Talk:Battle of Orbetello/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 19:57, 24 June 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Infobox

 * No issues

Lead

 * The Battle of Orbetello (also known as the Battle of Isola del Giglio)[3] was a major naval engagement of the Franco-Spanish War of 1635, → End the first sentence here to comply with WP:BEGINNING
 * ...when another Spanish army led by Marquis of Torrecuso and Duke of Arcos which had come from the Kingdom of Naples across the Papal States, → Add comma between "Arcos" and "which"

Background

 * For this purpose was gathered in Toulon a fleet... → Fix prose of this phrase

Battle

 * Fix the sentences where the sentences start with numbers that are not spelled out

Aftermath

 * Fix the prose of the image description in this section to make it more understandable