Talk:Battle of Logorište

Confusing lede sentence
I don't feel comfortable undertaking a GAR on this article, but I want to comment on the lede. Sentence-by sentence, with my comments in italics: See why I'm confused? How about re-writing it to say: "The ZNG had captured the JNA Logoriste barracks on xx October 1991 and was under siege by the JNA which was seeking to retake them." – S. Rich (talk) 19:06, 16 February 2014 (UTC)
 * "The Battle of Logorište was fought just to the east of Duga Resa and south of Karlovac, Croatia, on 4–6 November 1991, during the Croatian War of Independence."
 * No problem.
 * "It was a clash between the Croatian National Guard (Zbor narodne garde – ZNG) holding the Yugoslav People's Army (Jugoslovenska Narodna Armija – JNA) Logorište barracks under blockade started in the Battle of the Barracks on one side, and the garrison breaking out of the barracks, supported by JNA and SAO Krajina units deployed to lift blockade of Logorište barracks and other JNA garrisons in Karlovac."
 * Very complex. Does it mean the ZNG was holding – as in they had captured – the JNA barracks? If one side was "holding the barracks", which side was blockading them and which side was trying to break out of the barracks and which side was trying to lift the blockade?
 * Good point, thanks for the observation. Clarified now.--Tomobe03 (talk) 19:33, 16 February 2014 (UTC)