Talk:Battle of Lang Vei/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk) 19:39, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.

Disambiguations: Two found and fixed. Jezhotwells (talk) 19:52, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

Linkrot: I am getting "Server Application Unavailable " on the links to http://tinhdoanquangtri.gov.vn This may be a temporary problem. Jezhotwells (talk) 19:57, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
 * That website is working fine in my part of the world, so I have no idea what is happening there.Canpark (talk) 13:59, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, I guess that it just isn't accessible from the UK. I shall assume good faith. Jezhotwells (talk) 14:50, 5 March 2011 (UTC)

Checking against GA criteria

 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * ' 'To accomplish those tasks, Willoughby had at his disposal one Montagnard, four South Vietnamese rifle companies, and three combat reconnaissance platoons.'' One Montagnard waht? Company, platoon? ✅
 * Hre tribesmen, ?? What are these? Montagnard? Needs explanation, I feel. ✅
 * Otherwise prose fine, accords with MoS
 * I have clarified the first part by adding 'company', and added a link to the article on the Hre people of Vietnam because they were different to the Montagnards.Canpark (talk) 13:59, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * References appear OK, assume good faith for off-line.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * Through and focussed
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * Licensed and captioned
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Just a couple of issues, noted above, on hold for seven days. Jezhotwells (talk) 03:06, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, thanks for the fixes, passing as GA
 * Thank you very much.Canpark (talk) 14:23, 6 March 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, thanks for the fixes, passing as GA
 * Thank you very much.Canpark (talk) 14:23, 6 March 2011 (UTC)