Talk:Battle of Nanjing (1853)

Quality issues
Major issues in grammar, many spelling errors have been fixed, however, word choice in multiple places is questionable. Article's original author should verify what original intention was regarding certain parts of article.


 * Yes, I took a look and started to work over it, but quickly found I couldn't even tell what the meaning was supposed to be. For instance, in the first paragraph, what is this supposed to mean? "The Taiping Rebellion changed Nanjing named to be the Tianjing(天京) deal a capital and beginning occupied 11 years till recovery by Xiang Army in June 19 1864 ." And there are no citations.  It would be great to have an article on this topic, but what we have here is not useful. Bertport (talk) 17:36, 12 April 2009 (UTC)