sources too. --Lantonov (talk) 09:55, 16 February 2008 (UTC)


 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * jackturner3 (talk) 21:05, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * jackturner3 (talk) 21:05, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
 * jackturner3 (talk) 21:05, 15 February 2008 (UTC)


 * I dropped Jackturner3 a line a few days ago about this but he hasn't responded. Since I'm happy with the article and it looks like you have addressed all the issues he brought up, I'm going to pass this myself. If you (jackturner3) object strongly then please take it to GAR.--Jackyd101 (talk) 09:21, 29 February 2008 (UTC)

Errors - Cantacuzenus, Skylitzes, Dyrrhachium
Explaining some of the changes I made.

Cantacuzenus and Gregoras were given as sources to this statement: "The wide valley of the Strumitsa River was a convenient place for attack and it had been used by Byzantine forces for this purpose in previous years. The Bulgarians disposed a strong guard to keep the pass safe." I think that Mitrev will suffice. There is no chance that either John VI Cantacuzenus or Nicephorus Gregoras had written anything about the battle of Kleidion, since their chronicles cover events from the 13th and the 14th century.

As far as I know Skylitzes doesn't mention July 31 as the date of Samuel's death. I rely on the Bulgarian translation in Greek Sources on the History of Bulgaria (in Bulgarian), Vol. VI, p. 284.

Bulgaria lost Dyrrhachium much earlier than 1018. This is mentioned in the article itself. John Vladislav was killed while trying to recapture the city (cf. Runciman).--Dobrin (talk) 21:45, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

Map doesn't match text
The text describes the main part of the army stopping at the wall while a general loops around their flank. The map shows ... well not that apparently. There is a flanking movement on the left but it is by someone else. And there appears to be another movement on the north that is not mentioned at all. Later there is an ambush described as taking place at the siege, but on the map the town in question isn't even on the map where the ambush is marked. What's the story here? Maury Markowitz (talk) 12:45, 29 July 2016 (UTC)
 * I am not sure if you mean this map (shown to the right): First Bulgarian Empire (976-1018).png
 * ...as far as I can see the map does not mentioning the battle of Kleidion, just a battle won by the Byzantines (blue cross) on 29 August 1014 (not 29 July 1014) at the place indicated by the coordinates of the article (...?) Soerfm (talk) 11:26, 29 July 2019 (UTC)

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Battle of Kljuch
There is no logic in naming this battle as "battle of Kleidion". Both now and in 1014 the battlesite was in Bulgarian teritory so one should use the original name. It is not true that "Kleidion" is the medieval name of the village. It is just the greek transcription of the original one. 31.182.223.191 (talk) 19:24, 22 July 2022 (UTC)

Battle of Kampulongu
Kljuch is not an correct name. All Byzantine chroniclers mentioned the Kampulongu name. It is today in Bulgaria but it was and it is a n area of Aromanians and Kimbalungu was Campulungu in Aromanian. Probably, some nationalists do not want to admit byzantine names. 79.118.83.247 (talk) 09:58, 5 January 2024 (UTC)