Talk:Battle of Rethymno/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 21:44, 20 December 2020 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:44, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Golla's German Fallschirmtruppe 1936-41 (Rev ed)- Its Genesis and Employment in the First Campaigns of the Wehrmacht Might be useful for a German perspective
 * That looks interesting. It would help with Battle of Heraklion too, which is currently languishing at ACR. It is expensive though, and my local libraries were useless even before Covid. I shall consider the e version.


 * Brown is only the author of the introduction. The Admiralty's Naval Staff is the actual author
 * Ah! Fixed.


 * No DABs
 * Images appropriately licensed. Suggest moving the air drop photo to the infobox
 * I will if you insist, but IMO that leaves the rest of the article looking a little bare, image wise.
 * I think that the infobox image is the most important one in the article. And surely you can find other photos from the AWM or the IWM photo collections?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:11, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Done. Gog the Mild (talk) 19:26, 16 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Hyphenate well armed police
 * Done.


 * Link field gun
 * Done.


 * Why the quote marks around the hill names only on first use?
 * That's the usage I was taught and am used to seeing. I could remove the initial quote marks?
 * Not a usage that I'm familiar with but it's fine--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:11, 16 January 2021 (UTC)


 * They Allies had all but?
 * Oops. Fixed.


 * Short but sweet--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:31, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks Sturm, all points addressed. Gog the Mild (talk) 18:17, 16 January 2021 (UTC)